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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Di... Kaha ho aap??? Please update soon na... Im waiting
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Posted: 14 years ago
AWESOME !! AWESOME !! AWESOME!! .. 👏👏
Wen is the next part coming.. !??..
lLoving this ff.. Truly magical !! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 35

maan - agle bar gussa aayee to mujhe mar dena, khud ko nahi
and kissed her dressed hands
she looked at him lost in his words and the feel of his lips. he moved his gaze to see her
and their gaze where locked probably indefinitly
she pulled her hand back with the knock at the door
prem - geet bachan...geet please yaar mujhe mukti se bacha please
maan sat on the bed & she ran to open the door
prem - kya kar...he saw the rooms condition
maan looked away
prem - kya yaar geet tune mera gussa is bechare pe inkal diya
aap ko chot to nahi laghi, be careful karate black belt hain humari sherni
maan chocked & cuffed
prem comes next to him & puts his hand around - isse bachke rahena
deehkne main cute cute se innocent se lagti hain, hain nahi
geet trips him on the ground & pins him on the floor sitting on him
geet - kya bola tune
prem - geet please uttar ja, tu aaj kal pehle ki tarah light weight nahi rahi
she gets up & sits back in a jerk on his stomach better...
maan oounch....she shoots a stare at maan. he looks away shutting his mouth
she holds his hand under her legs - mukti se sorry kaha? did u talk to her?
prem - woh!!
geet - prem yaar thats not right, woh waise ladki nahi hain senti senti types hain
prem - teehk hain
geet - javoo sorry bolo
prem - umm
geet - kaya umm
maan - tum uske uppar se uttoghi to jayega na
geet looks at maan & then at prem, gets up & offers her hand to prem

prem goes to mukti's room, she was crying continously
prem - oh man I hate tears
mukti wipes her tears & looks away
prem cleares his throat - actually woh..woh
mukti - woh wat
and their gaze locks prem blinks blankly couple of times - I am sorry
I will do any thing to make u feel better
mukti - then Marry Me
prem - ok
tears roll down her eyes
prem - NO..I am mean Ok..lekin..not ok, oh gosh what did I just accept
he walks out screeming for geet

mean while geet had a shower & changed into her another pair of jeans & t-shirt
came looking for maan, he was drinking some juice, she took it from his hand
geet - bachan I am very hungry & started drinking it
maan was shocked - geet woh mera jhota hain
geet - tum nage-pange mera saat so sakte ho aur main tumhara joda bhi nahi pee sakti
maan - GEET
geet - attitude baad main dihkana, abhi mujhe bahut bhook laghi hai
maan gives up saying anything to her - breakfast is ready, unhe bhi bulalo
prem - GEET GEEET
geet rolled her eyes - kya huwa
prem painting really hard - she asked me to marry her
geet spat the juice on maan in shock...maan looked at her in anger
she was too shocked beyound words to respond to maans stirn look
she then looked at maan & realizied wat she did...she took the napkin
& started wiping him while looking at prem
prem - she said maary me
geet wipping maans cheeks(she had spilled on his shirt) - woh pagal hain kya
prem - uska pata nahi. main pagal ho gaya hoon, I said yes
geet now wipping around his lips - WHAT
maan stood mesmerised with her touch
prem looked at both of them - waise geet tune juice bachan ke shirt pe girayee thi
phir unka chehra kyun saaf kar rahi ho?
geet looked at maan & realizied her hand was resting on his lips & he looked lost
geet - I am sorry & started wipping his shirt
maan moved away & said its ok main change karlonga & goes inside
geet wondered if maan was angry, prem - GEET GEET yaar kya hogaya hain tujhe
geet snaps out - ek min I will be back
she ran behind maan to his room she looked for him & them barged into the wash room
maan was in his vest washing the juice on his chest
geet stood behind him looking at him in the mirror - aap naraz ho kya
maan - WHAT ARE U DOING IN MY WASHROOM
she looked around - oh sorry & waited outside. she was getting restless & walked up & down
maan came out she offered the towel - aap naraz ho kya
maan - nahi
geet - phir wanha se aise kyun chale aayee
maan - I had to change
geet - then why are u looking so angry
maan rools his eyes - nahi I am not.
looking for a shirt in the cupboard
she picks up a t-shirt, he keeps that back & picks another one
geet - deehka ur angry with me
maan - dho mujhe I will wear that only give,
geet - koi zaroorat nahi & turns her face
maan - geet tum yanha yeh soch ki aayee thi ki main tumpe naraz hoon aur
aabhi tum mujhe pe naraz ho rahi ho
geet - thats because u r shouting at me & u walked out from there like that
and now ur not wearing what I selected
making a face & crossing her hand over her chest
maan mumered aab ise kaise samjhavoo ki I was lost in her touch thats why had to leave
to control myself
maan turned her face him - I came here because my shirt was getting sticky sticky
tum washroom aise hi aagayee thats why reacted like that, agli bar nahi chilavonga
this t-shirt is white & I am wearing a black vest thats why
geet looked at him almost convinced..- aap vest change bhi karsakte the
maan - ok & removed his vest..she turned her back - yeh kya kar rahe ho
he changed into the white t-shirt - geet I think u should talk to mukti
and get her to have break fast
geet - umm

