SS-- A Second Chance!

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Hi...!!

Well I have 4 ffs which i write atm.. so i just thought of writing a SS for thge first time.. So Hope You Guys wont be mad at me for not updating Sajan Love Saga and writing a new SS.. Well par Kya karoo.. yesterday while talking to Radhi Di.. I got A brilliant Idea Which i shared With her and she improvised on it! So this is a joint SS!! Lol! Sounds funny! Par Still.. We Will Try to Entertain You guys! So I Am writing the 1st part! Its an SS so we decided to skip the CS.. the characters are the same as they are in MJHT!

Oops Sorry Forgot To mention! This is a SaJan SS! And As You Read Ahead you Will Exactly Get Whats Going on! So I Wont waste Your time and just shut up and start with the Story!

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A New Morning.. Singapore!

Tall Buildings.. Busy Streets.. Singapore is a city with mostly chinese people. The main language was although English! No one cared what people did and where they went! Everyone had their own lives and never interefered in anyones life.. Exactly A Place Gunjan Was Looking For... Gunjan Bhushan..She Has been in singapore for almost 12 years now.. Works in a Multinational company and Is a Managing Director there! She is doesnt talk mucha nd prefers to keep to herself.. Doesnt have Many Friends in Singapore.. She Just has a job and is well off..

Now Focussing On a house We here A voice...

"Utho na...!! Tum abhi agar nahi uthe toh I promise yeh jug abhi main ulta karne waali hoon...!!"

That Was Gunjan! With her hands on her hips and an irritated face.. She Was frustrated and shook him..

"Momm.. please dont do this to me on Saturdays!"

"dekho champ get upp.. ab mumma ko irritate mat karo..!!"

"Uhhnnn..." and he got up and sat on his bed.. He looked sleepy and irritated. You Know how a kid feels if he is woken up early on weekends!

"Thank youu..! finally Tum uth gaye.. Dekho mumma ko office jana hai.. So please dont be naughty aur Nanny Ko tang mat karna!"

"Yaaa Mom.. aap kitni boring ho.. kaam kaam kaam kaam! Kabhi toh masti kiya karo.."

Gunjan Stared at her 11 year Old Son... She Always hated The Fact that Aditya was so much Like his father! The same eyes.. Same complexion.. and more over same attitude in life! But yes The Only reason she was alive today was because of him! He was her Life and she loved Her Son More Than Anythingg..

She remembered the time when she had come to know she was pregnant and her father's reaction to it...

XXFlashbackXX

Bauji: Beta.. Please.. yeh baat yahi khatam kar do.. have an abortion.. For my sake..!! warna hamare parivar ka naam mitti main mill jayega..

Whenever she remembered these words anger filled in her and she could think about anything else..

G: Nahi bauji.. Mera faisla nahi badlega! Yeh mera bacha hain!! Aur isse koi chhoo bhi nahi sakta!

B: Gunjan samjho meri baat agar duniya ko pata chala toh'

G: I dont care... Par bauji mujhe aapki chinta hai! Isliye Main singapore ja rahi hoon.. wahi par main job kar loongi and aapki izzat kharab nahi hogi! Khush?

B: par beta'

G: bauji.. MAIN ABORTION NAHI KARUNGI!! KABHI NAHI! BAS!

She had screamed and slammed the door behind her! And after that She gave birth to aditya and came to singapore! In This Her Jiju and Di helped her alot! Nupur stayed with her in singapore for a year and helped her settle down into her new life! She loved them..

XXENDXX

Suddenly She Realised aditya staring at her! Blankly!

"MOM..."

"Im sorry! Ill just put your breakfast.. ok?"

"Ok.. ill just go brush and come!"

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Gunjan Went To her Kitchen...she made their breakfast and put the table.. Adi was already there.. he grinned On seeing His favourite dish on the table and came running!

"Oh Mom.. I love youu.. your the best cook in the whole world.. yumm.."

Gunjan Remembered Something with each and everything Adi said.. It reminded her of HIM... The guy Who Left her.... Who she had loved more than anything! She hated the name.. she hated his face now! But she still couldnt! God had given her all the pain he could by giving adi almost the same face as HIM... She felt disgusted even taking his name.. or even thinking about him! He was the person responsible for her Son being teased in school... as he didnt have a father! Even Adi never mentioned it.. he knew his mom would always be hurt on taking HIS name or even talking about HIM! So he just kept all that to himself.. He was much more matured than kids of his age! He had to understand much more than normally kids have to!

