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Posted: 14 years ago
The Wedding Deal - FF

Hey guys! I just wanted to tell you that I will be ending this FF today.
But, I will be starting a new FF which will be based on Drashti and Gurmeet and how they fall in love with each other. I got inspired by Shiveni to start an FF about Drashti and Gurmeet because she has one as well. But my story will of course be different 😉.

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hapter 24


Geet and Maan came back from the yacht early in the afternoon. Geet insisted on seeing Muskaan because she was worried for her. Geet was a mother after all. Geet was in the kitchen chopping vegetables for dinner that day when the doorbell rang.

Geet: "Maan! Meera, someone is at the door" she called out chopping the vegetables.

But the door bell kept ringing. Geet waited for a while chopping the vegetables slowly to see if someone opened the door. But the door kept ringing constantly.

Geet: "Ye Maan or Meera kaha gayab hogai hai" she said in her mind, abandoned the half chopped vegetabes, and ran over to the door.

Geet opened the doors of the Khurana Mansion. She saw something she never expected to see. She just stared at the people she saw in front of her. Tears started to form in her eyes.

Maan came jogging downstairs to see why Geet called out for him. He started to give is stern lecture while walking over to Geet.

Maan: "Do you know, I was doing some important work. It was a very important deal and I was in a video co --"

Even Maan looked shocked. He just stared at the people he saw. He opened his mouth, but then closed it again, trying to find words. He then looked at Geet who stood still as a statue. A tear slid down her cheek.

Maan: "Geet" he said tapping Geet's shoulder

Geet didn't move. She didn't blink either.

Maan: "Geet" he said tapping Geet's shoulder harder

Geet still didn't move.

Maan: "Geet!" he said now holding her by the shoulders and shaking her.

Geet regained her senses and she blinked her eyes. Which caused the tears which were about to fall to run down her cheeks.

Geet looked at Maan

Geet: "What?" she said then looked back at the people which were standing them

Geet pressed her lips in anger.

Geet: "I'm sorry, I don't know you" she said and was about to slam the door on her family, when Daarji said something.

Daarji: "Sorry" he said suddenly

Geet said nothing and was about to close the doors when Maan stopped her.

Maan: "Look, just listen to him for once. They have come all the way from Hoshiarpur to see you. Please?" he said

Geet then stepped aside to let Rajji, Daarji, Rano, and Mohinderlaal come in. The family sat down on the sofa. Daarji made space so Geet could sit down beside her but Geet decided to sit on a seperate Sofa. Maan sat beside her.

There was a sudden silence in the room.

Geet: "What are you doing here?" she asked, breaking the silence

Daarji: "Geet, it took me ages to find you. And when I have finally found you, I need to say something" he said

Geet looked at Daarji. Daarji continued.

Daarji: "Geet, I'm sorry. I should have supported you when you were pregnant. I shouldn't have let you go. I should have kicked Brij out right that moment when he decided to kill your baby. I was stupid Geet. But you gave me a lesson. You lived your life. You married, and now your happy. Your independant now. I'm sorry Geet. Please forgive me" he explained and sighed.

Geet then looked at Rano, her mother.

Rano nodded, and smiled sadly.

Geet looked at Rajji.

Rano smiled and Geet smiled back

Daarji: "And this time" he said

Geet looked back at Daarji

Daarji: "And this time we want you and..." he said looking at Maan

Maan: "Maan" he said and smiled

Daarji: "You and Maan beta to get married again in front of us. With our blessings"

Geet couldn't take it anymore. She let it spill. She started crying and went over to hug her whole family. She sprinted upstairs to get Muskaan. And she came downstairs again with her baby and held her over to Daarji.

Daarji: "My granddaughter!!" he exclaimed and held the baby in his arms. Each member of the Handa family took turns to hold the baby.

Afterwards, Geet packed her bags and headed over to Hoshiarpur. Leaving Maan and Meera alone in the Mansion.

Maan looked at Meera. Meera looked at Maan. Then they looked ahead of them.

Meera: "I guess we have a lot of arrangements to do then. Your getting married tomorrow" she said, winked and walked off.

...The Next Day...

Geet looked at herself in the mirror, smiling. Rajji then put the dupatta on her head and smiled. (http://images.orkut.com/orkut/photos/OgAAAOzpXFzU37iOchz-AawsOHfZF2BBY93oxuVpRPN2l_8tUDBSIbk2ygbcHvo2k3oTQoL1lfd7ly_eBkB9GKGUQoAAm1T1UJ2GZv_v5KbuEMXykQssbOe_-BrB.jpg)

Rajji: "Sonee lagrahi hai tu" she said

Geet smiled and looked down feeling shy.

