'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103) - Page 73

Originally posted by: .PINK.

hey gr88 last part :)

do write other FFzz :)

Thank you Linu. Really glad you liked the ending. Not sure if I would write more FFs as my hactic lifestyle doesn't allow me for such commitments 😊 Perhaps I will continue to write SS or OS..you never know 😊

-Neela

@Neela

Originally posted by: -roshnee-

so the letter is the confession? tanmay is mayank! then why did dia let her go through all the turmoils?it cant be possible leaving in a small town, that you dont know your best friend's other best fried! she should have told her about mayank considering her condition!and why didnt mayank himself clear all the confusions! he was there! he saw her going lifeless misunderstanding him!

Roshnee,

I know you have been very consistent in your comments but I did not always manage to reply, sorry for that. But I will do my best to respond to the comments this time.

About the letter...its entirely up to you. If you think the letter contains the confession of Mayank being Tanmay then so be it. About Diya...I am not sure why you think Diya knew about Tanmay/Mayank. She may have come to know this truth at the same time as Nupur did..we don't know. I portrayed Diya's character very well that too as a true and loyal friend. Why would readers even imagine that she would do anything that will further hurt or harm her best friend? Even, for argument sake, lets assume she knew all along but she did not reveal the truth, as a true friend she will obviously have her reasons, right or wrong who knows! To sum it up, whether she knew it or not, Diya never had any intention or has done anything to hurt Nupur. In fact I would rather like to believe that she has done everything possible to help Nupur out of that disastrous situation.

Why didn't Mayank clear himself? Thats a question I'd rather have my readers answer it. My answer is already in the story 😊 If you believe that Mayank had a choice and rather preferred to see Nupur go lifeless each day, then I'd say it was a failure on my behalf as a writer to portray Mayank's love for Nupur and I will remain truly repentant for not being able to justify Mayank and Nupur properly in Intikhaab.

Thanks for reading and your comments. It was a great experience having you on board as a reader.

-Neela

oh my god

superb update

awesome ending neela
so tanmay is mayank ,unexpected twist
i know mayur are forever together
miss this ff
thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

tanmay mayank kasay hosakta hai..mayank tu UK mein tha...aur is ny yeah sab kuch se usko guzarnay kyun diya...

humain kuch samhj nhi aay...i need an explanation...

is k matlab mayank nupur k sath tha her pal her pahar...phir kyun us k marta hoa dekh ker bhi woh kuch na bolo...

mil gaya sawalo k jawab...tu mayank ko na sahi per tanmay ko buhat kuch yaad hai...

neela is se zayada confusion uff...

still res kyun k abhi hum kuch samhj nhi parhy ...aur coment kerny k lyan humain yeah samhjna hai

...

uper reaction tha...ab coment😆

Intikhaab meray liyan ek jazabaat se bahra ek safar tha'jis mein ek tharaf khoi hoi muhabbat ny apna rasat hi nhi banaya bulkay manzil bhi pai'.

Jaha humain laga k ab sab kuch khatam hogaya tu pata chalay k hum ny mohabbat per atebar hi nhi kiya'hum bhi Nupur ki tarha thoray jazabati hain'.aur jab zindagi se zayda mayank ny apni muhabat per atebar ker k sab kuch ek fair tale k taraha ek dam perfect kerdiya'tu sach pochy tu last update tak humain lag tha k asa hoi nhi sakta 'shadi ki tayari kasay hosakti hai..as hoi nhi sakta'..per asa hoaa'.

Per kisamt tu kismet hai'per ap ki yeah khwubi ke her haal muhabbat amar rehti hai'.humain buhat achi lagti hai'.

Per abhi bhi humain samhj nhi aya akhir tanamy ny yeah sachi kyun chopai'akhir kyun us ny us waqt Nupur k sach nhi bataya aur us ko nhi sambhala'hum janty hain us ki kasam beech mein aai'per phir bhi'.pata nhi yeah baat nhi samhj aaii'ya shayd us ny yeah tareeqa thik samhja '

Aur mayank k yeah jumla "mila gaya ap ko jawab"..tu kiya tanmay ko kuch yaad hai'.

