'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103) - Page 74

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sharneel



Fiza...love the reaction. unn kuch jumle ke beech AAp me humnain apne Intikhaab ki Nupur ko dekha. sach me aap sahi maainon me hamari Nupur hai. jab Mayank usske saamne khara tha aur woh usse dekhi jaa rahi thee...uss waqt usski shakal bilkul waisi hi lagi hogi jaisi aap ne banaya hoga yeh update parhke 😆 sacchi me...aap ko nahi lagta jitne sawal aapke zehen me utray utne hi Nupur k bhi? jis mohabbat ki woh bas taswwar kiya karti thee woh mohabbat hamesha usski aankhon ke saamne raha per usse dikhayi nahi diya..hai na ajeeb si baat!

ab aate hai aap ke sawalon per...halankein saare sawalon k jawab kahani me hi hai phir bhi..Tanmay ne sach kyun chupaya? thik hai..to hum aapse poochte hai...aap meri Nupur ho...aap batayye...humnain aapko email k zariye Simran ki sacchai batayi...apne dil ka haal bayaan kiya phir bhi aap humain nahi samjhi (note Mayank ko pata nahi tha k Nupur ne email parha hi nahi), jab kuch dino baad ussne phone kiya to aapki bepanah naffrat ko mehsoos kiya...itna naffrat k aap ne qasam de di k woh aapse raabta na kare. in haalaton me ek hi raasta bacha tha...Tanmay bannke Nupur ko samjhana per jab woh wapas aaya Tanmay bannke aur apne aankhon se Nupur ki haalat dekhi woh darr gaya k inn halaton me woh tanmay ki sacchai nahi sunn payegi...ho sakta hai apni haqeeqat chupane k liye woh uss per aur bhi ghussa hojaye. bas waqt sahi nahi tha uss sach ko saamne laanay k liye. usske liye Nupur ka sanbhalna zyada ahem tha aur woh kaam woh Tanmay bannke kar sakta tha, Mayank bannke nahi. aur ussne wohi kiya...Nupur ko uss aazab se bahar nikaal laane ki poori kaushish ki aur kisi hudh tak kaamyab bhi raha. agar uss aakhri mulaqat me ussne Mayank ki mohabbat ka ahsaas na dilwaya hota Nupur ko to shayed Nupur woh emails baghair parhe hi delete kar deti...phir yeh sab kahan hota? Was he wrong? I don't know..per ussne Nupur k liye sab kuch kiya...usse bachane k liye..bas!

Aur Nupur ka woh jumla.."mil gaya jawab?" actually Mayank ko kuch bhi yaad nahi. jo ussne kaha dil se kaha...dimagh se nahi. Nupur ki yaadein usski dil me hai aur yeh dil hi usse Nupur k paas khinch laayi hai. usska dil Nupur se na-aashna nahi isi liye to woh usse khul ke baat kar paaraha tha...hai na?

aap ki p.s. wali note pe baad me comment karte hai 😊 aur haan..Intikhaab me hamari Nupur banne k liye shukriya. humnain hamesha aap ki tehreer me aur aap ki jazbon me Nupur ko dhoondha aur hamesha Nupur ko hi paaya. Thank you..for being there 😊

-Neela

hasay hasay humari halat per...humara moo khola k khola rah gaya ...jab humny yeah soch kya yeah tanmy ...nhi nhi...strt plus k drama k traha echo mein kYA KYA KYA nikla😆
Hum jantay hain mayank ny jo kuch bhi kiya thik kiya...shayad mayank us na sambhal pata ..aur shayad sach jan ker woh tanmay ko bhi khoo dayti jo us waqt us k sab se bara sahara tha...humain us ki mohabbat per zara bhi shak nhi per han apny ap per thori sharmindagi hai...k hum us k samhjny mein chock gay
wasy is baar ap ny ek lamhay k lyan bhi huamin ehassa nhi hony diya k khani kaha chali jay gi...
very well done neela as always...
cum back soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful ending Neela
Yes love dont need memories and which need memories is not love
I must say Inthikab is so special for me
its teach me about trust on your love because its a only thing which make your relation strong
Thank u so much for this great story
One more thing I have a confusion if mayank is tammy then why he didnt tell her before when she was suffering from great pain
Thanks for pm
Waiting for your's next work.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Chap 21:

Amazing update

Loved it

No words to say

Let's see wht happens

Cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Chap 2:

I don't feel like commenting :)

Sometimes silence speaks volumes
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Posted: 14 years ago
End 3 chaps

Aarreeyyy baapre

Itna bada twist...

I need an explanation

But loved d entire story

Intikhaab was amazing

Plzzz do explain this part properly :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
...⭐️IM speechless..😍... seriously👏... itna khubsarat andaaz se aapna describe hi kai hai... really hum bhi yahi sochte they ki yeh tanmay koi rishta toh hai mayank but akhir bata ker apne buthut acha shock diya... it was quite unexpected one... lovely written..

waise hum bolna toy bhut kuch chahte hai mager pehle aap epilogue poore karee ..
tabtak hum aapka besabri se intazaar karengy...😳..

😊--Summi--😊..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arjun-forever

memories can be created again for sure...

but even this was no less than a fairy tale ending for me...
long live mayur
wonderful update neela...👏👏



Thank you Sanchari...I am glad you liked the update and think its no less than a fairy tale ending for Intikhaab. Hope to see you around in my next work, if I get into it again 😊

-Neela
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Posted: 14 years ago


Thank you Bhawna 😊

-Neela
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: .rumki.

gr8 ending
so mayank was tanmay
the letter must be confession



Glad you liked the ending Rumki. Thank you for being there till the end. Best of luck with your exams 😊

-Neela
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Posted: 14 years ago
agar sach kahein..toh kuch samajh mein nahi aaya...kyun mayank nupur ki zindagi mein tanmay bankar aaya...meri dost Mahak ne pehle mujhse kaha bhi tha ki uska dil kehta hai ki Mayank ki Tanmay hai...but then aapka woh 'writer's note' padhkar maine usse argue kiya aur usne bhi kaha ki shayad is baar uska instinct galat hai..aur ant mein main hi galat nikli..woh sahi thi...
Vaise aapko pata nahi hoga...isiliye bata dete hain...i am Anchal, Mahak's friend. she actually forced me to read this story...to be honest, i was earlier very reluctant coz i am not so emotional like her. but then after her forceful dhamkis, i agreed...and i so wanna thank her for forcing me.
this story was really beautiful...and aapne sahi kaha...mohobbat ko yaaddhasht ki zaroorat nahi...can i use these two lines of urs and give it to mahak to write something for me? please?
And haan, uski taraf se i need to apologize, u must be thinking ki uska ek bhi reply kyun nahi aaya jabki she was so regular for this FF...trust me [knowing her since she is my virtual life frd] she wants to...but she wont come to I-F. Pata nahi kya hua hai use...she hardly writes anymore, which is not at all a good symptom considering she values writing more than her life. anyways, she has read this story till the end and had many colorful words to say to you abt it...and she wud...she jst needs to log-in...but i love this story.
thank u for writing such a wonderful story.

- Anchal

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