The World's Oldest Story!! #4 AR - Page 117

Awesome update rachna! It was good u didn't rush her into armaan's arms :)
I am guessing Armaan would have left by the time she gets to the airport and shashank would follow her to the airport - and I will let you unfold the rest of the drama your style!!

My favorite past time is waiting for your updates :) Thanks and keep writing!!

Originally posted by: wilddevil2010

I don't think d situations could b compared. Wat Ridz did was at a very initial stage of their relationship but Armaan had messed up things after their relationship had matured.
So I didnot like Ridz relization. D truth however twisted will remain d same, which is ,that it is Ridz who had 2 tolerate d worse.

To b honest I don't think I can forgive Armaan completely no matter wat he does especially for d way he left Ridz on d airport. Sorry is not enough.

Even Shanky doesn't deserve forgiveness. His daughter's happiness has no value in his eyes. Typical. I hope Ridz never forgives him.

Continue soon

I respectfully choose to disagree that the situation cannot be compared. May be not directly but the underlying emotions were the same- No matter what stage of a relationship u are in, U think u know what's best for the other person and when you are hurt and u want to do the right thing, it's always something impulsive and mostly stupid.

Yes- the thick headed armaan could have not left her especially when she begged, but he was impulsive and she will eventually forgive him, but he will never forgive himself or forget it. That crying face at the airport is always going to taunt him.

As far as Shanky is concerned, he will come around- but like any father he is not going to accept that easily that his daughter, his princess openly defied him for someone else. That's a pretty big blow to any father and unless she can mend the relationship with her dad and explain why she choose armaan and reconcile , she can't live happily with armaan. Parents always come around and will want what's best for their child. Riddhima needs to talk to her dad and make him understand- he might not welcome her thoughts or accept it immediately, but eventually he will. She has to nurse his egos by putting hers aside ..

Enough rambling for today!!!

And if there was no twist, how would Rachna continue the story and keep us gripped 😉 ????

hiiii

Omggggggggggggg Congratss ZAPPY...completeed the 4th thread and moving onto the 5th :D So happyy for you and this ff :D

hi, enjoyed reading the part, well written... Like the old Armaan back, maybe dont dislike him so much now.. And like I said, Ridhima did the same once so they're almost (almost being the operative word) quits ;-)

HAWW, WHAT THE HELL IS SHANKY GONNA DOO?
Oh god this was awesome Rachna :D
Makes my mornings, this FF really does :)

The way Armaan talked to Shashank and Riddhima matter of factly and with the right amount of emotions just bowled me over! Riddhima actuallu understands where he was coming from!

And yeah even i was wondering how she forgot how she had once pushed him away for a much trivial reason. Awesome that you put in that as a perpective !

Great part, Very very real and i wish there was a TV version of this FF :D

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Rachna...............what a part!
I think this may be the most difficult part for you to write.I mean to write Armaan and Shashank conversation where Armaan trying to make things right is very difficult.
You have to think as Armaan as well as Shashank.Both were right.
That part was very well written

Then Ridhima -Armaan part.I am so touched.You said that there is something we have missed.So...this was it.right?

He looked up at her at that.. "I needed you Riddhima.. I needed you that night.. Not to cradle me in your arms and tell me that I am not wrong.. But to convince your dad that I am right.. He accused me of taking advantage of you.. Of being a bad influence on you.. And by running away, turning your back on him, you proved him right Riddhima.."

If this what we missed,yes you are right.I have missed this point.Armaan is right.She should not have proven him right.

Ridhima's realisation part was so beautiful.I liked the way you compared two situations which were different but also common.The way you connected the past and present was superb.
I really like this quality of yours.You remember each and minute details of your story which happened in the past and connect it with the present.

All in all,I have to say."This part is very well written and it is fantastic"
Congruats for completing 4th thread and also for the 5th thread.Will meet you in the new thread.