MAYUR FF..The Repelling Magic.

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#61

finally mayur meet

it was sweet update tansfor the pm

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Rabiah Samiullah

@Rabiah

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#62

Hope ur feeling better..
THANKS Mehek...😳..yes.. me 2 same reaction as Nupur...😳😳😳
gosh u made me recall that i was blushing just reading Jiju..

I need to stop getting side tracked lol...
back to update..

Awww... Mehek.. I loved the 1st Meeting.. so intense
it had so many emotions in it .. its hard to express in words..
dont know how u did it..
awesome job!👍🏼

Love how wind was helping them..👏
I hope it continues to in future parts..
Hoping for some RAIN TOO 😛

love this section esp..

"Mayank smiled and shook hands with her.

M..hi..

Mayank's voice made nupur skip her beat....it was so deep...

S..hi bhabhi ...samrat..mayank ka best friend...

She smiled and shook hands..

N..hi..

Mayank was lost in her voice..soft and gentle..."

I can see SAJAN N MAYUR LOVE STORY blooming together....😉

Attraction to each other.. wow.. i cannot wait yaar for the next part.. please update real soon...
waiting for some more Mayur scenes..😍

❤️-RABIAH

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Naina

@sumonetolub

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

at the risk of sounding repetitive, ur such a good writer!.......naina

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Jaee Dev Rathore

@JaeeDevRathore

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#64

Sorry Di for being late ...

I just loved the whole part ... beginning from Mayank-Samrat and Nupur-Gunjan scenes ... it was a really emotional part where you mentioned about their liking for ghar ka khana and how they eat from Samrat and Gunjan's lunch - that was too adorable ...

They are SO similar and even their friends are similar ... And the wind was so cute - it was so sweet the way you put the whole flying of the the scarf scene ...

Their reaction to each other was just perfect - whether admiring voices or recognizing the Life Partner - that was so good ...

Samrat and Gunjan were so cute - talking the same thing ...

The jiju-bhabhi hugs were really nice ...

I am sure Samrat and Gunjan are too going to fall for each other ...

Edited by -jaee- - 14 years ago