Maan on the other hand was downstairs getting really impatient. He wanted to see Geet. He hadn't seen her for a day and he was already so impatient.

Maan was lost in his thoughts when he heard the hall go quiet. He looked up, he saw her.

Geet was walking slowly downstairs accompanied by Rajji and Geet's mother. Geet looked at Maan and then looked away shyly.

Maan was looking at Geet very intently. His mouth was in a shape of a perfect O. She looked stunning.

The priest did whatever was needed to do and their marriage was complete. They were reunited as husband and wife... Again.

Geet's family blessed her and Geet and Maan were in the car waiting for their car to arrive at Delhi. The car arrived and Meera welcomed them with Yash by her side. Who had finally arrived from that long business trip.


Geet's family blessed her and Geet and Maan were in the car waiting for their car to arrive at Delhi. The car arrived at the Khurana Mansion after a few hours, and Meera welcomed them with Yash by her side. Who had finally arrived from that long business trip.

The Suhaag Raat was very intense. As Geet liked to describe it. Maan was always good at being romantic 😉

...15 Years Later...

Muskaan: "MOM!!!!!!!!!!!!" she shouted out

Geet and Maan came running in the kitchen

Muskaan: "C...C...Cockroach" she said pointing at the tiny cockroach on the floor, still in afraid.

Geet: "AAAAAAH!!" she screamed.

Maan rolled his eyes and put his hands to his ears. Once Geet stopped screaming, he put his hands down.

Maan: "Muskaan, you've definitely taken after your mother" he said and picked up the coakroach and threw him out the window.

Ishaan: "What the hell happend" he said rubbing his eyes sleepily

Maan: "Your mother and your sister are scared of a cockroach" he said and Ishaan and Maan broke into a laughter

Muskaan: "God Dad, your 40 years old and you still work like a robot" she said, and Geet and Muskaan high fived each other and broke into laughter.

Maan and Ishaan rolled their eyes.

Muskaan: "By the way Mom, why is there a huge age gap between you and Dad? Don't you mind?"

Geet: "Nothing matters except for love in a husband and wife's relationship" she said and smiled

Ishaan and Muskaan smiled and nodded in approval. Maan took Geet's hand and they both held it and looked at their two children happily.

I hope you enjoyed the last part of The Wedding Deal - FF. I feel so sad ending it here 😭
You must be thinking, why a sudden end? Well, I just decided to end it. Maybe a Season 2 will come out. I don't know yet, but keep your eyes peeled for my new FF about Gurmeet and Drashti. I also need ideas for a new title for it. So help me guys here!
Namaste, Salam, and Bye Bye for now 😊

*Watch Geet Hui Sabse Paryee Monday - Saturday at 9:30pm to see the real story of how Geet struggles in her life*

Sameeha x


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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh wow that was someeeeeeeeeeeeeeee short FF!!! hahahaha
luved it tho and yes i was shocked reading the title - My eyes were like growing in the biggest O shape u cud think of
haahahahahaha but i knw wat u mean..................im sure u have a whole bunch of ideas ready to implement on ur next FF - which im gathering is on GurTi.....hahah hmmmmmm.......titles eh.....wellll i duno how ur really gona conceptulise(is that a word) ur FF
so perhaps sumting like
the unforseen
mahi (since they luv that bg music lool)
Maaneet se Gurti tak
hahahah^^^^^^^^^^^^^i luv that 1 personally
lool
erm erm erm i shall write more if i find anymore
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing ending :)
Please PM your New FF.
Please and Thank you 😊
Edited by GEETOdhaniLover - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome...love it..
supreb ending..
thank you so much..
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Posted: 14 years ago
really loved the end we want season 2 plzzzzzzzzzzz
and plz start the new ff soon
i wanted to know where muskan was when maan and geet got married again
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ending
can't wait to read ur next FF... pm me forsure when u start:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks Sameeha .

Lovely FF enjoyed every part of it.

Do pm me with your next FF as well
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb , mindblowing ending
come up with a new one soon
cheers
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwwwwwww....it was so sweet..she reunited with her family and u showed a leap with her kids..but they still in love as much they were before if not more...lovely end..sad to see it end but i loved ur FF
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh no.............. u ended the FF. this was the best FF!!

i'll miss reading this FF.

i loved the ending!

greatttttttttttttttttttttt update

lovely FF!

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