FF (Shiv-Gauri): The Oldest Story... -pg. 140, 142 - Page 66

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Posted: 14 years ago
I just tried resisting this FF oh so much.....din wanna read on Shiv-Gauri 😉

but you have that charm to not let go only....and I was so drawn to it...that I ended up reading this and see now I'm even commenting lol

But seriously its awesome...loving this one more than anything....some times I feel the serial is crap though I've just watched a few epis nothing more....gosh this can be well transformed into a novel just like Love and Despair....

Waiting for the next update......and yeah I love Gauri this way...too sensual and happening 😳

Take Care,
Fatima

P.S: OMG....I just commented after the update....lemme read it first and then I'll edit this one again 😳

OMG......that was freaking awesome man.....gosh the aphrodisiac is really turning her on 😳
and Shiv is no less ....I'm at loss of words at the moment....and she wants it for just a nite?
gods knows whats gonna unfurl in the coming updates :)

do you really a comment outta here...??....I guess no...
this will suffice I guess.... :)
Good read....now I'm waiting for the next part ...

what have you done to me devi ?
Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG!
He does not want to cus it is not right in the present moment and she wants to just for this nite.!
OH God!
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Posted: 14 years ago
u shud release this as a novel lolz
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful update

After d previous part I was scared whether Shiv would take advantage of d situation but I m glad he did not.

D whole SG convo was awesome. 2 b honest even I had d same opinion abt Shiv.

It looks like v r finally going 2 get an ultra hot part.

Pls continue soon

P.S. I luvd d last line.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow! he doesnt wanna do it and Now she wants too!
im on shiv sides, he is right..only when gauri is willing to do it.

ugh! I have exam on the 7th and im sitting here craving for the updates..*sigh*

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Posted: 14 years ago
Mom's interruption was ill timed in more ways than one! I wonder how Shiv is going to make Gauri realize that he is now a truly reformed rake...

About the update, he does not want to go the whole way and make it all about her pleasure...😉 while she wants to go the whole way..This should be interesting to read...

Kya Shiv Gauri ke advances resist kar payega? Kya Gauri Shiv ke control ko break kar payegi? Ya phir se mommy interrupt karengi??? Jaanne ke liye intezaar kariye agli update ka....

PS: You should seriously consider becoming a playwright...each of the scenes is something to watch out for...No doubt, you are a good story teller but the scenes that you weave are magical!
Edited by -pixie- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
two awesome updates.......as great as ever.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMGGGG...the night keeps gets better and better.....do update soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
I cannot believe....it....
I am already requesting another update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
omgosh! That was some outburst 4rm gauri, n im glad he didnt leave. And shivs thought bout nt needin nething to assist them lol well mayb they do as its the ice breaker 4 them lol o my my cnt wait 4 mre

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