Bahar hal is FF k sath ek baat tu hogai'jo loog ap ko na jany kyun tragedy queen khaty thy woh nhi kah pay gay'

Ek aur khubsoorat tahreer k lyan shukriya'.ap k epilogue k muntazeer'..

FIZA

PS: meri aur laiba k eek request ap nazar andaz na keray pls'ek choti se hi sahi summary humain pm kerdain pls'..agar neela ny logo se na pocha hota tu tab bhi kiya yeahi hota'wasay mayank aur tanamy k ek hona is baat k saaboot hai'..phir bhi

Fiza...love the reaction. unn kuch jumle ke beech AAp me humnain apne Intikhaab ki Nupur ko dekha. sach me aap sahi maainon me hamari Nupur hai. jab Mayank usske saamne khara tha aur woh usse dekhi jaa rahi thee...uss waqt usski shakal bilkul waisi hi lagi hogi jaisi aap ne banaya hoga yeh update parhke 😆 sacchi me...aap ko nahi lagta jitne sawal aapke zehen me utray utne hi Nupur k bhi? jis mohabbat ki woh bas taswwar kiya karti thee woh mohabbat hamesha usski aankhon ke saamne raha per usse dikhayi nahi diya..hai na ajeeb si baat!

ab aate hai aap ke sawalon per...halankein saare sawalon k jawab kahani me hi hai phir bhi..Tanmay ne sach kyun chupaya? thik hai..to hum aapse poochte hai...aap meri Nupur ho...aap batayye...humnain aapko email k zariye Simran ki sacchai batayi...apne dil ka haal bayaan kiya phir bhi aap humain nahi samjhi (note Mayank ko pata nahi tha k Nupur ne email parha hi nahi), jab kuch dino baad ussne phone kiya to aapki bepanah naffrat ko mehsoos kiya...itna naffrat k aap ne qasam de di k woh aapse raabta na kare. in haalaton me ek hi raasta bacha tha...Tanmay bannke Nupur ko samjhana per jab woh wapas aaya Tanmay bannke aur apne aankhon se Nupur ki haalat dekhi woh darr gaya k inn halaton me woh tanmay ki sacchai nahi sunn payegi...ho sakta hai apni haqeeqat chupane k liye woh uss per aur bhi ghussa hojaye. bas waqt sahi nahi tha uss sach ko saamne laanay k liye. usske liye Nupur ka sanbhalna zyada ahem tha aur woh kaam woh Tanmay bannke kar sakta tha, Mayank bannke nahi. aur ussne wohi kiya...Nupur ko uss aazab se bahar nikaal laane ki poori kaushish ki aur kisi hudh tak kaamyab bhi raha. agar uss aakhri mulaqat me ussne Mayank ki mohabbat ka ahsaas na dilwaya hota Nupur ko to shayed Nupur woh emails baghair parhe hi delete kar deti...phir yeh sab kahan hota? Was he wrong? I don't know..per ussne Nupur k liye sab kuch kiya...usse bachane k liye..bas!

Aur Nupur ka woh jumla.."mil gaya jawab?" actually Mayank ko kuch bhi yaad nahi. jo ussne kaha dil se kaha...dimagh se nahi. Nupur ki yaadein usski dil me hai aur yeh dil hi usse Nupur k paas khinch laayi hai. usska dil Nupur se na-aashna nahi isi liye to woh usse khul ke baat kar paaraha tha...hai na?

aap ki p.s. wali note pe baad me comment karte hai 😊 aur haan..Intikhaab me hamari Nupur banne k liye shukriya. humnain hamesha aap ki tehreer me aur aap ki jazbon me Nupur ko dhoondha aur hamesha Nupur ko hi paaya. Thank you..for being there 😊

-Neela

i knew it i knew it i knew it