kismat ka khel updt 05/11 last part - Page 17

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome di...
dont wait for next..
loved it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
sorry guys
i had a problem with my laptop
it is working today
i will update on friday
sorry
once again
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Wow awsome ff pl add me on your pm list
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Next morning

Geet open her eyes to find her in a large room.

The room Is decorated''''''''

It is a huge room'''''''.

She didn't know where she is

New place again.

But geet ur supposed tobe wrong.

She came out.

It is a huge house ''''.and she saw a big mansion infron tof this

In that name

Khurana Mansion''''''.

She saw garden''''.

She smiled. and touched the flowers

Kitne khoobsoorat hay.geet sapna naii dekh rahi ho kya

Unaware of the fact that maan is looking her with lot of love in his eyes''''

She smiled.

She turned to find a beautiful girl in her night dress watching her

Geet thought she is the owner

Ohsorry I love flowers''''''''

So sorry

The girl smiled'''''

Don't worry

U can touch

Hai im anee.u must be gupta uncle's daughter

And what is ur name

Ohyes.geet

Hi im anvesha khurana'''''''''''''''

U know maan.bhai'''..means''''''maan singh khurana''''''''

Im his little sister''''''me and my twin brother Vicky stays at London'''''''''''

We came here on holidays

Just then she saw a young boy coming out'..

He is handsome not as maan'''''''''''''.

Hey beautiful'''I thought ur good.but ur so pretty''''''..

Im Vicky..vikrant singh khurana''''''..

Vicky anee.maan called.

They started running.

This is maan's house.

It is good''''''

And it Is beautiful..he didn't inform me about this.

Sheis confused''''.but'''''..geet is going to ask.but she remember that she is angry'''''''''.

Oh mein toh unpe naraaz hoo''toh phir kaise

Just then she saw.a old lady''''in her 60 yrs old

Smiled at heer

Aur mein inn sab ke daadi''''''.

Savitri devi khurana''''..

She remembered she talked on phone.

Before she could speak.she saw maan coming from the opposite room''''''

She suddenly remained quiet'''''.

Oh new plan.

Mr maan singh khurana''''''.

U will know who is''''..

And ur messing with geet handa.

She smiled.

Next day morning

He gone out.

When he returned to finde''''..anee and geet is chattering

He knew she is a chatter box

And even Vicky.also''.suddenly they start fighting

Aftersome time dadi also joined them'.

They all playing ''''''''''something''''.

Chatting playing..the whole family is enjoying.

He came and took newspaper.but only checking on geet''

She wore a peech color dress .as usual complementing her figure''''..

Open hairs'

Yeh ladki pagal karegii;

Dadi liked the girl.

The first thing she never scared of maan,her friendly and bubbly nature'..fun loving'''''..

She liked'''''''..her nature''.

She also'''mingle with Vicky and anee'''''''''''.

Maan looking at her.

Either she ignores him'''.or didn't look at him.

Try to converse with her.but she escapes''''''''''

She also prepares food for dadimaa and anee 's choice''

Geet pass the water.

She passes the water without looking at him'''.

He knew she is angry''

So he decided to pacify her.

Next day morning.he finishes his tai chi..as he about to return to his room''''''''''

He thought of talking to her and warn her to not to tell her anything''''.

As he enter the room.

He heard the door click open''''''''''..

He saw she is coming out from the washroom''''''''

He just stared at her without blinking''''''''''.

Water drops are falling from her forehead'''''''..

Ek ajnabi sa ehsaas dil ko sataye

shayad yahi to pyaar hai

betabiyon mein dhadkan meri chal paye

shayad yahi to pyaar hai

kutch bhi kaha na

kutch bhi suna

kutch bhi suna na

phir bhi

bechain dil hai humara

behke kadam hai

mushkil main hum hai

dekho

sambhle bhala kaise yaara

chahe bina bhi

nazdeek hum chale aaye

shayad yahi toh pyaar hai

nazrein bichade

pehre laga de

dil pe

par dil kisiki na maane

Kaaton pe chalke

sholon mein jalke

roke

milke rahenge deewane

o o o

chahat ki lau to

aandhi mein bhi zilmilaye

shayad yahi to pyaar hai

Ek ajnabi sa ehsaas dil ko sataye

shayad yahi to pyaar hai

ye mulaqatein

yeh teri ankhein

ek pal na main bhool pau

kitni mohabbat

hai kitni chahat

tumse

kaise bhala main bataoo

Acha lage jo

toh samne muskuraye

shayad yahi to pyaar hai

Ek ajnabi sa ehsaas dil ko sataye

shayad yahi to pyaar hai

kutch bhi kaha na

kutch bhi suna na

phir bhi

bechain dil hai humara

behke kadam hai

mushkil main hum hai

dekho

sambhle bhala kaise yaara

chahe bina bhi

nazdeek hum chale aaye

shayad yahi toh pyaar hai - 5

o rama ha ha haha ho ho hoho

he step forward

and she took backward...

until she is cornered''''''''..

he is lost in the beautiful eyes'''''''

and she once again lost in his eyes

that eyes''''..she want to stare.

