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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: komlika



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Posted: 14 years ago
Coming up in 15mins

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Posted: 14 years ago
FF completed 100 pgs



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Edited by komlika - 14 years ago
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HEYA LOVELY PPL... THANKS A TON FOR YOUR LOVE & SUPPORT... WOW HERE WE ARE COMPLETING OUR 100PAGES TODAY... CONGRATULATIONS... KEEP ON LOVING/SUPPORTING ME LIKE THIS ONLY... NEED IT BADLY...😛

Recap :-

Maan: TAANI... plz tell me... wo waise bhi bohot gusse mein gayi hai...
Taani proudly: dekha kaha tha na maine.. aapko meri help leni padegi..
Maan: haan baba, maan liya maine.. ab batao jaldi...
Taani: ITC Maurya..
Maan: ok...

Part 21 :-

maan rushed to hotel, gets every single detail of anu, geet n taani...but geet was not there at that moment...he was worried sick...then where she is???-he thought....she is not in office, not in home, not in hotel, then where can she go??....he turned to leave in disappointment, was about to make few calls & suddenly bumps into anurag...maan glare a shot to him but in a matter of second realised that he is not with geet now, they broke up...then he looked at him in hope, if she have any idea about geet...
Maan curiously: hey anurag.....do u know where geet is??
Anurag din't look at him, din't realise that he is a stranger n said: nahi yaar, pata nahi kahan hai, morning mein bhi bina mile chali gayi thi.. (then he looked at him quickly just get to know that to whom was he telling this..he din't recognize him & said) but excuse me, who are you?? n how do u know me n geet??
maan realized that he just bluntly asked him about geet without introducing himself..
Maan: hi.. i'm MAAN SINGH KHURANA..
Anurag confunsingly gave faint smile: hi.. yaar m so sorry, but i seriously din't recognize u.. do we know each other..
Maan smiles: no.. actually we are meeting up for the first time..
anurag stared him top to bottom.. "he is looking like a business man.. very professional... hmmm... if we are meeting for first time, then how do he know me??"- he thought... he just forgot that maan asked him about geet also... he thought his dad fixed some meeting with some of his dad's client, as he eagerly wanted anurag to join their business, & may be that way he is trying to trick anurag, to get into business and all...
Anurag very casually rounds his hand around maan's neck: dekh yaar, agar tu mere saath koi business meeting karne aaya hai toh please dad ko bol diyo tu mujhse yahan mila hi nahi, bcoz mujhe meeting mein koi interest nahi hai...
maan looks at him in surprise thinking if he is mad or what..
Anurag: ohhh i know tu yeh kaam free mein toh karega nahi, chal bol kya chahiye hai tujhe... jo bolega woh dunga...
Maan shots a glare to him & thinks "geet iss duffer ke saath relation mein thi..arghhh..well he have no idea who am i ??"
Anurag: bol na yaar... darr mat...
maan glare another shot & thinks "scared??? me??? bad joke...ohh god, yeh geet ka friend nahi hota toh ise mai abhi tak chodta nahi"
maan take off his hand from his neck...anurag jerks back & look at him in anger
Maan: well i think u don't know me.. who am i?
Anurag smirks: nor am i interested in knowing u...
Maan in stern voice: don't try to be over smart..
Anurag: i don't need to..i'm indeed..
maan thought there is no point of arguing with him, what was more important that time was GEET
Maan: whatever.. where is geet..??
Anurag: how am i suppose to know.. her phone is also off.. our flight is at 8pm & its already 5pm..
maan looks at his watch...
Anurag's senses strikes: but wait, u cannot be a cleint.. if u r asking about geet... then who are u??
Maan: told u i'm MAAN SINGH KHURANA
Anurag: oh god.. MAAN SINGH KHURANA toh aise bol raha hai yaar like if u own this world...
maan was losing his patience
Anurag: i mean.. i know u r MSK but how do u know us?? i have never seen u before..
maan explains him but din't tell him about his feelings...anu got him that he's the one about whom geet was talking about...anu tells him he has not seen geet after the party...maan gets restless & leaves from there...he makes few calls & got every detail of geet...he rushed to airport...
he reached departure area soon, saw her standing outside as if she was waiting for someone...
she saw him with a big grin on her face...
