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Wings-of-Fire

@Wings-of-Fire

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Posted: 14 years ago

#461

wah!what a romantic couple! you know only mayur could do that.
once you wrote that this story is inspired from the life of someone you know. are they like mayur? are they happy now?

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valliyah

@valliyah

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#462

Thankyou u soo soo much............at last they tied the knot............n they r HOME............their own HOME.............SWEET HOME.............DREAM HOME.............thnx for this awesome update..............do con't this magic..............n thnx for pm................!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#463

yay yipee yay yay yipee yay yay.....

m soooooooooooooooooooo happyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy....

beautifully written,,...... loved mayank in a typical self-confident hubby's role....

waitin for d next update.... thx for d pm.... do pm me wen ur ready wit d next part....

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Rumki

@rumki34

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Posted: 14 years ago

#464

Part 17
lovelx update
couldnt com yesterday.so commented now

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neetu

@mayurg2010

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#465

amazing mehak i just loved it
every bit of it
and the last when he lifted her in his arms........
i seriously didn't expect that he would do that.
even i thought that they both will hold their hands and then go together hand in hand
awww but mayank is way too passionate.........

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ShwePoo

@ShwePoo

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#466

Beautiful update....

Loved ur style of writing...!

i noe i have not commented on d previous parts but i really enjoy ur way f writing... jus awesome..... continue soon....

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Jaee Dev Rathore

@JaeeDevRathore

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#467

I am extremely sorry for being this late - I know you wish to whack me due to the sorry but I just cannot help it ...😳

Part 17 : Nupur's excitement and the sudden rise of happiness was really touching ... I so wanted her to wear the same dress and thanks for doing that ... They way with every minute her tension was rising was so real - not knowing about his whereabouts was actually scary and I just wished nothing bad happens to him but then I remembered that your stories promote positivity and I just loved the way he surprised her - that was so cute ... the pain after being apart for 3 years was so evident and I am really in awe of these characters ... superb Di .... The way she wasn't looking at him fearing it to be a dream was the best part ...

Part 18: This one left me with moist eyes ... Mayank's confident made me feel proud but in the whole update the line which hit me was Her Father Was Alive and First time in 22 years, she hugged him and he said he could atleast give her one happiness these lines were piercing and I am so happy that finally her father realised his duties - brilliant Di ... Samrat and Gunjan are married!! I just loved their bickering ... Nupur and Mayank's numbness was ameliorate - very true to their characters ... Their conversation in flight was so cute specially Mayank's question Mujhse dar lag raha hai? that was really innocent and so full of love ... And the entry inside the house was so MayUrish - awesome Di ... I am just loving this story more and more and more ....

Edited by -jaee- - 14 years ago

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#468

beautiful 😊

loved it😊

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#469

Beautiful update mehak
lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
loved it to the core
keep itup

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AmyArTiMayUr

@AmyArTiMayUr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#470

This was ultra-cute😃😃

So now Mr and Mrs Sharma have finally stepped into their marital life...chalo dekhte hai what lies ahead😃😃

Awesome Mehak...as usual😃😃🤗

P.S: Loving Mayank more and more...he picked her up...soooo sweettt😳😳

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