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Posted: 14 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: deepti_sajan

wooooooooooooooooooooooooooow

another SS
hat's off manji👏
padke edit karungi😉

waitinggg Deeps!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: SajanRox11

Heyy Nisha!!!
Awww!! Love Ur Comment!
Nd seriouslyy?? its already in ur list of favourites??!!
Wow!! Yay!!👏👏👏 Im soo happyy!!
Thank youu Soooo Much!!
nd haan yaar! pakka ab update karungi! mere ff main se ek aur kam hone waala hai! so thats why!
Ab jaldi update karoongii!! promise!!
I dont want ur head to break lol!!
Nd Gunjan ke dress ka poora thing ull get to know soon and even ur confusioins will be cleared! this was just the beginning dear!
Aage aage dekho hota hai kya! nd this is going to go damn fast as its an SS!!
Love yaaa!!


Yup.I m really into this ss or else i would never force u too update it 🤔 🤣
I really loved ur reply 🤗
I m waiting eagerly!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: nishi_sajan


Yup.I m really into this ss or else i would never force u too update it 🤔 🤣
I really loved ur reply 🤗
I m waiting eagerly!😳

Kal tak update karu??
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: SajanRox11

Kal tak update karu??


Take ur time!😳 I will wait.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
edited my reply on pg 10😉

Edited by deepti_sajan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: deepti_sajan

wooooooooooooooooooooooooooow

another SS
hat's off manji👏
padke edit karungi😉

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hey manji❤️,
tum kitne ff's likhogi yaar😲.........tum kabhi thakti nahi kya?????😕.
but no matter what i love to read them😉
awesome concept!!!!!!!!!
totoally loved it😳
seems very interesting😉....
aisa idea kisikobhi nahi aaaya😊.......
it is very different from ur other ff's.........actually u know wat i love to read like those type of stories.....different situations mein hum sajan ko dekhenge to acha lagta hai.........not always excel college
coming to first part:
totally loved it😳...
as usual tune bahut acha likha👍🏼
wow sajan have a son named aditya😍....i love the name.........
bahut suspense hai story mein😉.............
i loved the bonding of gun n aditya🤗.....
n OMG aditya luks like sam.......hayye mein marjaawan😳.....
awwwwwwww adiya is soooooo sweet, obedient, understanding..he cares for his mom a lot....gun ke liye movie bhi dekh raha hai😲........
OMG aditya calls Sam a freak😲😲......shocking.....
poor sam😭..........it's so sad to see him in that condition😭......🥺
i just can't see him hurt🥺
do continue soooooooooon😈......can't wait for next update😈
n thanx for the pm!!!!!!!

Luv ya
deepti🤗


Heyy Deeps!
Thank Youu yaar!
Well Im planning to cut down on my ffs!
Well.. I knoww har story excel main achhi nahi lagti!
I hope you like this one!
Nd yes will continue sooon!
Love ya!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67

Hey Guys!

Im back with another update of this SS!

Sorry because of busy schedule i am updating so late! Had planned on updating it on Thursday and its Saturday now! Didnt get time to write..

Well.. I was really happy to see that all of you'll liked the concept soo much!! Really glad! Plz do give your comments... Its really valueable..!

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The next day Singapore...

Samrat's flight landed and he and his secretary got out of the airport and went to the hotel..Samrat called the company he was doing the deal with and the secretary told him to come tomorrow morning.. and tomorrow morning they would have their first meeting...

On the other hand.. Morning at gunjans house was different.. Both mother and son were sleeping.. Gunjan didnt have work today so she was relaxed and adi was happy because he didnt have to get up early! They both woke up around 10.30 and then adi helped gunjan make breakfast... omelete and cornflakes with milk.. Gunjan hated Cornflakes but still had a bowl to show aditya that it was a very improtant part of breakfast and they couldnt skip it..

Aditya had to listen to his mom without any arguement because then only she would make his favourite dish for dinner...Then again was Hindi Movie time! Their Sundays always went watching old hindi movies.. gunjan wanted adi to know his mother tongue well.. She didnt want adi to become a britsher and so she taught aditya hindi every evening and even gave him homework! Aditya studied in the best school and had many friends there.. His best friends name was Sameer.. he was from delhi and now he had and his parents stayed next to their house..

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That afternoon gunjan switched on the webcam as every Sunday she used to look at her family.. and talk to them.. She logged on her skype ID excited and saw mayank online.. She called adi and they sat and talked..

G: Hii Jiju!!

M: hii gunjan! Hey champ!

M: hi jiju!

A: Hii Mausaji!!

