MAYUR FF..The Repelling Magic.

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Rumki

@rumki34

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Posted: 15 years ago

#501

awesome update mehak
superb
end kyu kiya
i feel like crying

Edited by .rumki. - 15 years ago

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Naina

@sumonetolub

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+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#502

dude ur an amazing writer.......i know ur prolly sick of hearing that but this was the most romantic and adorable fan fic ever......youre really a mature writer which is what sets you apart from the rest of the writers i see on this forum......great work 😊......naina

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maria

@Maria.

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+ 7

Posted: 15 years ago

#503

Beautiful update

Aweom ending...i loved it

do write more...

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katherine123

@katherine123

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#504

very well writtn i must say..........reading ur ff fr d 1st tym nit ws lovely do pm me nxt tym u write ny ff.......

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Wings-of-Fire

@Wings-of-Fire

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+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#505

so the magic ends huh? but ye dil mange more.
will be waiting for the next magical show to begin.
love you.
roshnee.

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459718

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Posted: 15 years ago

#506

Cinderella whats this? they just entered their fairytale life and you ended it? I wanted to see their moments together...you know husband wife cute/adorable bickering/loving/respecting moments... But as they say all good things must come to an end so does this magical FF! I feel so bad this use to be my MJHT filler everyday and now its done?

WOw their bedroom is all white......that must be beautiful...and then they kiss in the balcony nupur was ll nervous but mayank told her its okay ...they can kiss now😆 he is sooooooo cute...

Their relationship is soo beautiful and how penned it down into words ...Cinderella you created MagiC....😍😍.....I'm so happy to know that together they made it through everything and anything.

You gave a beautiful end to a magical story finally the repelling forces came together..over coming all.😳😳

And she doubting..whether he kissed anybody else.. and then the conssumation...awwww...such a beautiful end man..totally..

Cinderella now you HAVE to start another story soon...i look forward to your updates everyday. and like i said previously you have magic within your words hence i chose the name cinderella for you.

Love youuu

Edited by -Sajjal- - 15 years ago

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Rabiah Samiullah

@Rabiah

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Posted: 15 years ago

#507

Mehek Dear... i am so sorry for late reply😕.. . so dont mind my long comments..lol..😆

----part 17

YAY! Mayank is back... 👏
awww Nups in same dress as Mayank left her😳.. loved his plan to send Mummies out..lol..😆
best parts for me are of course :

M..nupur..

M..plz mujhe ehsaas hone dijiye k ap wapis a gaye ho..

mayank moved abit way...hand still on her wait...

M...hmmm..bikul jaisa chor kar gaya tha..

----Part 18
👏👏THEY ARE MARRIED.. CONGRATS!!!!👏👏
Love it all its hard to say which really made an impact on me most.😊.
i still cant get away from your MAGIC casting posts.. ur awesome..
Love Mayank..'s confidence... GO Mayank.👍🏼
more over.. shocker 😲 for me was Nups Dad.. but it made me happy😃...that at least someone out of the mummies n papas
still had a heart n brain...😆

Aww Sajan helping them out..
I loved Them opening door together .. n MAYANK carry Nupur.... 😳

------Part 19
nice.. mayank n nups parents pic.. 😛

lol.. Nups bhi na.. aate hi kitchen mein ..lol..😆
He held her from her waist

M..nupur..ye subha bhi ho sakta hai..

I love Mayur's room.. n i can just imagine the beautiful view..
(sigh...* ur writing about my dream house😍)

Lol.. Mayank... i love his one liners.. so funny n mischievous....
M..wasie nupur ye mumbai hai...yahan sab chalta hai..😆😲

....😭It ends...😭😭😭.
Love ur ending..😳 nothing could have been more Magical N ROMANTIC..😳
. but sad for me coz it ended.😔

But im sure that ull b back with another Magical FF.. with MaYUR OF COURSE...😉
i;ll be waiting eagerly.. and impatiently for the next FF..😍

---Ur awesome, beautiful and creative magical writer... 👏👏👏
dont stop writing..
I love all of ur FF, OS..

Thanks for PM!!!🤗

❤️-RABIAH

Edited by Rabiah - 15 years ago

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Radha

@rads14

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#508

amazing part!!
really beautiful!!
what a beautiful end!😍
bt sad that its ending
do write more ffs :)

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AmyArTiMayUr

@AmyArTiMayUr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#509

Oyeee Hoyeeee...Mehak how do you manage to write sooooo awesomely man??😃😃

It made me smile all through😃😃 those WIDE kinda smiles you know??😃😃😆😆

Why did it have to end?? Please write another one soon okies...i used to look forward to these updates every single day😃😃

So now i dont want to suffer from lack of vitamin Mehak's FFs...so please start one soon...preferably tomorrow😆😆

The last chap was MARVELLOUS😃😃 I laughed my head off when Nupur insisted on seeing the kitchen first😆😆 she was actually arranging spices on her wedding night...lols😆😆

And i totally loved the mischievous Mayank...teasing his wifey like that😆😆

All in all, a great update and an even GREATER FF....😃😃

Love ya🤗