MAYUR FF..The Repelling Magic.

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#481

part 18..........fantastic👏
i sooooooooo luvd it...
finally..MN got married~..
startd deir new lyf wid confidence ..finally.. dey r free birds~~...
yay!! i'm sooo happy 4 dem!🥳
*ahem ahem* gettin ready 4 an romantic update now!!😳

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Ansha

@lovelycactus

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Posted: 15 years ago

#482

awsummmmmmmmm..!!!!!

soooo waiting for the next update.........

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Mansi bhatia

@-Mansi-

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#483

Sorry for not commenting yesterday..I was almost asleep :(

I LOVED Mayank..his anger..strongness..his non-fear attitude..it was like WOW!! I love how Nupur's dad agreed to Mayank and asked Nupur who just nodded..

and SG also married? awww..so nice..but Nups is all sad-sad..:( then Mayank asks her if shes scared of him now..and will remain a 6ft doorie..I giggled at that time..:p and then she hugged him..:):) awww

And they enter the house..he carrying her..trust me. That was so romantic!😍❤️

Hope 2 see an update tonite!

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crazymayurian

@crazymayurian

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#484

u r the best i loved it soooooooooooooooooo much

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#485

thank u so much guys...🤗

@rosh..no dear, that person's past is like MAYUR..not the present..but plz pray that the present also becomes like MAYUR..

part 19:

Mayank and nupur entered their home together, nupur in mayank's arms.
Mayank made her stand, and closed the door of their flat. Nupur
was looking around...

It was beautiful home..in the entrance it was a tv lougue, the tv on the front wall with sofas around and
the dining table on one side, at the left side was the door of the kicthen,she walked in and she was still...the side wall had two pictures...and nupur's eyes dewelled with tears..she almost ran towards the pictures.

brushed her finger on the lady in one of the picture

N..maa...

Her voice was choking and tears were flowing..She didnt realize that mayank was behind her, she turned..

N..ye..

M..tumahre aur merey parents ki tasvereey hain...

She again turned towards the pictures

Rubbed her hands at both the pictures..one was of her father and mother and the other was mayank's parents..

M...mujhe laga in k bagier tu ghr adhora hai...hai na..

N..haan..in k bagier tu zindagi hi adhori hai...

Nupur was just staring at the pictures..mayank wiped her ters..

M..Nupur plz..aj tu mat ro..

Nupur smiled and wiped off her tears..

N..hmm..ok...

M..chalo ab tumhain hamara bedroom dikhata hon..

N..nahi..pehle kitchen..

M..nupur bedroom se pehle kitchen dekhna hai tumhain..

N..haan..plz..

She started walking towards the kitchen and mayank walked behind her shaking his head in disbelief.

N..wow...kitna pyara kitchen hai..its so cute..

M..hmmm..

N..sink thek hai..i think is left corner main ik stand ki zarorat pare gi..baqi tu thek hai..

Mayank sat on the counter waiting for her observations to get over..

N..hmmm..fridge i guess right corner main bhi ho sakti thi..yahan tu stove ki heat pare gi..

M..nupur..

N..wo main soch rahi thi k ik table hum kitchen main bhi rakh sakte hain..kafi jagah hai..

Mayank jumped off from the corner and went to change..nupur was so busy admiring the kitchen that she didnt even realize that mayank left..mayank returned in five minutes rubbing his wet hair..dressed in black tracks.

N..haan..tu ab thek hai..

M..kai thek hai?

N...ap ne sab kuch ghalat rakha hua tha..sarey spices cabinet main.aur..

He held her from her waist

M..nupur..ye subha bhi ho sakta hai..

Nupur was stunned...his closeness was raising the blood in her veins..she lowered her eyes .

N..main change kar k ati hon..

She entered the room and she was bowled over..SUCH A BEAUTIFUL ROOM..white tiles and white paint and the bed and the sofas were also white..the whole room was white..the wood laminations of the cupboards were also white..it seemd as if nothing can be more pure and divine.

she opened her bag and took out her night suit..baby pink silk night pyajma and shirt

she came out of the wash room and she moved towards the sliding glass door of the room..slided the glass and entered the balcony..

and walked till the railing and held it..it was very cold..but she held it..the city was looking beautiful..the city of dreams.

She started thinking about her life, which had taken so many turns in the recent past..the weather was very chilly,it was the mid of december and cold brezze was flowing, her wet hair flowing her and there...suddenlys he felt something warm..

A shawl was placed on her shouders..she turned sideways..

M..itni sardi main bahir kia kar rahi ho?..

her lips broke into a smile, opend the shawl and wrapped it properly..

N..waise hi...

M..yakeen nahi raha na?..

N..nahi...

Both of them were looking at the city from thier fifteenth floor balcony... whole city was lightend up...both of there hands were on the raling..

N..mujhe tu laga tha k main sari zindagi wahin guzar don gi..

M...main ne wada kiya tha tum se nupur..is k baad bhi aisa lagta tha?..

She turned her face towards him

N..sach bolon?..

Mayank couldn't help smiling at her innocence..

M..haan..sach bolo..

N..mujhe lagta tha k ap wada pora nahi karo gey..

M..ku?..

N..pata nahi..*facing the city again*..mujhe lagta tha k kuch na kuch ghalt zaroor hoga..kahin na kahin kuch..zaror hoga..

M..main bhi sach bolon..

Nupur turned her face towards him again and smiled..

N..haan kahiye..

M..mujhe bhi lagta tha k shaiyed sab ghalat ho jaye ga..jab main mumbai aya tha tu mujhe laga tha k shaiyed ghalti kar li hai..
sab itna asaan nahi hai jitna main soch raha tha..bht baar laga k main haar jaon ga..

N..tu phir himmat kahan se ati thi.