M: so gunjan kaisi ho? Waha koi problem nahi hai na?

G: bilkul nahi jiju! Nd aapko poore ek hafte baad dekh rahi hoon! Sach ab aap main woh baat nahi rahi! Aap budhe ho gaye ho!

M: WHAT?? Oh please.. khud ko dekho.. 11 saal ke bache ki ma bann gayi ho!

G: oh please.. aap 15 saal ki larki ke papa hai! Aur ab aap 38 ke ho gaye ho! Gosh!

A:Wheres masi?

N: Hey champ.. (a voice came from behind) apni masi ko yaad kiya?

And she pushed mayank out and sat down..

N: hi gunjan! Kaisi hai?

G: hi di.. main theek hoon! Aaplog kaise ho?

N: im fine..

Adi talked for sometime and then went out to play..

N: woh gunjan bauji --

G: Di.. meri bauji se last week baat hui thi.. its ok.. unhe yaha aneki zarurat nahi hai! Main khud india aungi kuchh dino main.. (well now everything was fine between gunji n bauji!)

N: SACH? (Happier than ever!)

G: dii kuchh mahine baad.. Ill take a vacation.. Ab woh mujhe pareshaan nahi kar sakta..

N: woh..? kya woh tujhe contact kar raha hai?

G: kaash dii.. kaash kiya hota kabhi.. well.. ab humari life main uski koi jagah nahi hai!

N: Gunjan tu bilkul sahi keh rahi hai! Par pata hai woh mumbai wapas kabhi nahi aaya??!!! Weird na!

G: I dont care di.. woh jaha bhi rahe.. mujhe koi pharak nahi padta!

N: thats good gunjan! Nd im sure woh jaha bhi rahega kabhi khush nahi reh payega!!

G: di i guess mujhe chalna chahiye! Aaj adi ke liye halwa banaoogi..

N: tumlog khush toh ho na?

G: haan di.. bohot!

N; achha laga sunkar! Chal phir byee!

G: bye di..love youu!

N: me 2!

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That Evening Samrat sat in his hotel room and asked his secretary to order dinner... His dinner came..

S: kya mangwaya hai?

Sec: Sir as usual.. Roti.. and daal..

S nodded.. he sat to eat..

S: Tumhe bhook lagi hai?

Sec: No sir... but aapke liye hotel waalo ne ek sweet dish bhi bheja hai.. Gajar Ka Halwa...

S: wwhhaat?

Sec: Umm.. haann.. its complimentary!

Samrat wasnt listeningg... He just remembered His CHASHMISH making Gajar ka halwa.. He remembered sitting on the kitchen counter staring at gunjan make it!

S: chashmish... khushboo bohot achhi hai..!!

G: samrat abhi ruko.. abhi maine kesar nahi daala!

S: Mere mooh main toh abhi se hi paani aa raha hai!

G: bilkul bache ho tum!

S: sirf tumhare saamne! Tum jab mom ki tarah daatti ho toh aur bhi hot lagti ho!

Samrat went to touch the halwa..

G: SAMRAT! Garam hai!

Removing his hand!

.... Samrats thoughts were interupted by his secretary....

Sec: sir aap khaoge?

S: hmm.. kya?

Sec: Gajar ka halwa sir...?!?!!?

S: umm.. nahi.. I hate it...

Sec: ohh.. theek hai..

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"Gajar ka Halwa?!!!!! Yumm Mom! Youu rockk!" screamed adii... And attacked it...

" dhyaan se samra—

She looked away.. She had just taken her name..She could remember when samrat was sitting and staring at her making halwa.. Adi realised it.. But he still attacked..

"Ouuchh..!!"

Gunjan came out of her thoughts.. and took his small fingers in her hand ...

"Itni jaldi rehti haina tumhe khaane ki.. jala diya na apna haath.. chalo dawai lagadoo..!!" she screamed...

"Mom... Aap gussa karte waqt achhi lagti ho! Jab aap sad hoti ho tab nahi.."

Gunjan hugged adi! He had realised that she was sad!

They ate their dinner and went to bed early as next day gunjan had an important meeting and aditya had school!

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The Next morning..

Same Scene at gunjans house.. waking adi up for school was a headache for gunjan but she somehow had fun doing it everydayy! They had breakfast together and gunjan dropped Adi to school in her car... (which she had bought with her salary as adi had insisted on buying a car!)

She reached office and looked at it.. "SpinTex.." That was the name.. and it was owned by Mohit Sehgal...(jus a name)

Gunjan went to her cabin and got her things ready for the presentation she had to give today...

