MAYUR FF..The Repelling Magic.

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Jaee Dev Rathore

@JaeeDevRathore

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

Wow Di, totally loved it ... It's getting so interesting - both are obeying the instructions and ignoring their wishes - the last line was so exciting - Overcoming the Repel - awesome ... I totally loved Samrat and Gunjan here - they are so natural and one thing more - I love how you connect the conversations between the two parties - amazing ... I am so keen to read further ....

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umaima

@cutiepie12

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

oh gr8 part i wish dey meet dier very frst day of clg hmm description ws vbrilliant as usual luved it

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Wings-of-Fire

@Wings-of-Fire

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

its great.waiting to see the overcoming force. once again brilliant work, mehek.

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Radha

@rads14

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

wow amazing part!!!
loved it!!
last line was superb!
cont soon

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ALIMA AFRIN KHEYA

@kheya-mayur

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#45

awsom awsom awso ppart mehak..........

very easy writing style but touch d heart..........

love it

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AmyArTiMayUr

@AmyArTiMayUr

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

Mehak...i demand the next update ASAP!!😆😆

OMG i cant wait to read the next part...seriously...😃😃

similarities are too many but i guess they wont be able to stay away from each other😉😉

Awesome part!!!😃😃

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Aysha Saxena

@aysha_mayur

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

Di awesome FF.........PM me too

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#48

Nice...The way u've shown the similarity wz interesting...
Cont soon...

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Rabiah Samiullah

@Rabiah

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Posted: 15 years ago

#49

Mehek!!!!!!!🤗🤗🤗

Thanks for another FF!
oooo... LOVE THE TITLE..

PART 1:
I loved it..

interesting..Let me let u know..
.... same type of magni I have.. i too saw picture of him ☺️ after magni.. n we still havent met face-to-face yet... yet we communicate (thanx god for email)
... but my fiance n me are not same we are opposite.. n we live on opposite side of world.. --i can sort of relate to this FF..
OK back to FF..LOL..
I LOVED how you esp. wrote how Mayank n Nupur looked 2 picture @ same time and moon... 😳.
but i dont like repel part.. not sounding good....

Part2:

loved Samrat callin Nupur "BHABHI"😳 N his line
S...o0o0o0o0...bahshan..bhushan..kitne silmilar words hain na..

hehehe i found it very funny...🤣

---Loved how u went back n forth with the scene in the beginning .. well written....👍🏼 MashALLAH
but when i go to this line...

PB &SS...door rehan us se.......
.....😲 how can MN stay away from each other😉
I know ull work some MAGIC... n so wuld SAJAN..

oooooohhhh Mehek.. i CAN NOT WAIT..😍
please please please
Update SOOON YAAR..

----RABIAH