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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#451

aww.. my poor nups..
part 14... felt bad 4 my MN...
deit parents r sooo cruel!!!!!!

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#452

part 15.. not fair..
MN ko alag kar diya...pehle unpe.. itne zulm ho rahe hai..
i wish... yeh 3 yrs.. jald hi khatm ho jayee!!!

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#453

awwww......mahek..
part 16.. beautiful..
i sooo luvd dis medivial style of romance!!!!!!!!
i'm sooo excitd 4 d next part!!!
terrific writin mahek...

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#454

* tight jhappis 2 u mahek*
part 17..i'm speechless...
luvd d dhassu entry of our hero mayu!
finally he proposd!!
i'm super duper excitd 4 d next part...
u r just my rockstar mahek...

Edited by -SupriyaluvsMN- - 14 years ago

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AWonderfulChaos

@AWonderfulChaos

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Posted: 14 years ago

#455

awesome!!

thats d only word that cumz to my mind aftr reading ur updates!

he proposing her....asking her.......was so so mayu style..lolz.....loved it!

waiting for their marriage now!

n the way u depicted their emotions on meetin after 3 years...were just gr8!!

thnx alot for d pm!😊

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#456

Thank u so much guys....🤗..and i am sorry if i miss out anyone of u in PMs..😕😳

PART 18:

The wedding functions were held seperately...the mehndi and sangeet function...
they dint meet or talked bcz according to nupur it was a bad omen..and mayank agreed to whatever she said..

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Finally the wedding day arrived...nupur walked down the stairs in a green and red lenhga...decked in jewellary...her eyes lowerd and mayank could still see his innocent nupur
in such heavy jewellary..she slightly lifted her eyes and she could see the praise in mayank's eyes,.she lowered them agian..

the final wedding rituals were performed..mayank and nupur completed the saat pheras...the filling of sindoor and the manglsutra..and both of them were announced
as a married couple...

SS..acha shashi g..hum apni beti ko us k asli ghr le kar ja rahe hain..ap fiqr mat kijiye ga...palkon pe bitha kr rakehn gey..

PB..arey kaisi batien kar rahi hain shilpa g..hamien pura yakeen hai k nupur ko ap api beti se barh kar pyar karen gi..

SB..bilkul...meri beti ap k ghr ja rahi hai is liye tu mujhe koi
fiqr nahhi hai..

MS..acha ab bidaai kar len...kafi time ho gaya hai..

SS..main bula kar lati hon..

Shipla went to mayank who was standing with samrat..

SS..chalo mayank...ab ghr chaltey hain..

M..hmmm..ab waqai ghr jana chaiye..

She was surprised at mayank's sarcastic tone, but she ignored..

SS..chalo nupur..

She held nupur's hand and started walking towards the exit...mayank was walking beside her..nupur knew that
mayank would not take her to that home..he had to take her to mumbai..but she was confused and scared..what will he say..and how..

PB.*hugging nupur*..acha beta..apna khayal rakhna..waise tu ik hi shehr hai..hum..

M..ik shehr nahi hai..

All of the four parents were shocked..

SS...kai mtlb?..

M..hum mumbai ja rahe hain..

Nupur closed her eyes...this was the moment she was fearing..

SB..mumbai ku?..

M..sir i have decided to shift to mumbai..

SS...mayank ye sab is waqt bolna zarori hai..mera mtlb hai ye sab baad main bhi..abhi bidaai tu ho jane do..

M..baad ku mom..ap hi ne tu kaha k ghr chalo..tu main ap sab ko apna ghr hi bata raha hon..mumbai main.

MS..mumbai main?..

M..yes dad..mumbai main..

SB..mayank..for god sake..stop creating a scene..chalo..

Shilpa was about to hold nupur's hand when mayank held her hand first..

M..mom scene ap create kar rahi hain..mujhe us ghr main nahi jana hai..

PB..ku wo tumhara ghr nahi hai?..ye tumhare parents hain..inta pyar karte hain tum se..

M..utna hi hai jitna ap nupur se karti hain..

PB..what?..mind ur..

