'We always have a choice!'-Maaneet Ch16, Pg28 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Here is the next part- enjoy!
Chapter 4
His eyes were so deep, like pools of pleasure that she could swim in forever! Something came over her and she looked down unable to take his piecing gaze. 'Why did I do that, I never normally have a problem looking men in the eyes, what is so different about him?' she questioned under her breath. He turned and closed the door behind him. He paused whilst looking at the door, 'Oh she is beautiful, why is such an angelic creature here, why is she doing this work?' He couldn't understand anything, why did he care about her reasons for doing this, she was nothing to him. She was a criminal participating in questionable acts and she should be punished. 'No but those eyes, so big, so beautiful, so innocent' he said to himself.
He turned back to her and sat on the bed in front of her. He ever so gently lifted her chin with his hand. This time she would not make the same mistake, she looked past him and said 'What would you like, you can have anything you want Sir' He simply starred at her in awe, she really is so beautiful, so simple, so delicate, he was lost in thought''Sir, Sir are you there.' He was unresponsive so Geet moved closer, avoiding his eyes she touched his hand, he quickly pulled it away as if being scorched by her touch. He came out of his thoughts and shouted 'what are you doing, how dare you?' Geet pulled back shocked, 'What, is this not what you have come for? This is what you all want!' There was no bitterness in her words, she simply stated it as a matter of fact, the man was shocked. She again touched him, this time on the face, still avoiding his eyes. Feeling his stubble aroused something in her. Oh how soft her touch was, so pure, I could live for that touch, he thought. 'What is wrong with me!' he questioned himself, now he was angry, he grabbed her hand and twisted it around her back hurting her, his eyes now red with anger.
'Oh so you like it rough, that's okay I just wasn't prepared!' She said as she moved her free hand to again touch his face. What was with this girl, how can someone so simple looking be so brazen, he thought. He threw her wrist down and walked towards the window. Geet sat there confused, what was with this man, could she not even do this much anymore, it was all she was good for and was she failing at this too? With all these questions in her mind she went up to him and put her arms around his waist and said 'Come on Sir, just give me a chance, I wont let you regr'' He turned quickly his lips brushing her forehead. A shocked Geet nearly fell with the force of his turn. She felt two strong hands wrap tightly around her waist and she looked into those deep, dark eyes once again. She felt safe, safer than she ever had before. The man quickly stood straight and Geet adjusted her clothes. She went back over to the bed. 'What is going on, what does he want? She sat there confused.

'What is your name?' he asked.

'Did I just hear right, you want to know my name?' she carried on' 'Why would anyone want to know my name- they never have before,' she asked herself confused. He watched her confused expressions, he was mesmerised by her innocence. He quickly snapped out of it and said 'If you are quite done talking to yourself would you care to answer me?'

'Sorry what did you say?'

'Your name dammit!' he exclaimed. 'Dusht, so now he is shouting'

'What did you say?' He questioned angrily.

'I, I said my name is Geet.' and she looked down at her hands which clutched her dupputta- why am I so nervous?

'Geet, such an innocent name' he said under his breath. 'I can see why that's your name, such beauty, such'' she blushed red and looked down, she could hear his every word. 'You don't have to say these things, I am already willing,' she whispered whilst cutting him off. 'GEET' he exclaimed. 'I said it so I mean it, I know I don't have to say it!' She blushed a deeper shade of red, to the man's amusement. After a few moments of silence she looked up and hesitantly asked 'so Sir what is your name, if you don't me asking.' 'Maan' he quickly answered again looking deep into her eyes.

Well there it is...hit the like button if it lived up to expectations!
Paloma x
Edited by Paloma_D - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
great update.... really interesting... i wish he saves her from dev's clutch..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Okay i m liking dis first meeting...... Hmmmmm....... Update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow..so it really was maan...getting a feeling he'll rescue her, maybe he is here to uncover the scam and all the illegal work goin on...an angel in disguise.....
I really like such stories where the girl does get justice, so this trafficking and all is so very common and so many innocent girls are victims of it and people like dev....should be punished...

Great goin !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Aww what a sweet update and Woop they've met and I was like no when the update just finished so I want more this story is really interesting wonder who maan is anyways great but short update and continue asap 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ur ff is quite different
poor geet😭.....hope maan save her from this hell n give her wat she deserve😊
is maan a cop or something....plzzzz I just hope he is n that ba***** dev should rot in jail forever
plz add me to ur pm list n update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Here is the next chapter...enjoy!
Chapter 5
His mind started to run fast, he wasn't meant to tell anybody his name, he is undercover, what if she tells somebody- although deep down he knew she wouldn't, however he still had all these questions running through his mind. He turned to Geet and saw her mouthing his name, she had a cute yet sultry smile playing on her face, he was mesmerised once again.

