'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103) - Page 49

Originally posted by: kirti123

just read the last four parts together sorry but dont know how did i missed reading this ff earlier

just loved nupurs innocence here you have portrayed her feelings really beautifully ,

felt really bad to see her in pain

now mayanks marriage is a mystery

would wait to read the next part

love ur writing its been always meaningful amazing and different

continue soon

Welcome back Kirti..long time! You may have missed this FF because of my disappearance act perhaps 😆 Anyways I am always glad to see my old readers. Hope you will continue to enjoy this one like you always did before.

-Neela

hey swty plzzz cont soon ...

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

asi baat nhi hai neela...ap k kahny per hum ny khud ko poaray tareeqay se nupur samhj liya tha...tu ab ap hi sochy hum kasa mehsoos ker rahy hongay...

ap ko pata hai hum ap ke tahreer is kayal se uper parhty hai k yeah mayur tu bs hamesha sath hain ...aur ap jo bhi likhti hain...woh humary liyan buhat khas hai...tu pls humari woh jaga hum khona nhi chaty...

nupur k halat dekh ker haraat nhi hoi...yeah tu shayd buhat kam hai jo us ny mehsoos kiya hoga...aur ab diya ke baatein tu...

asa kasy hosakta hai...mayank aur simiran...sath thy tu...

kya hai mayank k dil mein jana hai humain...us ki yeah khamoshi bardast nhi horahi...shyad nupur k sawal kerlayna chaiy us se...

yeah jo unkaha hai...us mein kuch tu hai...pata nhi kyun humara dil nhi manta ...jab bhi mayank ki kahi hoi baatein sochty hain tu...asa lagta hai koi aur baat hai...

hum samajh sakte hai...iss waqt yeh saare sawal laazim hai. kya sach hai aur kya jhoot kuch bhi saaf nahi hai. per ek baat aap ki comment ki humain hairaan kar gayi..

jab bhi mayank ki kahi hoi baatein sochty hain tu...asa lagta hai koi aur baat hai...

Originally posted by: nightdreamer_mn

Omg... it's getting serious seriously can't figure out wat happning...but really intresting.. tanmay is still mystrey... i guess he is mayyu but still he is not seen in last 2-3 part na.. uff!! neela bas bhi karo ab bata bhido where is mayyu n tanmay..???

Waiting eagerly 4 ur next update story is gtting really very intresting...

--Summi--

Summi...itni besabri kyun bhai? saare sawalon ka jawab sahi waqt pe mil jayega. You're new to my world...thats why you're not familiar with my style perhaps 😉 Kher..watch out for the next update.

-Neela

Originally posted by: SamiraARTiMAYUR

Arey Neela don't throw me out in the pm list yaar 😲 just is that i hate to see nupur in pain 😭 i don't know i can bear to see in pain some other chracters

but not my nupur

and hey don't worry i would love read ur stories wether they have happy ending or sad coz u do realistic job sometimes it doesn't seem fanfictoin

u can make us cry n olso laught

but honey the update was touching n heart-broken

it hurts to see nups in pain as i said b4

i really loved Dia n Nups freindship

the way dia's caring nupur n understanding her was amazing

i'll always read this story sad or happy

coz i had good time reading from start

but i wish after heart-wrenching updates hope to see HAPPY ones

thank Neela for the pm n make sure i stay in pm list insha-Allah 🤗

Of course you will stay in my PMList 😃 Please don't misunderstand me. I think all the readers that I have so-called "banned" will be invited back once the FF is over because I strongly believe that the readers will give it a justified ending (happy or sad cannot tell) but at least I would not be held responsible for the ending this time 😆 Its just that the story does take a nose-dive from this point on..and some readers may not enjoy it. After all selective readers read these FFs in memory of their fav couple, so why should they accept anything but happy chapters from a writer? I understand their concern but this is who I am I guess! 😕 Can't change myself but at least I can protect some sensitive readers. right?