His hands on her waist''.and her hands on his shoulders'''''''''

As they are not known that someone is watching them

I find something different inmy hot brother's eyes

I have my eyes on you

I observed u.when ur staring from newspaper'''..and even in ur laptop also

Waiting for chances to talk to her

Something something'''''''''..

But don't worry bro ab ap ke bol dadimaa ke samne'''''.

Ab kya hogaa'''.maan bhai''''''..

Agee ke kahani'''''''''

Agle part mein''''''...

Edited by srilu_123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part...
love it.😳😳
cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
mindblowing update.
love it.
do continue plz.
thx
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Just then his phone ring;

And he took it…………

And looked at the number

He need to realize geet……………………………….

Geet took the opportunity and freed from him and ran back………………

She came to the room

And run out of breath

She looked at self at mirror

He knows that ur weak…………and when ever he touches what happens to u

U r self loose control…………………….

And he knows that

Don't fall for it.

Be strong.

Just then servant inform her that all are waiting for her at breakfast table.

She went down.

To find him staring at her…..

She didn't look at him………………………..

She served the breakfast to all.

He want to look into her eyes and communicate but she is not giving chance.

Just then Vicky…………..

Chewing the food…………..

Accha geet…………………………….u have a bf…………….

Geet looked at him in shock.

Where as maan chocked the food………………

Anee and dadimaa looked at him in shock…………

Bf……….

Maan replied what rubbish………………….

Vicky:bigb I asked ………………….geet not u……………………….she can answer questions right…………………….

He looked at geet……………………………

She gave a glare

And took a deep breath and said yes………………….

Maan gave his famous angry glare to her.

She smiled……………………….and said…………………..

Vicky:oh what is his name

Geet:john……………………………..

Maan shocked.

Vicky.what john is ur boy friend

Yes Vicky he is a boy and my friend…………..that is boy friend……………..

Maan felt a relif and smiled at her childishness

He just loved it……………..

He is trying his level best to not to smile……………

Vicky…………………….

Dadimaa smiled at her innocence………kitne masoom hay yeh bachhi…………..

She patted her back…and smiled.

Aap log yese smile kyon karthe hay…………………………….

Kuch nahii beta…………….

Yeh Vicky toda saitaan hay……………iss ko toh mein dekhlungi………………..and with that she hold vicky's ear tightly.

He screamed oh dadi.im just joking………………………….

She realized………………

But dadi.i got my answers………………..

I may ask questions to geet.but bigb.face had revealed lot of things…..

He smiled and think of another plan……….

Vicky:Oh then im also ur bf right geet………………………….

She just looked at him……………………..

Maan gave a look to Vicky just enough to murder him……………

Vicky:Ha im also boy and im ur friend right………………

Geet: But ur not my bf..ur just Vicky……………

Vicky:Why……………………..

Geet:I cannot trust u………………….

Vicky:Why

Geet: Because ur dust danaav's brother first. I don't belive u may be change like him. naa…………………………………

The last………………line strucked maan………..

He looked at her

She replied…..

Dust daanav………..

Trio shocked…………………..

Haa dadimaa.yeh dust danaav hay..raaskhas hay…dus sar wala ravaan…………

Vicky smiled……remembering…………………maan with ten heads..he smiled holding his stomach…………………………………..

Where as anee and dadi maa broke into big laughter

Which cause………………maan fumed in anger………………………..

As geet is saying her head bending counting his numerous names on her finger

Making all the trio laugh louder……..\he got very angry

Just then……………………..

Stop it geet……………

Geet he shouted louder…………….

She stood up….

And with a glare ……………………………………………

She got near to him……………………..

Maan surprised at her act.

She reached him and said mein aap se nahii darthi hay

Apna bp jyada mat badavo………………aur……………….

Tum………sab sa bada……sab se bada…..

Dust danaav hoo…………………dus sar wala ravaan hoo.

With that she stromed out.and start running…………

\where maan ran after her………….

Trio laughed seeing the chase………………………….

Geet is running..

But she completely forget that this ishis house.and he knows………

At a particular………………..instance she stopped .

And suddenly she felt a pull……………………….at her waist.

And with in seconds she is pinned to a wall of a room…………………………

He is just looking at the hazzle eyes…………………

Which he loved the most.

She is breathing heavily…………………and to her chest………………..

Due to this her duppatta falled far………….reaveling her cleavage……………..

Herlips are part apart…………………….

And her shivering due…………

Not knowing that what are the thoughts created……..in his mind.

He is loosing ……………………

And he dip his head in her hair feeling the aroma

And once again she lost in him.

His strong hands…………………..on her waist.

She looked at him.

There is something in dark brown intense eyes which makes anyone…………fall………………………..

They both stare…………..

Geet:he whispered in a husky voice making her weak ……………………….

She looked at him………………….

Please ……………muje yesa mat dekho………………………………….

Saying that he started kissing her neck…………………..

Geet drop her head..to give him more access…………………………..

He hold her waist and pulled her closer………………………………………..

Geet…………….please muje se baat karo………………………………

He start to kiss the neck……

Geet is moaning……………………………

She felt she is loosing…………..

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome part
very bad why hang like that.
loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
🤣🤣🤣🤣 i loved the way geet gave back to maan...wah meri sherni..way to go...do continue soon...
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hey wher r u?
log time no seen...

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