Gunjan blamed herself for that... But then coming out of her thoughts she focused on her breakfast!

"So where do you want to go today?"

Aditya's smile widened and he said'

"Mom.. Can We Go For Guzaarish? Plz.. I really want to watch this hindi movie..!!"

Gunjan was silent.. but then without a second thought she said...

"ok.. sure.. Then we sit at home and watch a movie! Ill get it on my way backk!!"

Aditya: (thinking) Mom I know you love hrithik so thats why I just wanted to cheer you up!Not that I have any interest in these stupid Hindi Movies!!! I saw your pillow today it was wet!! But dont worry.. I will try my best not to let you remember that Freak!! (thats what he called his dad) Well.. after all your such a nice mother! And Im waiting for the day when your pillow is no longer wet and when you smile and enjoy to the fullest!

"Love Youu mom.." he said hugging her! Gunjan hugged him back!

She always Thought That Adi was the best son anyone could have ... that was probably because he had actually understood her problem soo well and at such a young age! She remembered the time She had told him about HIM.. He was just 9 years old!

Adi: Mom.. Who is My Dad.. (he had asked.. this question had shocked gunjan!)

G: Why suddenly?

A: I want to know! My friends always ask me but i never have an answer!

G: His name is Samrat.. Samrat Shergill...

That Day gunjan told aditya what all she had gone through and how his father had left... It was All So sudden that she couldnt manage her life so she came to singapore to start a new one!

(Gunjan had slightly edited it because adi wouldnt be happy knowing that there were some people who didnt want him in this world..)

Aditya had understood completely and then never asked her anything as such ever again!

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...Cut To India...

Delhi. Another multinational Company!

Workers working and chilling out.. People going from here to there.. And suddenly everything was still!! There was No noise.. Then Enters A Man.. With a serious look on his face.. With no expression.. Specs.. A coat and a shirt! He looked straight..All the workers nervously wishing him good morning and he shifting his glasses up and walking ahead! He paid no attention to anyone...he entered his cabin and sat there..

He sat in his office and started his work.. every one was scared of him! People wondered why he had such an attitude... Then Suddenly his phone rang..

S: hello?

Man: Mr.Shergill aapki kal ki Singapore ki tickets book ho chuki hai!

S: thank you!

Man: My pleasure sir!

Samrat kept the phone..

He called someone..

Lady: Good Morning Son! Aj Mom Ki yaad kaise Aayi?

S: Mom main kal subah singapore ja raha hoon.. meri packing karva dena..

Sm: ya sure honey..

S: Bye..

His phonecalls never lasted for more than 25 seconds! His new secretary who was seeing all this asked him...

"Sir Aapne Itni Jaldi do do calls khatam kar liye! 25 seconds se zyada aap phone par baat nahi karte?"

Samrat was silent..

"Just.Do.Ur.Work!!" he said in a rude way...

He was just sad in life.. life had given him nothing at all.. and now he expected nothing from it! He Just indulged himself in work and did nothing else.. He was tired of life but just somehow he couldnt die.. he had to find out something... Before his soul can rest in peace he needs to know the whole truth! He needs To know WHERE she Went? Who Did She marry??

He remembers her father's words..

Girl's Father: "Tumhe kya laga... woh poori zindagi tumhara intezaar karegi? Im sorry Mr Samrat Shergill.. She has gone.. Nd woh kabhi tumhara chehra nahi dekhna chahegi! Woh apni zindagi main khush hai uski life spoil mat karo!!!"

He wanted to know that couldnt She give him a call once before getting married.. couldnt she just think about their love once!! ONCE... and tears came into his eyes...! they were soo happy but God Took their happiness away! He hated god! And all his belief was gone!

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This Was their Life! This was their condition.. what will happen when they come face to face? Will they Ever Be able to be one again.. Find out by reading this SS...
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hey Guys!
I just hope you liked the idea.. this is the basic idea.. Please do comment and let me know! Suggestions are always welcome and I would love it if you told me where I was lacking and how I could improve!