SB..ik minute perena.*turning towards mayank*..kia kehna chahte ho mayank..?

M..sir main nupur ko le kar mumbai ja raha hon..abhi isi waqt..mujhe in k ghr nahi jana hai..

MS..mayank tum..

SB..ik minute mihir sahib...mayank mujhe ap se kuch sawal pochne hain..

M..ap nupur bauji hain..sirf isi liye jawab de raha hon..warna baqi yahan kisi ko jawab dene main main intrested nahi hon..

SB....mumbai main kahan le kar jao gey?..

M..mera ghr hai wahan..

MS..aur wo ghr bhi merey pasio se liya..

M..ik minute dad..main ne kaha MERA GHR HAI..MERA GHR..apni mehnat se liya hai..

MS..tu ye teen saal parh nahi rahe they..

M..nahi...kaam kar raha tha..apna ghr ban rah tha..jahan nupur ko le kr ja sakon..

Nupur's father turned towards nupur..

SB..beta ap ko mumbai jana hai?. ap is shaks pe yakeen karti ho?

Nupur lifted her eyes..and her eyes had tears..mayank holding her hands..she wasnt able tosay anything..

PB..shashi ap ye kia.log kia kahen gey..

SB..prerna ik minute..main apni beti se baat kar raha hon..boliye beta..ap ko jana hai..

She nodded her head..

SB..ap ko mayank pe bharosa hai?

Nupur again nodded her head..

SB..tu thek hai..mayank jab ap ki biwi ap yakeen karti hai tu main kaun hota hon rokne wala..

N..*disbelif in her eyes and a choking voice*..dad...

SB..beta ik khushi tu de hi sakta hon ap ko..

Nupru's tears started flowing...for the frist time she felt that
HER FATHER WAS ALIVE...

She moved forward and hugged her father..may be for the first time in 22 years..

M..thank you sir..

shasi bhushan smiled with teary eyes..

MS..mayank tum pagal ho gaye ho..itna paisa chor kar..

Myank ignored and turned his face away..

M..nupur chalen...

They both took the blessings of nupur's father and mayank held nupur's hand and walked towrds the exit..nupur looked behind..seeing her father..

today she had got the two most precious relations of her life..two men who loved her endlessly..

her husband and her father..

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They moved out of the gate and samrat was sitting in his car..and gunajn on the front seat with him..Mayank
opend the door of the car and nupur sat in first and then mayank..

S..so finally azaadi..

M..hmmm..

Nupur was looking out of the window

G..nupur tu thek hai na..

Nupur forced a weak smie..

N..hmm..

Mayank looked at her and he decided not to talk to her..she needed to be alone..he understood that it was difficult for a weak girl like her to leave her childhood home like this.no matter how bad the home was..

S..acha tu ab tum dono ko apne ghr le kar jata hon..flight man tu abhi do ghante hain

G..of course samrat..in dono ko change bhi tu karna hai an..aisey shaadi wale kapro main tu flight attend nahi kar sakte na..

Mayank and nupur were both silent..samrat and gunjan tried make them talk but in vain.

They reached samrat and gunjan's home...all four of them got out of the car..

S..gunajn zara gari se bag nikal do..

G..huh?..mai niklao..tumhian sharm nahi ati apni biwi se bag uthwate hoye..

S..oh ho gunajn main..

G..dekha jiju..itna badal gaya hai na shaadi k baad ye..pehle kia tha ur ab kia hai..lekin

S..stop it gunjan..itna halka bag tha...main hi nikal deta hon..

Gunjan smiled and mayank aslo smield with her..but nupur was lost in thoughts.

They entered the home

M..wow samrat..tumhara ghr tu ..

G..kaisa hai jiju?..

S....gunajn wo bol raha tha na..but as usuall u intreuppted..

G..samrat dekho tum..

M..bht acha hai..bilkul tum dono ki jori ki tarhan..

nupur also smlied a bit..

M..second floor dikhao gey..

S..arey haan cahlo..aur jaldi karo..fight ka bhi time ho raha hai..

G..chal nupur tu jaldi se change kar le.

