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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG girl !!! yu just get better and better each part !
AWESOME update !! BRAVO ! 👏
I hope that Shashank would accept him to clear things out !
and if Riddhima some how could stop him ..... that would be awesome !
And i hope n the airport they have a hug and a passionate kiss before Armaan leaves !

YOURE THE BEST !
I LOVE your writing skilllsssss !!!!!!!!
Please update soon cause once the story line becomes interesting i have the urge to read it quicker ! so will you update today tomorrow or wat ?
and wat time ?

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK HUN !
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: wilddevil2010

I don't think d situations could b compared. Wat Ridz did was at a very initial stage of their relationship but Armaan had messed up things after their relationship had matured.
So I didnot like Ridz relization. D truth however twisted will remain d same, which is ,that it is Ridz who had 2 tolerate d worse.

To b honest I don't think I can forgive Armaan completely no matter wat he does especially for d way he left Ridz on d airport. Sorry is not enough.

Even Shanky doesn't deserve forgiveness. His daughter's happiness has no value in his eyes. Typical. I hope Ridz never forgives him.

Continue soon

Oh common.. the situations can totally be compared coz the emotions underlying them were essentially 'almost' the same.. only they were more intense and magnified by time.. i agree that the phase in their relationship was different.. i was going to put it in there.. but i didnt coz that would mean another para of stubborn denial and then realization for Riddhima.. and it certainly saved her and the readers a few more tears.. lol.. also taking into account the fact that ultimately she too wants Armaan..😳 and even i was in a hurry to get them together now!! lol!! 😆
Armaan messed up alright and Riddhima endured the pain. but i am not repeating that i have repeated a hundred times of how he feels the same pain that she does. even if you think that is filmy crap, Riddhima herself at some level was responsible for what happened..
Love is not always what matters. sometimes other emotions take over.. and for a guy who's been accused of ruining his parents' life in the past Shashanks acusations hurt more than they should have. for someone who's actually believed at some point in life that they are nothing but a burden and bad luck to the people who love them, it shattered him to know he was back to it again.. i know i made his life a little too tragic, but then it a story.. so in his eyes he saw Riddhima's love, but it got overshadowed by the realization that Dr. Shashank was right and his love was wrong..
what he did was still wrong.. made hasty decsions.. but came around.. another part of his emotional potential that needs to be explored is that all said and done he shouldnt have left her if he loved her so much.. like she couldnt bring herself to imagine a life without him, nor could he.. how did he still bring himself to separate himself from her.. that is what Riddhima will realize as time passes..
and of course time heals.. i am sure these two weeks wont matter two years down the line. fortunately Riddhima is the forgiving types.. otherwise poor guy would have to actually wait forever..😛😆
and lastly about Dr. Shashank.. are you serious.. he shouldnt be forgiven ever.. he did what a dad had to do.. he's still right in his place.. wronged by his ego.. he just needs to see through it.. hopefully he will.. but i dont think giving up your family for the love of your life is the right thing to do.. and it is so not true that he doesnt care about his daughter.. its because he cares so much is why he's so reluctant to give her away to someone he thinks is wrong.. you have to see things from his veiwpoint too.. everything is not about just love..
And above all this is a story.. in a perfect world, shashank wouldnt have caught them, Armaan would have spoken to him, he would be impressed and Armaan and Riddhima would have been married by now.. whats the fun in that.,🥱
also if Armaan had not overheard shashank's unfair accusation he would have fought for Riddhima.. of course in that case he would not have left her alone.. nor would she have to run away.. but then again, whats the fun in that..😆
in conclusion.. i am sorry to have bugged you with this long reply but i had to defend my characters.. its almost like another update. lol! but that also shows that i could not get across my point in the update. so my apologies..
and keep reading.. i hope you agree with the further updates.. and please try to forgive Armaan.. pretty please..😛😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Superb. I really have to find some new superlatives to describe your updates. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sary-

He looked up at her at that.. "I needed you Riddhima.. I needed you that night.. Not to cradle me in your arms and tell me that I am not wrong.. But to convince your dad that I am right.. He accused me of taking advantage of you.. Of being a bad influence on you.. And by running away, turning your back on him, you proved him right Riddhima.."


