'We always have a choice!'-Maaneet Ch16, Pg28 - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
Nice one...though there is not much progress in the story...its still goin good...
waiting for the next part lets see what happens :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
that was a hope filled part
loved it
hope maan will win geet's trust soon😳 n beat the hell out of dev😡
can't wait to see them falling in love
plzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: -shabnoor-

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Nice one...though there is not much progress in the story...its still goin good...
waiting for the next part lets see what happens :)
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lol I agree there wasn't much progress in this part but I felt it was important to understand just how effected Geet is by circumstances- shall we call it a filler haha!

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Paloma x
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Paloma_D

lol I agree there wasn't much progress in this part but I felt it was important to understand just how effected Geet is by circumstances- shall we call it a filler haha!

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A filler ?? yeah maybe.. :)
..but then yeah even that's right we had to know how it affected Geet...well not only Geet but even Maan......

do update soon....

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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
awesome update
loved it
loved when maan said I will free you Geet
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
Well I have written the next chapter, however inspiration was hard to draw out. Take a look and let me know what you think- I am not a sensitive soul, so dont be afraid lol!

Chapter 7

The next day, with the resolution to get things sorted, Maan went to see his grandmother''Dadima, Dadima, Da'' He yelled as he ran through the large living room. 'Maan beta why are you yelling- I am not deaf yet!' She laughed as she came in front of him. 'Dadima, I need your help, I need you to give Geet a job, I must free her, she cant stay there any longer''

'Beta please calm down, who is Geet?' Questioned the regally dressed lady. Maan sat his grandmother down and awkwardly explained how they met and how he had to offer her some stability before she could ever be free of Dev. 'Dadima, I wont let Dev destroy another person, I wont let him torture another soul!' He rambled on. Tears filled her eyes as she listened to how life had not favoured Geet, how she was forced to live a nightmare. Dadi knew that for her grandson this was a lot deeper than just helping Geet. This was about Sam- the one he lost, the one who slipped through his fingers. 'Why are you involved in Dev's case again, do you think that is wise?' Dadima asked whilst lovingly holding her grandson's arm as if to absorb his pain. 'Dadima I am fine, please don't worry for me!' Maan stated.

A part of Dadima was glad to see her grandson being affected by something again- he was finally beginning to feel. Maan had spent the past few years of his life running away from any emotion, leading a cold, isolated life, vowing to never become attached to something that could hurt him. He had cut himself off from everybody else in his life- anybody who had ever meant anything to him was pushed out of his life. 'Dadima, are you listening me?' Maan questioned his distracted grandmother. 'Yes beta of course I am but Maan you must realise that you cant make her accept your help, she seems to be very strong willed''

'No Dadima she will listen- I know it. I just have to make sure that she has a job and'' 'Okay, okay Beta, she must be something special to have you so excited' she said with a wink, trying to lighten the atmosphere. 'Dadima stay focussed it is nothing like that, I just want to put Dev away so that I can finally move on with my life,' exclaimed Maan whilst running a frustrated hand through his hair. 'Okay my dear tell her that I have a job for her as soon as she is ready, but Maan please be careful with her, she has endured a lot. She is likely to be rather sensitive!'
'Of course Dadi, I understand.' With a smile on his face he hugged his Dadi, 'Thanks Dadi, you are the best!' He kissed her on the cheek and went to his room and got ready, he couldn't wait to tell Geet the good news. Dadima was once again left to worry about her grandson, 'Will he ever find true happiness?' She questioned,

Geet was putting on the final touches to her make up and wore a deep purple lengha this time. The skirt hugged her curves perfectly and the top which had slight embroidery around the neck and sleeves, embraced her bulged parts as though a second skin. She pinned her hair up, revealing her flawless back which could be seen through the stings on her top. She was just about the place her dupputta when the door opened and in walked her knight. He stopped and quickly looked down allowing her to place the dupputta. 'How are you?' he asked abruptly, trying to tame his sudden arousal. 'I am okay.' she said. He looked up into her eyes, he was seeing something different today, a new emotion, but what he thought. Silence filled the room as she went and sat on the bed.