N..lekin gunjan..merey pass tu koi kapre nahi hain..

G.. terey kamre ki sari chezen jo teri thi wo main ne pack karwa di thi..aunti se chup kar..

N..oh ok..

G...hmmm...abhi tu mumbai main

S..jaldi karoo

G..a rahen hain.chal nupur jaldi kar..

Nupur changed her lehnga..she wore a simple plain shalwar suit..hair tied in a clip..

Mayank also changed into a fullsleevc white shirt and pair of jeans..

S..Chalen ab?..

M....chalo..

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They reached the airport..mayank checked the tickets...they both hugged samrat and gunajn..

N..gunjan main..

G..acha acha..bus..main ro pari na tu phir muskil ho jyae gi..

S..biklul..i am a witness..

G..samrat..

M..thank u guys..u both are more than family..

G..excuse me jiju..we are a family..

All four of them group hugged and mayank and nupur moved into the lounge..the fight was almost ready..

they boarded the flight...and the plane took off..

M..nupur..

N..gi?..

M..tum thek ho?..

N..hmmm..

M..mujh se dar lag raha hai?..

She looked at him and may be his question was right..may be she was getting afarid of mayank..she was so used to that life..she was so waiting for this moment but when it arrived..she felt something strange.

N..pata nai..mujhe us zindagi ki itni addat par gayi thi..ab aisaey..main..

M..Its ok..hota hai..aur jita tum darti ho..i was totally expecting k ab ik do mahine tu tum mujh se 6 feet ki dori pe rajho gi..

N..huh?..what.

Nupur blushed and smiled..her cheeks turning pink..

M..kia?..asia hi hai na..

Nupur started laughing and she turned her face away..

Mayank leaned towards her ear..

M..mtlb aisa nahi hai?..

Nupur closed her eyes and hit him on his shoulder and placed her head on his shoulder..

N..nahi..

Mayank held her hand, kissed her forehead gently started playing with her hair..

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They reached mumbai...they both came pout of the airport..

N..ab tu bata dijiye k hamara ghr kahan hai?..

M..nupur wahin ja rahe hain..relax..

They sat in a taxi..teh luggage was only nupurs bag..

they reached a multi storey buliding..They moved in the buliding...and then in the lift..

mayank entered

FLOOR 15..

N..15..itna uper..

M...abhi tu main 25 pe lene wala tha..phir main ne socha..

N..acha kiya ap ne nahi socha..

Mayank giggled..

They reached the 15 floor and moved through the carpetted corridor..there were many flats and they reched their flat..

M...ye hai hamara ghr.

Nupru gently brushed her fingers over the closed door..

M...will u do the honours plz..

He put forward the keys..

N..main kholon?..

She was amazed..

M..ofcourse..

Nupur's hands started trembling a bit

N..sath kholen?..

Mayank smiled and held her hand ..they placed the key in the lock and revovled it..the lock opened..they turned the knob and opened the door...
nupur got the first view of her home..their home..

Nuur was about to step in when mayank held her hand..

M..ab darwaza sath khola hai ander bhi sat hi jate hain na..

Nupur smiled and nodded..she was about to hold his hand when mayank picked her up in his arms..

nupur was totally still at this sudden action of mayank..and mayank was expecting her shpck so he was smiling..

nupur was lost into his eyes..

They stepped in..

Edited by -Mehak - 14 years ago

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umaima

@cutiepie12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#457

yayyy finally 1st one to comment

oh GOD Mehak i jus loved it......wow mayank ka confidence level loved it .....nupur sooo cute n shy shy loved her alot..😍 wish sajan were also in da same city.... awww mehak it ws such a cute,simple,elegant with a slight flavour of deir sweet romance update😳 loved it alot yr......👏👏👏👏👏

Edited by cutiepie12 - 14 years ago

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Rumki

@rumki34

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Posted: 14 years ago

#458

Res
edited
omg awesome
so lovely update
i wish real life ma sara couple itna romantic hota.
I dont want to get married.but lagta hai tum mera wish dhera dhera badal de raha ho

Edited by .rumki. - 14 years ago