THAT MADE ME SO SO SO SO HAPPY :| :| :| SHIZ! This is why I was always team Armaan ROFL cos no matter what he does he has a reason and a legitimate one too behind it! He has a reason behind his madness LOL That makes him Armaan Malik :) I loved Riddhima's realization too sighhhh :) I hope Airport scene is a cute and romantic one instead of a tragic one then again tragic one would have more impact on me so IDK what I want LOL As for Shanky -_- what does he want now?! LOL Anyway looking forward to another update :) Take your time though!

for those who dont want to read the entire thing.. this was the main point of the update.. this is what i actually wanted to get across..
thanks Sary 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great part!! Loved how Armaan is redeeming his mistakes and glad that Riddhima is going to talk to him. Hope shashank lets go of his ego and doesnt create more problems for them. Cont soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: armaanlover_7

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Rachna...............what a part!
I think this may be the most difficult part for you to write.I mean to write Armaan and Shashank conversation where Armaan trying to make things right is very difficult.
You have to think as Armaan as well as Shashank.Both were right.
That part was very well written

Then Ridhima -Armaan part.I am so touched.You said that there is something we have missed.So...this was it.right?

He looked up at her at that.. "I needed you Riddhima.. I needed you that night.. Not to cradle me in your arms and tell me that I am not wrong.. But to convince your dad that I am right.. He accused me of taking advantage of you.. Of being a bad influence on you.. And by running away, turning your back on him, you proved him right Riddhima.."

If this what we missed,yes you are right.I have missed this point.Armaan is right.She should not have proven him right.

Ridhima's realisation part was so beautiful.I liked the way you compared two situations which were different but also common.The way you connected the past and present was superb.
I really like this quality of yours.You remember each and minute details of your story which happened in the past and connect it with the present.

All in all,I have to say."This part is very well written and it is fantastic"
Congruats for completing 4th thread and also for the 5th thread.Will meet you in the new thread.

that is not the only point that was missed. more to come.. wait for it! 😃
and thank you so much!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing..youre parts always bring tears in my eyes .

Loved it to bits . Continue soon .
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Angel.ARlover

Amazing..youre parts always bring tears in my eyes .


Loved it to bits . Continue soon .

Thank you! 😊
sorry for the tears.. 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
Omg honestly i have to say this was one really good update
I loved it from start to end
I love how armaan had regained his confidence
I love How riddhima realized in the end and she ran to him
Just perfect
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Rachna.

I don't know what to say on your update.. I am still full with lots lots of emotions in my heart after reading this part. Must tell you this by far one of the most most beautiful, excellent, emotional,part of any story i have read so far.
Hats off to you Gal.👏

The first part was really touching.Arman is a true frnd. And Nikki is not less ..
I really wish I had a frnd like Arman/Nikki. There is so much understanding between them , it's just beyond comparison.

It's so true when you said "She hated herself now, to shed tears for him.. But when it came to him, she was helpless.."
When you are in love there is always one person in front of whom all your resolutions just failed. Your heart doesn't listen to you anymore and stared beating just for one person. But must say it's the most beautiful felling anyone could ever feel regardless of the result.

The part between Arman and Padma is really nice. It shows that Arman is a son every mother could ask for .

Loved the conversation between Arman and Dr. Shshank. It's very true that a father is always worried about his daughter even if his daughter chooses the best man in the world . Somewhere his mind keeps on telling him that he could have got bestest man for his daughter (I know there is no word like bestest 😛)

And last the part between Arman and Ridhima was very emotional .. That made me cry .. "I needed you Riddhima.. I needed you that night.. Not to cradle me in your arms and tell me that I am not wrong.. But to convince your dad that I am right.. He accused me of taking advantage of you.. Of being a bad influence on you.. And by running away, turning your back on him, you proved him right Riddhima..",

I guess eveybody got this point and whoever hated Arman for his act now cooled down a bit. 😉

Arman is bet boyfriend any body can wish 😍



I really appreciate the fact that he decided to back to continue his work and not staying back. I mean i don't know if that will melt down Dr. shashank or not but if definitely profs that
"Arman is a better person and best Doctor "


Arman is just perfect in every aspect or should i say your story has made him perfect in every way.

Waiting to see what happens next.. Hope nothing goes wrong @ Airport. Hope to see the next update soon.. And really sorry for the extra long comment but could n't help it writting 😉

Thnx for the PM..


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