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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
hi
the up is really good
so the drill session is going on
par yeh huda aur yudi sach kuch nahin aata
capt rajveer aaya wow
yeh pooja ka toh abhie dil laag gaya raj se par naina uska bhi thore dialogue diya kar yaar becchare bas chup chap he rahete
plz include some scene rajveer and naina
plz cont soon and do pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
that was really good
plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

the up is really good
so the drill session is going on
par yeh huda aur yudi sach kuch nahin aata
capt rajveer aaya wow
yeh pooja ka toh abhie dil laag gaya raj se par naina uska bhi thore dialogue diya kar yaar becchare bas chup chap he rahete
plz include some scene rajveer and naina
plz cont soon and do pm me

Sabar rakhna chahiye na.. abhi Rajveer ki entry hui...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: prerna1

that was really good
plz continue soon

thnxx..i would surely cont. ....i love writing it!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
nice fic just read it... seems interesting.

waiting for more....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
wow a LRL fic. I would love to read it. plz pm me next time whn u update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
sorry 4 the delay..here is the part.
Pooja: are yaar.. main yahaan Ambala aa gayi hoon na..to koi message hi nahi karta. Mujhe to lagta hai sab mujhe bhool gaye hain..

Naina: aise nahi hai yaar.

Suddenly Capt. Rajveer interrupts their conversation.

Capt. Rajveer: Cadets?(in an angry mood)

Naina and Pooja got so frightened that they almost squealed.

Pooja and Naina: (in a low tone) Yes Sir?

Rajveer: What are you guys doing here? I think this time has been given to you for changing into your casuals. Have you done with it?

Naina: hmmm..ummm… We were going there only Sir. I..

Rajveer: What I..I..?? You are here at KMA to be a soldier. Not to waste your time. Do you think this is a joke? No..tell me if you think so? I'll make the joke even more funnier for you. Tell me??

He is about to carry on his lecture and and insult them but suddenly an announcement takes place.

Announcement: Capt. Rajveer Please report to Brigadier's office. I repeat, Capt. Rajveer please report to Brigadier's office.

Rajveer: I'll talk to you guys later. And be serious. This is a MILITARY ACADEMY, not a playground where…

Pooja: (stopping him from opening his exaggerating his lecture) Sir, aapko office mein bulaya hai….Abhi announcement hui na.

Rajveer: Ya, mujhe pata hai..I don't need to ask you silly craps!

Rajveer leaves.

As he leaves, Pooja's mouth opens up at his last words("silly craps")

Pooja: How mean!

Naina: ya..aur tu bol rahi thi kitne ache insaan hain. Kitne smart hain. Kitne handsome hain..Ab pata chala na andar se kaise hain. Mean!!

Pooja: Ye sab army officers itne mean kyun hote hain? (thinking of Sid)

Naina: Chhod na yaar.. Hume kaunsa in officers ke meanness par PhD karni hai? Huh..chal ab change karke class mein jaana hai…pehle hi late ho rahe hain.

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Naina and Pooja get to their room and change up as soon as possible. They moved out of their rooms to go the class(they weren't late for the class)but suddenly Pooja remembered that she had to go to Activity Room for her cell phone's charger.As they are walking in the corridor—

Pooja: Oh! Yaar main kaise bhool gayi..

Naina: Kya kaise bhool gayi? (frowning)

Pooja: mobile ka charger..yaar..activity room mein hai..

Naina: class ke baad le lena..abhi chal

Pooja: nahi yaar..activity room to 12 baje band ho jaata hai na..humari class 12:30 tak chalegi..i have to go now.

Naina: achha tu ja..aur jaldi aana..i am waiting for you here.

Pooja: No, you are coming with me. Main akeli nahi jaungi.

Naina: achha baba..chal

Pooja: chal..

Naina: (giving her way) pehle aap prasthan kijiye ma'am.

Pooja smiles and moves forward. Naina follows her.

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As they enter the Activity room, they are shocked out of their wits to find Capt. Rajveer there. He is playing a guitar and singing a beautiful song. Naina and Pooja's mouths, wide open in shock.

Rajveer is unaware about the presence of Pooja and Naina. Throughout the song, Naina and Pooja kept quiet and had full enjoyment, listening to his lovely voice.

Rajveer ends the song and turns back. He is startled to see Pooja and Naina there.

Rajveer: aap yahan kya kar rahein hain?

Pooja and Naina get out of the lovely mesmerizing tone of his great song.

Pooja: umm..umm. Sir

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to be cont.

mamon.moon thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
lovely part. continue soon. thnx 4 the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
lovely part
but why are you showing Raj as this and even cadets dont like him why?
plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
both the parts were amazing and lovely.....

cont soon

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