Samrat reached SpinTex at 10 sharp.. As he was known as the Mr.Punctual! he couldnt bear someone being a minute late.. (because that had changed his life) and so he was always on time for everythingg!

In the conference room Mohit samrat and the other board members were sitting.. Mohit called someone and told her to start the presentation..

Gunjan was nervous. She hated talking in public but she had to over come it everytime.. She was mohit's favourite! As she was hardworking.. Mohit thought that she was the backbone of the company and did all sorts of work in the company.. From managing projects to supervising.. and even looked after his office in his absense!Mohit and Gunjan were friends..Atleast for gunjan they were just friends. She walked slowly into the hall and all eyes where stuck on her..

Samrat was angry because it was almost 10.30! he was irritated.. but then he looked up to see.. GUNJAN... And she was already in shock and glaringg at him in surprise..

Samrat saw a Gunjan..bold and without specs... wearing a knee length purple dress..She even wore a coat on top of it.. She had changes soo much! But one thing that hadnt changed was her beauty! He could just blankly stare at her... All his anger vanished and he was lost.. he couldnt believe that gunjan was in front of him..

Gunjan looked at samrat.. he had specs and he looked quite old.. he wore a white shirt with a black suit! Black nd white.. (that shows samrats colourless life) He looked all serious.. he had changed alot! He din seem the samrat gunjan knew at all! He seemed more mature .. but his charm was still the same.. it still attracted gunjan towards him.. She just didnt know how to give the presentation in front of samrat! But she knew she had to prove that samrat didnt make any difference in HER life!

She broke the eyelock which had lasted for 2 minutes.. She started her presentation...In the beginning she stammered a little but then seeing her boss glaring at her in surprise and samrat smiling at her she started the presentation ... the whole time samrat smiled at her! He didnt hear a word.. he was just soo happy to see her and he was lost.. completely! Gunjan didnt look at him the whole time.. she just kept looking the other way.. and the presentation was over..

M: So mr.shergill.. phir deal final?

S came out of his world and looked at mohit blankly and then turned to gunjan..

she was standing next to mohit and looking down..

S: jab aapki employee ne itna achha presentation diya toh main mana kaisekar sakta hoon?

Mohit put his arma around gunjan and hugged her! Gunjan just hugged him with one hand..

S: (thinking) was he her husband?

M: Gunjan ki toh tabiyat bhi kharab thi aaj! Isliye beech main thoda..

S: nahi nahi.. she was great!

G: thank you sir.. im glad you liked it..

And she left the room...

M: Im sorry i just dont know whats wrong with her!

S: oh no problem.. So who is she?

M: Oh she.. shes gunjan.. why?

S: no i was just asking.. she looked quite happy...

M: well there isnt any reason to be sad i guess.. she is well off!

S: oh.. ok.. where does she live?

M: im sorry??

S: no im sorry.. just a random question..

M: we dont really give personal details of our staff.. You can go ask her! Her cabins on this floor, third door to your left!

S: thank youu!

And samrat went...

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Precap: Samrat Meets Aditya...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#68

yey me first!

awsome update manjari
yes sajan meet again
now i have to know wat is the big mystry any why they are seperated
i love their meeting sceen samrat just staring at her
and then afterwords asking mohit about her
cant wait them for actully talk
precap sounds so intresting
cont soon luv tanzeel
Edited by hiiiiiiiiiii - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
res!!!!!!
yaayyyyyyyy me 2nd🥳

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hey manji🤗
sorry for commenting late.......as u know the reason
coming to update:
awesome update!!!!!!!!!!
totally loved it!!!!!!!!
as usual tune bahut acha likha👏
loved the bonding between aditya n gunjan😳
loved gun n adi's convo with mayur..........
wow everything is between gun an adi that's nice!!!!!!
poor gun use adi ke liye cornflakes khana pad raha hai
wow yaar adi bilkul sam pe gaya hai😉
the flashback was superb😳...........
kya baat hai mohit aur samrat dono hain😉
the first eyelock between sajan was sooooo cute😳..suprising tha but it was nice
omg sam understood mohit as gun's husband😲.....
interesting precap.........omg sam meets aditya😲
can't wait for it😍
do continue soooooon 😈
hey by the way soch rahi aaj sirf promo likh du........then ill update tommorow....... wat do u think??......sam may meet gunjan in first part itself😉....bahut saare suspense bhi khul jaayenge😆......
n thanx for the pm!!!!!!

Luv ya
deepti🤗
Edited by deepti_sajan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
res!!!

edit

awesomeeeee updt loved it do continue soon
Edited by -mysterygirl- - 14 years ago

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