'Maan about yesterday, you don't have to worry- I wont hold you to anything!' She whispered looking down and playing with the corner of her dupputta. 'Geet, I will end this, Dev can no longer keep doing this, he has been free to hurt girls like you for far too long, I wont let him get another one.' He closed his eyes- as if in pain. Realising that he may be giving too much away he composed him self and continued. 'I just need your help, then I will be able to put him away for a very long time.' He was now sitting next to her, holding her shoulders. His eyes once again captured her attention, she listened to every precious word that he spoke.

'But Maan' She tried to speak however he cut her off by placing his finger on her lips. Geet's feminity was suddenly awakened to Maan's masculine touch, desperately trying to calm her erogenous urges she got up and moved over to the door.

'Don't start again'I have spoken with an associate and she said she will give you a job whenever you are ready!' He couldn't tell her that it was his grandmother who would help. In the short time that he had known her, he had seen and felt (remembereing the slap a smirk came to his lips) her stubbornness, he couldn't risk her not accepting the help.

'Maan' she said . 'How can I, once she finds out about me, about what I do''

'Geet, she knows everything and still feels that you deserve a proper chance in life!' he said whilst going over to her.

'Maan how will I ever thank you?' She said whilst moving to kiss him. Maan quickly moved his face, 'No Geet, what are you doing?' he angrliy questioned.

'I am just thanking you, you have done so much for me, it is only right that I do something for you!' She said whilst trying to hold his hand. 'Geet a simple thank you will suffice!' he shouted

'Do you see Maan, I don't even know how to behave, how will I fit into society, I have forgotten who I am!' she said with tears forming in her eyes. 'Geet you will learn, it is not that hard when you have a pure heart like yours.' he stated while looking deep into her eyes- as if talking directly to her heart. 'God are you finally forgiving me is this your angel- will he really help me? Her mind questioned.

'Right Geet, if all this is agreed, I need to explain to you the plan of how we will arrest Dev,' Maan stated, as he sat on the chair by the dressing table. He needed to move away from her; she was effecting him, the intimate environment was toying with his emotions. Finally regaining his mind's balance; he explained the whole plan to an ever apprehensive Geet.

'Geet please don't be afraid, I will be with you the whole time, I wont let anything happen to you!' He stated trying to reassure her. 'Geet if you don't have any questions, I guess I should be leaving.' A part of him wanted her to ask him something just so that he could spend some more time with her. However Geet understood what she had to do and with that Maan took to leave. As he moved toward the door he heard a small voice behind him'

'Thank you'

A smile spread over Maan's face and Geet was left to ponder what she would do with her future. For the first time after a long time she was beginning to feel hope.

She awoke the next morning to a mix of emotions, nervous yet confident; she knew the plan would work as she had began to have faith in Maan. She was scared for her future, whist feeling excited at the prospect of being free at last. Geet got ready as Maan had told her too and whilst waiting for her Sire to come, she prayed, hoping for everything to run smoothly,

'Babaji'please watch over us today and give me strength and courage!'

Precap: 'Darling,' He said pulling her hair and whispering into her ear, 'what did you think- I will let you go so easy, you think that you are smarter than me?' With that Geet felt the zip of her dress coming undone, a cold hand began to burn her bare back and his lips travelled her body!

So there it is!
Paloma x
Edited by Paloma_D - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
Wow first to comment! yahoo!
Woah I'm so happy that Maan will help her get out of his miserable life. That precap is scary though...please post the next part soon to ease my mind :-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: pushpi

Wow first to comment! yahoo!

Woah I'm so happy that Maan will help her get out of his miserable life. That precap is scary though...please post the next part soon to ease my mind :-)

Aww thanks for the comment! I scared myself with this precap- I was at the gym and this sudden idea came. I wasnt sure if I wanted to alter the story line but couldnt help it! I will update as soon as inspiration hits😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
hi... jst came across ur ff..
its superb, loved it... d story is so different...
plzz add me in ur pm list.... thnx..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
Aww that was so sweet of maan and hope he can heal her and make her live her life again and ooh wonder what dev did to sameera and ooh the precap wonder who he the guy is anyways great update and continue soon 😊

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