MAYUR FF..The Repelling Magic. - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Fab mehak zabardast plz cont soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Mehak happy u start another ff 🤗 lovely cpncept n 1st part wonderfl update thanks for the pm
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Wow mehak new ff from u...Congrats...
Everything wz sweet n simple...And Mayur wz as usual gorgeous...It wz going smoothly but the last beat wz like diwali ki dhamaka...Wah yaar...I loved the last line 'The problem with the same pole is that...THEY REPEL'...This concept is new and interesting...
So do cont soon...
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wowwwwwwww mehak amazing concept yaaaar loved it alot thx alottttttttttttttttttttttttt for starting the new FF

thx alot for the pm
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Interesting FF Mehak.................😊

waiting for next update............thanks for sharing😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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WOW. AGAIN A MAGIC SHOW? MEHEK YOU ARE DAVID BLANE! LOVED IT.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Mehak...i was just about to ask you when you would be writing your next FF and i got your PM...then got around to reading it today....😆😆

Beautiful start dear😃 So MayUr are engaged....but they like each other after seeing the pics...hmm😃😃

Now I am eager to see how these like poles repel then end up getting attracted😉😉

So update soon okies😃😃

P.S: Loved the way you described the rooms and the beautiful ppl themselves😳😳
Edited by amyluvsmayur - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome concept Mehak!!!
amazing start!!
eager to know what happens next!
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey mehak seems nice ff please continue
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thank u so much guys....🤗

@mansi and daania...even today people get married without seeing each other..it happens in my family..so i wrote what i have been seeing since my childhood..😊


PART 2:

Nupur got ready for the first day of her college...wearing a knee length orange kurta, with 3/4 sleeves and blue jeans...wearing a scarf in her neck....tieing her hair in a pony tail and applied light kajal to her huge eyes... her phn rang...

N..gunjan??..

G..haan nupur...tu kahan per hai?..

N..ghr per..

G..abhi tak nikli nhai..kia nupur..kab nikle gi..kab mujhe pick kare gi..hum late ho jayen gey..

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M..mayank sharma aj tak kabhi late nahi hua..

Mayank was talking to his best friend samrat who was questioning him on being late

S..acha mahan sharma sahib,,ab ap nikley gey..

M..i will be there in 10 minutes.,..aur main ik second bhi wait nahi karon ga..mujhe punctuality ka bhashan de raha hai..

S...o0o0o0o0...bahshan..bhushan..kitne silmilar words hain na..

M..shut up!...just 10 minutes...ok..

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Nupur came downwstiars, arranging her bag..

N..bye mama..main ja rahi hon...raste main gunjan ko bhi lena hai..

PB..uffff..kitni baar kaha hai k apne stauts k login k sath

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M..mom plz...samrat merey liye bht special hai..main us k khilaf kuch nahi suno ga..

SS...haad ho gai hai...mujhe samjh nahi ata k tumhain apne status ka koi nahi mila dosti karne k liye?..

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N...bht mile they..lekin dost ik bhi nahi tha...

PS...jao..tum se bhes karna bekar hai...

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M...tu karti ku hian?..

SS..zaaban sanbhal kar baat karo...

Mayank closed his eyes..this was the daily routine and he didnt wnated to spoil his first day of final year..

M..mom plz..aj nahi...bye..

SS...ik minute...

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PB & SS...tum dono ik hi clg main parhtey ho..

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Mayank and nupur were revealed a shocking truth by their mothers...THEY WERE IN THE SAME COLLEGE!!....both of them felt an
and increase in their pulse...their cheeks went a bit pink...nupur wa struck by a strange feeling of shyneas and mayankfelta tinge of happiness in his heart....

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PB & SS...aur mujhe koi shikyat nahi chaiye...

Again a shock...both of their mothers were warning them..FOR WHAT??..

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PB & SS....hum bht izat dar log hain..hum nahi chatey k tum dono ki ki tasveren akhbaron main chapen..

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suddenly both of them felt as some piece of trash being used...they ha dto move according to their parents will and now they will decide where to look and where not to


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PB &SS...door rehan us se...

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M & N..ok..

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Nupur and mayank reached gunjan's and samrat's home respectively,and both of them sensed the feeling of tension on their faces...

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S...wow!..bhabhi hamre clg main parthi hain..

M...haan..

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G..arey haan kia.?..that si soo great...tu excited nahi hai..

N...mama ne milne se mana kiya hai..

G...ku?

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M ....ku k hamrI izat kharab ho jaye gi...

S...acha chal mood kharab mat kar..mil nahi sakta..dekh tu sakta hai...

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Samrat and gunjan were the only people in this world who could make them both smile in their worst of moods and this time again they both were able to bring blush on theIr best friend's faces..

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Mayank and samrat reached clg..they had been studying for three eyes..this was their final year,

Nupur and gunjan also reached their clg..it was their first day so both asked a student and headed towards their department ...when suddenly nupur's feet froze..

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ENGLISH DEPARTMENT

mayank 's eyes frooze..he had passed by this board several times but today he felt a strange kind of attachment...

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G....hmmm...COMPUTER SCIENCES...

Gunjan loudly read the board where nupur had stopped...

N..chal..

she almost dragged gunjan

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S & G...tujhe us se nahi milna?..

M & N...nahi..

S & G..ku?..

M & N..mujhe mana kiya gaya hai...


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SIMILAR PEOPLE..

SIMILAR WAYS OF RESPONDING TO THE SITUATION...

.SO NONE OF THEM WOULD TAKE THE FIRST STEP...

BUT THEIR IS ALWAYS AN OVERCOMING FORCE FOR REPELLING POLES....
Edited by -Mehak - 14 years ago

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