'So I guess we should get to it, you haven't paid all this money to know my name.' She quickly removed her dupputta and hung it on the bed frame. His eyes travelled her, moving from her wild curls, to her deep yet sad eyes- his heart ached- was that pain he saw? He moved on to her rosy plump lips, then down to her bare neck and further. Seeing her heaving chest he closed his eyes and turned. 'Why am I so affected by you' he mumbled to him self. 'Oh come on baby you are a man there is nothing wrong with this, I am here to serve you!' He couldn't believe such an angelic face could have such thoughts, why did she think like this, she should be dreaming of her knight coming along to sweep her off her feet like all the other girls her age. Maan himself did not believe in such things, at the age of twenty four he had learned that life was not like the movies, love was merely a word thrown around aimlessly.

She walked up to him and started kissing his neck, he closed his eyes, feeling her breath trailing his skin. Her hands travelled up his arms, she moved her mouth ever so slowly to his ear and placed a bite when he was least expecting it. Shocked by her audacious act he turned and pinned her against the wall. For some reason that she couldn't understand, she enjoyed this, she loved his touch, she didn't mind that he was holding her a little to tight. He knew that he was hurting her but his need to control his passion had to be expelled somehow! 'What are you doing here, so, so, so cheap these acts of yours,' he was struggling to string his words together. Geet opened her eyes and was furious, how dare he use the word cheap, she was doing this because she wanted to, and anyway''I can ask you the same question, why are you here SIR?' she remarked. 'Isn't this what you paid all that money for?' she gathered all her might to push Maan off her. He almost fell to the floor. She ran to the post of the bed, looking away from him and embracing the post she closed her eyes. How dare he judge me- who is he to me! She thought inwardly 'Look Geet I am not here for what you think, I want to save you and the others from these vicious men who think they own you!' She turned around surprised, 'Wha, what are you talking about?' She looked at him eyebrows raised, unable to comprehend what he was saying.

Maan sat down on the bed and gestured her to come and sit next to him, she did as he said and looked eagerly at his face avoiding those alluring eyes. 'I am an undercover agent- well actually the chief, and I am running an operation to put Dev behind bars.' she sat starring at him. He felt uncomfortable with those beautiful eyes examining him so closely but he put this to the back of his mind. He continued 'I am simply here to gather information on his crimes and stop these despicable acts!' Before he could continue he felt a tight slap across his face. 'How dare you, these, these acts as you say, pay the bills'' she paused for breath 'I have nothing, I am nothing and if you get rid of Dev then how will I look after Rajji?' She turned away, she had vowed never to let any man see her tears, she would not give them the satisfaction. Maan shocked, went over to comfort her, he wanted to tell her that she did have other options but she wiped her face with both hands and pushed him away, 'Don't you dare'LEAVE or I will tell Dev everything!' Maan was shocked, what is this he thought, 'I am trying to save you'' She cut him off and exclaimed 'I don't need saving, I have managed just fine and will manage without you in the future, now leave!' She managed to say whilst holding her tears back. He was well and truly fuming now and stormed out banging the door behind him and threw the money at a surprised Dev. Pointing angrily at Geet's room, he told Dev that he wanted her every night for the next month if not longer. Dev counted the money and realised the man was serious. A shocked Geet had heard everything and fell to her bed in tears.

That night she had a million questions running through her mind, what did he want from her- 'every night,' was he going to torture her for her rudeness, in her heart of hearts she knew a man with such enchanting eyes was not capable of that. She wondered if she should she tell Dev, what would happen to her if he went to jail, what would she do with Rajji- she needed to be educated -Geet couldn't let her face this kind of life- her life. She finally drifted of to sleep with the lingering question of whether she really did need saving.

So there it is, hope you all like it!
Edited by Paloma_D - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hmmm...... Wat is maan upto...... Loved it..... But it was short.... Update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: aditiwalia56

Hmmm...... Wat is maan upto...... Loved it..... But it was short.... Update soon.


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<font color="#cc0099">Lol I thought that was a really long update- guess I was wrong haha, glad that i left you wanting more:)</font>

<font color="#cc0099">Paloma x</font>
Edited by Paloma_D - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
awesome update
loved it
hope geet lets maan help her
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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