MAYUR FF..The Repelling Magic.

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Varshini

@varsh-mayur

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#491

that was an amazing ff......god how do you write so well.....i keep waiting for ur uppdates every day......keep writing...seriously.....it gives a peace of mind from all our tensions.....😊

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Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#492

lovely........ superb........ but it got over???? awwwwwwwww.....

but plz start off wit a new one ASAP....

thx for the pm......

i jus love ur ff/ss n os.....

😊

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#493

Awwwwwwww mehak
why u ended this ff- r a mujhe mayur ki married life dekhna tha
gandhi bacchi u ended one of my fav ff.

mehak u r an awesomr writer and u proved it thorough ur ff.
i loved every bit of this ff
Gosh it was amazing yaar
loved it to core

i just hopw the same ending will happen to the real life person that u once mentioned in ur ff.

may ALLAH bless all and fulfill all of our wishes.
mehak now i m waiting for a new ff
plz jaida der maat karna- u know ek adat sa baan gayi hai
so dear plz so start a new ff

take care

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Mansi bhatia

@-Mansi-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#494

I was sensing its end..But I didnt want it to end...:(:(

It was so beautiful Mayank..them entering the house together...she more bothered about the kitchen..and not the bedroom 😆 she pointing out everything..not noticing he went also..hehe.

The bedroom..totally white..WOW 😍 and the kiss in the balcony..☺️ and she getting all embarassed..but hes like.."yahan sab chalta hai" OMGG!! :D:D

I love how they confessed..that this relation wont work out..but their togetherness made it stronger for them..awww..😭

And she doubting..whether he kissed anybody else..😆 and then the conssumation...awwww...such a beautiful end man..totally..😍

Im so upset it ended..I look forward to it every night..:(:( Write one more soon!! the MAGICAL stories..

And good luck to the couple in real..and I hope they have a beautiful love-story too!!

Love you lots!!🤗

-Mansi

Edited- You have a serious obsession with collars!😆 I LIKE I LIKE😆

Edited by -Mansi- - 14 years ago

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ragini sharma

@-DreamzGirl-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#495

ending is very good jinki jindgi mein kuch bhi acha na hua ho unki life mein itni sari kushiya aagai aur kya chaiye .

well writeen ff khas kar wo non living thing wali baten