-Neela

Originally posted by: sariska_mnarti

16th chap:

ok this is a big shock

my my r u serious

sheesh I feel so bad for nups

cont soon

I know 😊

Originally posted by: sariska_mnarti

U know wht neela

I'm totally blank

mujhe samajh Nahin aa raha ki kis ki side loon

plzzz upd8 soon

I know that too as well 😆 I think you are only reader who is blank warna yahan per to har koi kisi na kisiki side le raha hai. Well lets see what happens next. Keep reading..

-Neela

Originally posted by: sizzlingsehr

hey neela
finallyy m in to ur updatene to the core


ohhh whts happening here
feeling soo sad abt nupur yrrr😭😭
dont know wht to say abt it
but reallyyy i lovweed dia nupur friendship
and m realli surios wht gonna happen nxt yrrr
the beauty in ur writng is the way u express loved itt
loving itt👏
⭐️wanna read more neeela
u rock completely
cont sooonnn
cant waittt⭐️

thnxx for pm ⭐️

Seher..😲 kahan se aa tapki! Gosh...been ages na? ek aap hi ho who can say that "Neela rocks" 😆 maza aagaya BY GOD! iss umer me ek teenager se aisi comment sunna ufff 😃

Seher..ek baat pooche? Why do I have a feeling that you are a great friend! and friendship probably means the world to you..am I right?
Bless you baccha...aur kya kahe aap se? 😊

-Neela

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

chp 10-

pata hai pata hai

main phirse late hoon

but better late than never

this part was gr8

i love the way nups is falling for mayu

Falling for Mayu kya? Woh to paida hone k baad se hi fall kar rahi hai 😆 abhi jake aakhri step me giri..😳 aur yaar yeh kyun late me reply karti ho..lemme tell you a secret..I kinda forget my own story even the ones already written. So when you refer to old parts, I have to read them all over again to really understand what readers are commenting on 😕 And I hate reading 😡 khaas karke agar reading k laayek na ho kuch to...and honestly I don't feel like reading my own writing

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

part 11-

omg

nupur interpreting mayu's emails in her own way

i think she'll have a heart break in between

Well guessed baccha 👏 👏 kaise pata? guzar chuki ho kya? 😉

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

chp 12-

wow

i love tanmay and nupur's friendship

this is nice

me too...per pata nahi kyun the other readers did not accept him well.*sigh*

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

part 13-

i so love this part

this is amazing

and fabulous

ab yeh kaunsa part hai! 😲 agar accha kaha hai to accha hi hoga 😃 Thanx..

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

part 14-

nice

i loved diya saying that mujhe nupur ki fikkar nahi abhi ki hai

it was so cute

and rain wwas gr8

Yeah..even I was laughing my head off when I was writing that part. I could literally see a fierce Nupur scaring the hell out of everyone mainly Abhi and poor Tanmay has no idea about her trait 😆

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

part 15-

neela meri jaaan

kamal kar diya

this was my fav part so far

i toh have fallen in love with ur ff all over again

I don't know why but most readers felt the same about this part. I don't even have a clue what was so good abt it..as I wrote it in a fly! Well, at least it gives you a reason to fall in love with the FF again 😃

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

part 16 and 17-

wat?????

this is weird

mayank and simren

6 months se engaged h

i wonder ki letters aur e-mail par kaun tha????

hope things clear out soon

What do you mean letters aur email pe kaun tha!!! pehla letter to khud Diya ne dia Mayank se lekar aur Nupur ne ussi add pe reply kiya! aur email add bhi wahan se aaya. kya yaar..Intikhaab ka CID bana diya 😆

aahhh...finished at last. Please ab backlog mat create karna 😔 Can't reply properly na..bhool jaati hoon 🤢

-Neela

Originally posted by: Nisha-ArTiLover

hey

i like ur all stories but i want happy ending of ur this story..i want MayUr together...

add mme in ur PM list

Hi Nisha! Welcome on board. I have accepted your bud request and added you to PMList. Hope you continue to enjoy my work. Please do press the LIKE button if you like the parts as I use it to keep a record of PM list.

-Neela