SS Alone in Paradise(Maaneet)LAST CH pg128 14 feb - Page 55

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow ! awesome update do continue soon .....
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Posted: 14 years ago

alone in Paradise 10

next day at breakfast table
Dadi: Maan you will not have breakfast...
Maan: dadi i am not hungry
Dadi: why beta?
Maan: dadi i don't feel like having it.
dadi: come here beta
Maan: walked to dadi
Dadi: hold his hand " beta kya baat ha, last night i heard your & geet arguing "
Maan: dadi it was my mistake i gave her that importance.
Dadi: kya huwa ha beta ..
Maan: dadi please ...
Dadi: acha hum na aik baat karni ha
Maan: yes
Dadi: yesterday i & Geet went to Arjun 's dadi's home
Maan:so
Dadi: they have asked Geet's hand for Arjun
Maan: looked at her in surprise .."what?"
Dadi: she liked Geet she said she would like to make her bahu..
Maan: hmmmm... so what should i do?
Dadi: i am just asking you if you have any... paused
Maan: dadi why i will have problem ? do what you like to do?
Dadi: but beta....
nakul: enter with flowers...

Dadi: "i don't know who is this secret admirer of Geet..."
Maan: hoga koi pagal ..
Dadi: nakul ask the flower boy who send this
nakul : dadi i will ask him tomorrow
Maan: dadi why are you giving so importance to flowers..
Dadi: "beta if that person really love my Geet i will prefer him on Arjun"
Maan: hmmm looked at Dadi..."ask her then"
Dadi: why to ask her why not the sender?
Maan: what do you mean?
Dadi: ask your self
Maan: looked at Dadi...
Dadi:s she said she can't stay here...
Maan : but contract...
Dadi: took out file from her wheel chair pocket ..... tore it in front of him.
Maan: why you tore it?
Dadi: love will stop her not these contracts....
Maan: but
Dadi: i will call Arjun Grandmama today if you have time do come in evening...
Maan: dadi today i am not going to office ..
Dadi: why?
Maan: i just want to be alone, i am in out house call me
Dadi: ok ...
Maan: walked out ...
Dadi: what happen between them last night ? i have to find it ..... "Geet "
Geet: who was still in bed .... she said she is not feeling well when dadi tried to wake her up.... " coming dadi" she heard maan going out "i don't want to face him at all...thank god he left " she walk out ...
Dadi: beta how are you feeling ?
Geet: i am feeling better now.
Dadi: ok beta come here
Geet: jee
Dadi: beta their is a proposal for you.
Geet: looked at her in astonish ....
Dadi:beta if you don't mind can i ask them to call them today....
Geet: but dadi
Dadi: beta do you like someone?
Geet: no
Dadi: but these flowers beta ..pointed at flowers placed at table
Geet: dadi i don't know who send these....
Dadi: patted her cheek ok you freshen up & come back
Geet: acha Dadi.... walked with heavy head to washroom..."who is this guy now? since i have enter this home i am in problem now this proposal.."

At out house..
Maan: sitting in his study " Arjun will marry her ... so what ?big deal....? he started switching channels .. his cell started ringing ,he switched off his cell... "she is not at all important for me"

at mansion
Dadi: beta come here
Geet: jee
Dadi: beta wear this & show me how you look like ? gave her jewellery
Geet; but dadi
Dadi: ok come here sit in front of me
Geet: dadi why you are doing this ?
Dadi: because i want you should look perfect ...
Geet: but dadi these are not mine
Dadi:beta please i treat you as my daughter so this is yours
Geet: but
Dadi: beta no if & but. she made her wear ..
Geet: dadi
Dadi: beta go & see in mirror you are looking beautiful.
Geet: shyly got up & looked her self
Dadi: beta aik kam karo go to out house & bring the files which is in study room cupboard.
Geet: sure dadi abhi lakar aati hn
Dadi: come here
Geet: walked to her she kissed her fore head ...
Dadi:"go beta best of luck"
Geet: looked at her
Dadi: jao...
Geet: walked to out house ... why she said best of luck? ... she walked in dark hall of out house .... "where is study ?" she open one door it was locked..... kon se room ha ..she open other it was dark .... she try to find light switch .she heard foot steps she hide herself behind cupboard .... someone entered she held her breath...
Maan: who is in here? he said bit loud
Geet: covered her mouth with her hand... her bangles made noise ..
Maan: pull her out of ..."what are you doing here?"
Geet: try to loosen his grab on her arm he pull her with a jerk
Maan: come out ..
Geet: aaah...my shirt stuck.. she grab his shirt
Maan: who asked you to come here he switched on light.... & turn back... he could not stop him self looking at her
Geet: was trying to pull out her shirt ...
Maan: wait ... he walked towards her ...
Geet: i will do it
Maan: took one step
Geet: you stop right there i know how to manage ..placed her hand at his chest
Maan: placed his hand on wall geet held her breath.... with other hand he free her shirt from the nail...he was so closed that Geet could feel his breath ... he looked at her ...she was looking at floor ..he smiled
Geet: why are you smiling? looked at him in anger
Maan: hide it "what are you doing here?& how you got my mom necklace ?"let her free
Geet: dadi gave me ....
Maan: looked at her ... "so Dadi want ....." he left her & quickly walk out of room...
Geet: "woh file" ran behind him
Maan: yahan per koi file nai ha .....ran to mansion.


to be cont.
i will update my other ff's soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yay first to comment!!!!!
super cool dadi yaar
asking maan about geet marrige proposal😉
making geet get ready n saying best of luck😆
maan mesmerized in geet n what maan wants to say that "dadi wants her as her bahu"
i guess i m thinking right


Edited by nan_10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part
Love dadi as Cupid
Hope Maan gets jealous ov arjun & confesses
Cont soon Xx... 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely.👏 Plz update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Well dadi is playing the cupid to bring them together.
Waiting for dadi's plan to take-over.
Con soon..........
Nd PLZ UPDATE DESPAIR ND SIMPLY LOVE too........,its been quite a long.
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update.........love dadi trying to play cupid bw them hopefully geet will start to feel for him it wud b nice
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Posted: 14 years ago
atleast maan got d cue wt dadi wants
nw he will set it alright
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it nads... dadi has smething cooking iup i think... i want PM dear plz do
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part thanxxx for da pm nd plzzzzz do update ur other ff dying to read them

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