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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: bluedreamz953

Hey Ash!

Sorry yaar!
I haven't been commenting properly or regularly these days!
Well,I just read the last two parts..Woah!!
Yeah,that's all I can say coz I'm speechless...
I just hope Maan doesn't be angry for long!
Thanks for the update
Love you
Please update soon

its ok buddy😃 the imp thing is u liked it thats what counts😃, maan will take his sweet time if geet let him😉😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mamon.moon

fantastic updates. its becoming more and more interesting. waiting eagerly 4 the next part and ofcourse abt the past of sam and shuriya. continue soon...............

thanks i try to be unpredictable and make it intersting😆😆, past of sam n shuriya will take a bit back stage as i am concentrating on maneet😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: punjabi.princes

great update!

loved how geet used her innocence in white, to turn maan on!
hope he would understand her
cont soon!

yeah she seduced him in geet style i dont think any short dressing would have this much effect....yeah both need to understand each other
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashleydevlin

its ok buddy😃 the imp thing is u liked it thats what counts😃, maan will take his sweet time if geet let him LOL😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: BadGirlKiss

I still think Maans love is not strong or that innocent like Geet. He really need to show his love more like a 3rd person (sam) telling Geet what to do when he is angry or happy. Geet have been with him since young. Geet should know beter then sam. Sam always intifear. I do like her. But I think maan should tell her to keep out of his and geets relationship. And top of it maan always helps her... He gives sam more piroity then geet. I feel sorry for Geet. She is just too inicent.

I still think Maans love is not strong or that innocent like Geet
he really loves her but his love is different as he is a guy and he express it in his way.
He really need to show his love more like a 3rd person (sam) telling Geet what to do when he is angry or happy
he was trying to open up geet messed it up big time......sam is maan's friend and she kind of guess his mood .
Geet should know beter then sam
geet and maan grew up as enemies who lived next door to each other while sam and maan r best friends who at one pt. lived as a couple so she must know a few things better.
Sam always intifear. I do like her. But I think maan should tell her to keep out of his and geets relationship. And top of it maan always helps her... He gives sam more piroity then geet. I feel sorry for Geet. She is just too inicent
sam interfered bc she doesnt want maneet separated bc of shuriya, maan helps her bc it has bcome a habit, sometimes she doesnt need it but he steps up , he never talk abt. geet and himself, she guess it and she never would tell geet anything which maan asked her not to do like shimlaa visits and phone calls ....geet is his no. prority but he has others ppl in his life as well, but if its between geet n some 1 else he will pick geet but will geet do same?
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Posted: 14 years ago
what its truth😉😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
heyyyy Ash🤗
I Don't Need To Tell You How Much I'm attached To This Story & FF.
I Want To Dwell Myself In Your FF Coz It's Absolutely Amazing.
owowww
awesome update😃
love it
Absolutely Awesome & Fablicious.
You're a GEM WRITER👏

Ash my dear plz update fast...............
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -sofiya-

heyyyy Ash🤗
I Don't Need To Tell You How Much I'm attached To This Story & FF.
I Want To Dwell Myself In Your FF Coz It's Absolutely Amazing.
owowww
awesome update😃
love it
Absolutely Awesome & Fablicious.
You're a GEM WRITER👏

Ash my dear plz update fast...............

😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
i will try to update
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Ash ,
It had become an addiction !!
me sitting in office and reading the FF ....ur too good 😊👏👏👏
wen u planning for next update yaar !!!
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Posted: 14 years ago


Part 39


geet came back to her senses slowly and looked at Maan who was breathing deeply and looking down at her. Geet did not know what to say this was really a different experience , very good but different, they had made passionate love before but he had never acted so out of control before. And to top it this was the first time, he was not showing anyy tenderness after ward.


She looked into his eyes,they were full of passion, she closed her eyes.


He moved the hairs off her face, she trembled at his touch and opened her eyes. His gaze was possessive, he cupped her jaw,''who taught you all this?''


geet was just able to utter a shaky,''what?''


he moved off her and touched her anklet and then tok it off and dangled it from his hand producing chan chan sound.


Geet,''you like my anklets, I have seen you looking at them.''


Maan looked at torn shalwar and undergarment and said this,''and what about those.''


Geet,''i saw a girl wearing it at uni, so I got the idea from there.''


Maan looked at her lips and rubbed his thumb on lower one. Geet's breathing increased, he slowly bent and took the bottom lip between his lips and sucked on it, then bit it then soothed with his tongue.


Maan turned her and removed the hairs from her back exposing her back to him, she was still wearing the shirt, he touched his lips to her back side nibbling on the skin exposed there, he bit at several place marking her.


He took off her shirt, geet tried to turn but he put his body pressure on her and kissed her neck then whispered in her ear,''do you think that you can contro me with this?''


geet thought hazely what is he saying, it was difficult to concentrate.


He kissed her back then turned her to face him.......she looked up at him with desire, he kissed her more....and kept kissing and touching her until she was nearly mad with desire and then, they were again one but he never let her reach her climax........making her desire go up again and again and then, again bringing her back....she had tear of frustation in her eyes....Maan,''never try to control me again geet never, I can make you beg me at this moment always remember that, s**is not used to control each other in a relationship, don't turn it into a game because I know much more abt. It then you can even guess,....geet was heedless to what he was saying, her thoughts centered on her body....he let her have her sweet climax and only when she was satisfied gave into his own urges............later much later his words truly sank into geet's mind


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shuriya looked at the project papers and asked his sectrary, send these emails to geet, she will be handling the project.

The secretary but she doesn't have the experience to handle it. Shuriya just looked at him, he got the hint and moved to do the bidding.


Shuriya called the lawyer and said, how much longer?


Lawyer,''you have been more than generous but still the terrorist attack will be in their favour just wait a bit and let her make a really big mistake.''


Shuriya,''i have arranged it, I don't leave anything to happen, I make it happen.''

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