Love,

Manjari

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Posted: 14 years ago
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INDEX

Part 1-- Pg 1
Part 2-- Pg 10
Part 3-- Pg 18
Part 4-- Pg 28
Part 5-- Pg 37
Part 6-- Pg 46
Part 7-- Pg 54
Part 8-- Pg 62
Part 9-- Pg 69
Part 10-- Pg 76
Part 11-- Pg 88
THE END
Edited by SajanRox11 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy manjariii

yipeeeeeeeeee 1st 2 cmnt on ur new ss..
nwaz congooo
u knwww..i simply luvvvvvvved ur start..
it z sooooooo damn interstngggg...
in short terrifically intersngg
cont soooooooooon guyz

n thnxxxxxx 4 d pm..
Edited by ar_sajan4evr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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heyyyyyyyy manjari!!!!!🤗🤗
first of all im really veryyyyy sorrryyyyy for commenting soooooo late!!!!!! u kno d reason na! i came back 2home 2day morning....
n btw tum kitna ff likhogi yaar??????? u're never tired?????🤔🤔
well wo teri pbm hai, mujhe to tere ffs padhne mein bahut maza aata hai!!!!!!😉😉
n coming 2ur SS on SAJAN, it ws A LOVELY IDEA!!!!!👏👏👏👏
i simply loved it!!!!! tere ffs se bilkul alag hai....n sabse achhi baat to ye hai ki isme mayur nahi hain!!!!!
look m dancing!!!😆
anyways, starting padhkar hi maloom ho gaya tha ki samrat rude aur arrogant hoga, seriously!!!!
n gunjan is mother 2 11years old aditya, lovely!!!! hes such n obedient n loving son!!!!
n gunjan is also very caring mother.........loved her convo with aditya!!😳😳
n omg adi refers 2samrat as FREAK?????😲😲😲
tht shocked me!!! 11saal ki umar mein to i didnt evn knew tht any word like freak exists!!😆
nyways jokes apart, gunjan-aditya scene ws very beautifully written!!! keep it up!!👍🏼
n coming 2samrat, i ws literally hurt 2see him in such a condition!😒
aaaaawwwwwwww hes living such a painful life!!!
nw m really very curious 2know ki aakhir aisi kaunsi pbm thi jiski vajah se sajan alag ho gaye??????
this ss is very interesting......n as usual tum achha hi likhogi....😉😉
nyways do cont.soooooon.......n sorry, isse bada comment nahi likh paungi...bt next updt se u'll get long ones!!!😉
loveeeeeeeeee uuuuuu!!!!!!!!🤗🤗
Edited by ria_lovesajan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow!kya concept hai dear! Gunjan mom of a 11 year old! Any ways, great going dear, 4 ffs n an OS! Al r amazing, the concept f ur SS n da title 2 gud.. Nw m eager n desperate 2 kno wat happnd in da past dat led Gunjan n Adi gt separated frm Sam.. Gunjan Adi convo was realy nyc.. Do cntinue soon dear:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dr.Zombie

wow!kya concept hai dear! Gunjan mom of a 11 year old! Any ways, great going dear, 4 ffs n an OS! Al r amazing, the concept f ur SS n da title 2 gud.. Nw m eager n desperate 2 kno wat happnd in da past dat led Gunjan n Adi gt separated frm Sam.. Gunjan Adi convo was realy nyc.. Do cntinue soon dear:)

Hii Adii...!!
haha!! Adii!! LOL!
Thank youu Soooo Muchh!!!
You are the 1st to comment!
Im glad you liked the idea!
Love ya!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i m sooo srryyyyyy manjariiiii............😭😭😭😭

ho can i forgot dis mindblowinggggg update...............😃😃😃
d concepttttt is so elegant n gracefullllll dear..............👏👏👏👏
lovingg samrat n gunjan's character.............❤️😍😍
do continueee soon.............😉😉😉
lovelyyyyyy concept seriouslyyyyy..............😍😍😍
thnxxxx for d pm.............😛😛😛
love surbhi...........😳😳
tc.............🤗
Edited by surbhi_005 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome concept...really different
loved the first part😊


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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey manjari thx 4 updating yar realy awesum yar sry couldnt gv u long cmnt u knw d reason
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WONDERFUL!!:)
Really liked the whole concept..........⭐️
Gunjan and Samrat away from each other and both are sad!!:(
Adi is so much like me!

Edited by AttractiveAdya - 14 years ago

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