He turned his face towards her and held her hand which was on the railing.

M..tumhare letters se..

He held the hand more tightly..

M..there was a wait in ur every letter..

Gripping her hand more tightly..

M..jab bhi saochta tha k nupur mera intezar kar rahi hai tu dobar se himmat a jati thi..otherwise i would have failed..

Mayank brought her hand close to her lips and kissed it..

M..i love u nupur..

Nupur's eyes were also having tears..he placed her other hand on their joined hands...and took a step towards her...

Mayank left her hands and entangled his fingers in her hair..brushing away all of her flowing hair which were being an obstacle
between his eyes..

He brushed his thumb beneath nupur's eye..clearing off every trace of tear...moved forward and kissed her eyelash.

Nupur eyes were closed..she opened them and mayank joined his forehead with her's..with his hands on her cheeks..mayank opened his eyes and he could feel the breath of nupur..he slowly pressed his lips against hers..

a tender touch of affection soon transformed into a passionate expression of love.

They broke from the kiss and nupur eyes' were still closed ..mayank looked around he said in a mischevious tome..

M..nupur.

She opened her eyes about didn't looked at him..her eyes were lowered..

M..kal tak hum dono kisi k samne hath bhi nahi pakrte they and today we have kissed standing in the balcony..

Nupu jumped away and looked around..THEY WERE STANDING IN THE BALCONY

N..OMG!!

She almost ran inside

M..nupur kia hua.?

N..ap ander aao..

Mayank came inside and she closed the sliding door covering with all the blinds...

N..OMG..ab kia ho ga?.

M..kai hua nupur?..

N..kai mtlb kai hua?.hum balcony main khare they..kisi ne dekha hoga tu..oh God..

she went and sat on the bed..Mayank started laughing and sat beside her..

M..well dekha hoga tu..

N..OMG..plzz..main ne kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ki mujhe aise..

M..nupur plz relax..ye 15th floor ki balcony hai..yahan kis ne dekha hoga?..

Nupur turned towards him..

N..haan..ye tu hai..15th floor pe tu koi nahi dekh sakta..

M..excatly..

he moved more close and placed his hand on her shoulder..

M..wasie nupur ye mumbai hai...yahan sab chalta hai..

N..sab chalta hai mtlb?..

her eyes were wide open..

M..umm..mtlb yahan k log kafi open hian..espcially yahan ki larkiyan..

N..mtlb..

M..*supressing his smile*..mtlb wo tumhari tarah narrow minded nahi hain..

N..what do u mean by narrow minded?..

M..*in a miscehvious tone*..they dont mind kissing in the balcony..

N..I DONT BELIVE THIS..

She jerked his hand and stood up

N..aur ktni larkiyon ko is balcony main kiss kiya hai??

Maynk held her arm and pulled her towards him..she fell back on the bed..nupur got stunned...he slightly leaned over her, looking straight in her eyes..and their faces were very very near..

M..tumhe kia lagta hai?..kitni lairkyon ko kiss kiya hoga?..

Nupru lowered her eyes...she had got her answre..and the answer was ONLY ONE..AND IT WAS HER...she slighly turned her face away, mayank reached for her hand and held it

kisisng her fore hed..nupur slipped her arm around his collar...he moved more clsoe to her and softly said in her ear..

M..i love u nupur..

Nupur tighetened her fist on mayank's collar.

He kissed her neck gently pushing her sleeve down while she placed a kiss on his collar bone..

.a realtion which started spirtually was given its complete meaning..Two reppelling forces fianlly connecting to ecah other..a their overcoming force being the similar pain they
shared..

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guys here i end my FF, i hope u all enjoyed reading as much as i did writing, and i thank u all for ur lovely comments from the bottom of my heart, they all are very special to me..THANK U GUYS..
and plz ALL OF YOU do let me know how did u liked the ending of this story..
PLZ ALL OF YOU..
😃

Edited by -Mehak - 15 years ago

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.SilentPrincess

@.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 15 years ago

#486

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Edited...

It was an amazing ff mehak.. Once again u wrote this fantastic ff... It was truly a pleasure to read.... And every part had something in it that just made it special... I love the whole concept of the ff it was really sweet... 😳

Yah.. there were updated that made me cry especially the confession in the car in the rain. And the one where Mayank left for Mumbai... Those were heart wrenching, and they made me cry... 😒 But that's what signifies a great writer... 😊 👏

And every update was special, and some were romantic some funny some just special... It was very nice reading it... U write very beautifully... 👏 U have to write more ff''s,ss, os's... Can't wait for ur next ff or ss, os But do PM me when u start writing again... 😳

- Laiba

Edited by princez_94 - 15 years ago

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crazymayurian

@crazymayurian

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#487

i am speechless.their is no word in this world through which i can tell u how much i loved it👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Edited by mahakmev - 15 years ago

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dhano_Tejank

@dhano_Tejank

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#488

hey didi

ausum ending 👏

i just loved the wholestory

THANK YOU so much ..........................

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pls start a new one as soon as possible👍🏼

Edited by dhano_arti - 15 years ago

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Jaee Dev Rathore

@JaeeDevRathore

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#489

I am sure one day that person's present will become like MayUr - your prayers would work ...

Coming back to the update -

What a perfect update Di ... their parents' snaps on the wall was such a divine part and then her excitement to explore the kitchen just shows her desire of a home perfectly and then the balcony scene was really cute ... Perfect ending Di ... The repelling forces can come together after all ... Just beautiful Di ... and I am really keen to see your next story ....😳

Edited by -jaee- - 15 years ago

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neetu

@mayurg2010

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#490

cute ending mehak
but i don't want this to end .......
it was really a nice ff ........
ok, if you want to end then it's ok and ya please do start another one soooon..........
love you
Neetu.

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