he walks to her
Maan: yeh kya mazak hai?? tumhe pata hai mai kitna pareshan tha, kitna dhoonda tumhe, kahin nahi mili aur tum yahan kya kar rahi ho (said bit angrly but more in concern)
geet kept quite
Maan: aise koi bina bataye kahin jaata hai kya..?? tumhari flight raat ki hai, abhi airport pe kya kar rahi ho...
geet's mouth was sealed
Maan shook her: bolti kyun nahi ho..?
she still din't say a word
Maan: ab yeh kya naya natak hai...
she looked away
Maan held her back in his embrace in a sudden jerk & shouts: geet bohot mazak ho gaya..
geet lost in his deep worried eyes... they looked in each other's eyes for few mins, where as others were enjoying looking at both of them😆...geet came back to her sense & widened her eyes & snapped back: mai babaji se kuch pray kar rahi thi.. 2min wait nahi kar sakte the.. chillane mein sabse aage ho...
maan glare a shot
Geet: kya hai??
maan thinks "she is first lucky girl on this earth, who is shouting on MAAN SINGH KHURANA"
Maan: tum yahan kya kar rahi hun...
Geet: shoot toh yahan hoga nahi mera... airport hai toh obviously flight ki wait kar rahi hun... i thought itna dimaag toh aapke andar hai but nahi...uff & starts giggling
Maan fumed with anger & pined her to the pillar: yahan meri jaan jaa rahi thi aur tumhe mazak soojh raha hai...
geet looked at him in shock with his reaction..
Maan: samajhti kya ho apne aap ko.. tumhari flight 8pm ki hai, abhi yahan kya kar rahi ho...
Geet bit scared of his anger: woh mai........
before she could have completed her sentence, announcement started for DEL-BOM flight...
Geet: suno.. meri flight abhi hai..
Maan looked at her in shock & narrowed his eyebrows: abhi?? (he was worried sick for her n she very easily told him that she is leaving)
Geet: hmmm
Maan looking lost: par tumhari toh....
Geet: haan raat ki thi, but aaj raat ko ek shoot hai, isliye abhi ki flight se jaana padega mujhe...
Maan with pleading eyes "not to go": aise kaise ja sakti ho??
Geet lifts her eyes: kya??
Maan: i mean kisi ko bina bataye aise kaise ja rahi ho...
Geet: haan woh actually, phone ki battery khatam ho gayi thi
Maan: still kisi ko toh inform kar sakti thi, telephone booth kisliye hote hain??
Geet: oops woh toh mai bhool hi gayi... aadat nahi hai na... acha chalo i'm getting late... thanks for coming... now plz do me a favour, plz do inform taani about this, she'll inform anu... takecare...
she left halfheartedly, but she was happy that maan was worried for her n he actually came here just to meet her... maan stood dumbstuck, seeing her leaving him like this...
Maan mummers "mai iske liye itna pareshaan tha aur yeh itna cold reaction dekar ja rahi hai...iski himmat kaise hui...aajtak kisi ladki ne MSK ko ignore nahi kiya..."
he makes another call n booked one ticket for DEL-BOM same flight in which she was travelling...
geet was helpless, she couldn't do much... she was already missing him, & leaving him like this without any sweet convo was hurting her, somehow she felt guilt that she hurted him..but she have a surprise for him, & to give that surprise, she had to do this...
he checks-in, board the flight & sits on his seat....after few mins of take-off, he swaps his seat with the person sitting next to geet.. she had her ear plugs on, music was on full volume, closed eyes... maan sits n just starred at her angelic beauty... she looked more beautiful everytime he see her....

Precap : more in plane😉

Edited by Manpreetmann - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome........ really loved it............. cant wait to read what happens in plane........

Edited by XXXYYYZZZ - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
anurag is too good 🤣 ............looking forward to more plane plane khel of maaneet 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey happy abt the update...it was nice...hoping to c more in the plane.....thnx for the update
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Posted: 14 years ago
really loved tht maan was shouting on geet and she was praying to babaji
the precap is nice and wht surprise has geet planned for maan
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Posted: 14 years ago
manpreeettt . ... ye teray liye 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗


thanks alot yaar


continue soon


luv,

Sana
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey komlika,

where's ur mama today?

normally pratima is online at this time naa


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