geet goes to mukti's room
geet mumeres aab main kya bolon - hi mukti
how stupid geet kuch aur bolne ko nahi milla. mukti hugged geet & cried
geet - sorry yaar
mukti still crying
geet - do u really want to marry him
mukti noded
geet - but
prem walks in & mukti was not facing her back to him
mukti - I know he his diffrent, but nice at heart
geet winked at prem
geet - I hope u know he is a wild horse impossible to tame
prem made a face at geet wild horse....
mukti wipped her tears & noded
geet leaves them alone in the room to sort out further

she come down to have breakfast table prem & mukti join them after a while
looking happy togather. maan comes with his newspaper & sits opposite to geet
cook serves them paratas & curd & pickles
geet - sorted?
prem - kind off
geet narrowed her eye brows
prem - we decided that we will spend some time togather & get to know each other
better & then probably
geet - I guess u will be great togather waise bhi kisine mujse kaha hain
u guys are perfect togather
prem - and u believed him?
maan looked at her folding the paper slightly
geet - I believe his believe
and she looked at him
maan covered his face behind the paper & smiled pagali hain
geet smsed maan - I love that smile of urs
he read the sms & moved the paper to see her, she was walking out of the door
maan shook his head softly & kept looking at her almost stepping out of view
then she peeps back & winks at him
maan smiles again..she moves her hand to her chest crossing & turns her neck...I am dead now

precap
Aisa pehli baar hua hai satrah athrah saalon mein!!!!!dreamy dreamy geet

Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
will read first😊
Hi Muski di... This time u took REALLY REALLY LONG TIME to update😡😡😡 ... Main kabse wait kar rahi thi...🥱🥱
But the wait was worthwhile... kya update tha yaar...😉😉😉
Awesome Aweome Awesome... Lovely👏👏👏
Maaneet scenes are so romantic & comedy at the same time....😳😳😳😆😆 Cant stop laughing & stop loving them also... Prem ko zor ka jhatka... bahut zoro se laga😆😆😆
Apni sherni sachme black belt hai...😲😲 Yakeen karna padhega... Afterall Maan ko bhi nahi choda... Prem ka gussa Maan pe nikal diya...😆😆
Mukti😲😲 unbelieveable... Direct Will u marry me...😳😳
Un dono ko samjathe samjathe pata nahi Maaneet ka kya hoga... Kya hoga se mera matlab hai... PYAAR TOH HONA HI HAI...😳😳😳
pLEASE please update sooner🤢🤢 This update was excellent yaar...
U're an awesome writer ya... Main aapki bahut badi badi badi fan hu...
Edited by Tressa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hehe i knew mukti wud say that. Omg jus a wild thought, shaadi se pehle inn dono luv birds ka ye haal hai in terms of haq jatana, toh shaadi ke baad toh oh ho kya baat hai hehe
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohhhhhhhhh my goddddd even i m dead seeing maan smileeeee

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Posted: 14 years ago
that was aweswoem update....really loved it
so we are having dreamy geet...
and do keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome update yaar...loved it ... weekend na so update the next part soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
good update!!... Geet is slowly falling for him!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update!!!👏👏
Loved the dialogues a lot!
Mukti asked prem to marry her and Prem ne haan bhi bol diya😆😆
Flirt prem sudharne wala hai kya?😛

Geet ne Maan ka jhootha juice pi liya aur Maan usse rok raha hai.
Arre Maan, tumne suna nahi ki apno ka jhootha khaa/pi sakte hai😆😆
Aur waise bhi jhootha khaane-peene se pyaar badta hai😆😆

Mukti-Prem ki shaadi ki baad sun kar Geet bhi shock mein aa gayi🤣
Juice maan par gira diya aur phir shirt ki jagah face wipe karna shuru kar diya🤣
Aur maan Geet mein kho gaya🤣
This was really a funny part🤣
Sorry for the repetitive smileys but kya karoon, hasi bahut aa rahi hai😛

Geet apne bachchan ko dhoondhte hue uske washroom jaa pahunchi😆
Loved the conversation there. They both were talking as if they are husband-wife😉
Prem-Mukti giving themselves a chance😊
And i loved the line-'I believe his belief'
and the smile part also😊
This was really sweet!😊

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