'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103) - Page 47

hey neela
finallyy m in to ur updatene to the core


ohhh whts happening here
feeling soo sad abt nupur yrrr😭😭
dont know wht to say abt it
but reallyyy i lovweed dia nupur friendship
and m realli surios wht gonna happen nxt yrrr
the beauty in ur writng is the way u express loved itt
loving itt👏
⭐️wanna read more neeela
u rock completely
cont sooonnn
cant waittt⭐️

thnxx for pm ⭐️

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Originally posted by: princez_94

Reserved... **

Edited

Pehle bura laga Nupur ke liye, aaj dil tor diya humara...

Duniya yahan ki wahan ho jati hai lekin sacche dost aap ke saath hamesha rehte hai. Diya aur Nupur ko dekh kar bohat achcha laga, in lamho main shayad ek Diya he hai jho Nupur ka sahara ban saky.

Nupur ke baare main kya kahein... jaise pehle kaha dil tor diya apne hamara, Nupur ki kya halat kar diy... Aap say koi shikayat bhi nahi kar sakte, aapko bhi Nupur ki yeh halat dekh kar khushi nahi hui hogi.

I don't what to say, I'm totally broken right now... Mayank say ab bhi umeed hai humein, haan lekin woh umeed ab kisi bhi pal tooth sakti hai. Nupur ki yeh halat nahi dekhi jaati...

"woh hamare zindagi me kab aaye'phir kab zindagi se nikal ke hamare yaadon me bas gaye aur phir yaadon se nikal ke rooh me utar gaye ..humain pata hi nahi chala. humnain to bas unhe apne har saans me jeeya hai'har khushi me paaya hai aur har gham me mehsoos kiya hai. "

Issi muhabbat ko apni aankhon ke aage tothe hue dekha hai, toh bimar nahi parhe ghi toh aur kya kare...

"hum unnke baghair jee nahi sakte" ...

Heart breaking update... but one of your best parts till now...

-Laiba

- Reserved first, & edited first...

hum samajh rahe hai aap ke jazbaat. agar Nupur ki jagah rakh ker soch rahi hai aap to aisa mehsoos hona sahi hai. per dil tornay ka iraada bilkul nahi tha. kamaal ki baat to yeh hai k iss heartbreaking update ko aap ne "one of the best part so far" ka khitaab diya hai 😊 Thank you!

-Neela

Originally posted by: -sam-

well, I read this..
and Mayank wedding invitation did hurt me too...

But am really liking this story..
waiting for it to unfold :) very soon...
Its a mystery...

I really dont know what the end will be, but I am ready for it...

RES:
U have described it amazingly...
Didnt expected this form mayank...
I totally agree with Dia... Nupur has to suffer so much :(
Amazingly portrayed :)
I'll be waiting..
Please update soon...

P.S.- Dont worry, kuch bhi hojaye, I'll read this alwaz :)

hahhaaa..so you are determined to read. I guess after all those scraps, we can come to the conclusion that you can absorb Intikhaab. ab aage ka aage dekhte hai 😉. And thank you for the lovely words. Coming from an old reader like yourself it means a lot for me. Welcome back Samidha...must say I missed you as one of my first batch of readers. So keep reading and don't forget to comment as usual 😊

-Neela

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

ITS HURTING BUT I STILL LOVE UR STORY...

TOMAR LEKHA VALO KISU PORAR KHUDA METAI...

DATS Y THOUGH U GIVE SAD ENDING OF LL STORY BUT I LOVE N LIKE ALL...

I CANT UNDERSTAND Y MAYU DID ALL DIS.

OI CH8 E KI NUPURER MISUNDERSTANDING HOISILO?

Kheya, majhe majhe bhabi ami...etogulo reader ek e comment kore...it hurts but its good 😊 ektu odbhut montobbo...bujhte parina. bhalo lage abar ektu kharap o. kintu tomar comment pore bhalo laglo. tumi usually erokom comment korona to..tai. r Nupur er misunderstanding keno hobe? shobkichu to tomar shamnei chilo..tomar ki tokhon MU hoyechilo? jokhon tomar hoini to Nupur er keno hobe? But your question is valid...Why did Mayank do all this? Now that's the story..na? Keep on reading...all your questions will be answered in due course of time 😊

-Neela

Originally posted by: jiya_angel

I felt bad for Nupur... She had blindly trusted Mayank and her trust is now ruthlessly butchered...and what do I say about Mayank??Hmm... I don know... I just want you to unfold the mystery.. if Mayank had done this knowingly, I could never forgive him.. but it will be more painful if it was someone else doing this behind Mayank's name... coz a misunderstanding hurts a lot...

I wonder where is Tanmay nowadays🤔...

and thanks for giving me the tag of your most practical reader😉😆

~jiya~

All valid questions Jiya...don't you wonder sometimes that if you were in Nupur's place you would react exactly the same way? And ask the same questions? I am glad you are because then you can empathize with Nupur. About Tanmay...*sigh* Lets see..

Oh about the title, you know back in the early days, I had handful of readers and I used to give them all a title as per their commenting style. Pooja was my detective...Divya was my Analytical Head and Nivi my logical voice...and now you got yours 😉 Glad you liked it.

-Neela