'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103) - Page 44

Originally posted by: -roshnee-

what can i say, i'm shocked like nupur too.
hey tumi ki bangali? ami ekta comment dekhlam porota banglae.

Yeah..you and all the 30 other readers 😆 shocked! and I am sort of Bengali...😉

Keep reading..

-Neela

Originally posted by: arjun-forever

woww...

every update of your leaves me speechless...

brilliant neela!!!

hope things would be fine between them...

Thank you Sanchi (You don't mind me calling you that, do you? Sanchari is a beautiful name though). I am glad you are liking the parts. I hope your hope turns out to be true 😊

-Neela

Hello...tumne kya socha...tum mana karogi aur mein achchi bachchi ke tarah maan bhi jaavungi? 😡 Sapnon mein!!!!!!

Originally posted by: ...Mahak...

Hmm...so she started describing her perfect image for Mayank and realized that it was Tanmay...interesting...

Hmm...seeing the way her subconscious mind is working, even i am tensed now...is this all a trap? Well, that time would tell...

But i just can't focus myself to go through her subconscious mind, when i am loving the feel of her emotions.

And yeah, based from what i have seen and understood, known people can hurt you terribly...but unknown people never do. I so love my online friends.

It's amazing when we know everything and try to pretend that we don't. Maza aata hai aisa karna mein LOL

OMG! Mayank getting married with someone else?

Dil toot jaayega Nupur ka! She wouldn't be able to bear it! Shit! the worse thing is, i can feel her pain! And its absolutely painful...

I just hope ki Mayank ne Nupur ko dhoka na diya ho...warna toot jaayegi woh...kahin isiliye unse nafrat toh nahi kar baithegi?

And yeah, yeh sab sunkar, don't you dare try and remove me from reading this FF...or i would pakka die with curiosity.

Ya Khuda meri madad karo
Yun na mujhe nashaad karo
Mita do meri naam-o-nishaan
Yun na tabah-o-barbaad karo
Har kaushish hamari nakaam rahi
Ab to daffan unki yaad karo
Ya Khuda meri madad karo
Doob chuki hai zindagi gham-e-hijr me
Ab to mujhe azaad karo

And then..these lines...Aiishhh...terrific and heart breaking...

Sorry for the short comment...is bar hamare paas bolne ke liye shabd nahi hai...kyunki dard itna hai nupur ke liye...

But please...continue soon...

-Mahi

I agree with each and every line of your comment. But the good news is unlike other readers, you are taking all this just like a writer does 😊 I just love having you around who actually enjoys my work just like a typical reader but absorbs the facts and reflects like a writer. I know for sure that you will be one of the readers who will never let go or lose hope no matter how much of a downhill the story takes.

Thank you so much hun...

-Neela

Originally posted by: jiya_angel

Hmm... I'll be lying if I say I'm not shocked... specially after Mayank proposing Nupur for marriage... but then again my mind comes back to my question... was it actually Mayank who was talking to Nupur?? If yes, then why did he do this to her?? Or maybe he himself isn't aware of his marriage to Simran, but that probability doesn't stand very strongly in this scenario... and again, if all their relatives are in London, I mean the Raheja-s, and the Sharma-s hadn't had any contact with India since the past 10 years, why are they coming back?? Hmm... lots of twists and turns expected... and I'm really looking forward to it... hope I'm not in your "not recommended" list...

~jiya~

LOL...aah my one and only practical reader comes in with a logical comment. I love the way you think...completely "hatke" 😉 Whilst everyone is either wondering why Mayank did this or does he know abt his wedding or is he cheating on Nupur..there you are thinking completely out of the box and wondering if it was Mayank at all 😆 😆 Oh and the point that no one raised any question on about why all on a sudden Sharmas want to come to India for the wedding, that was classic 😃 The answer is simple dear..obviously they want their son to be married in the homeland where their roots are. Most friends may be there abroad but families and ancestors are still at home, so why not? There is no other reason to it...full stop.

And yes, you are definitely NOT in the "Not Recommended List". Enjoy Jiya...and I love your comments..its like a reality check for me, so please keep them coming.

-Neela

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

edited

im shocked to death...will coment later ...

aadab...humain nhi pata humain kya kehna chaiy ...is waqt kuch samhj nhi araha kiya sach hai...aur kiya nhi...woh sach tha jo unhony us din kaha...ya yeah sach hai jo aj hath me tha...

neela...kuch bhi nhi samhj araha..agr nupur ki jaga khud ko rekhain tu..ab keray tu kiya keray...safai mangay mayank se...ya...yaqeen kerain...kuch nhi pata ...

ap ke agli update k buhat zayada intezar hai...

Aadab Fiza. *sigh* ab kya kahe aap se. jab yeh part update hua aur 2/4 comments aane lage to humain khauff sa hone laga k mere readers mujhe ghalat samajh rahe hai. unhe meri baat ka bharosa nahi koi aur unhe yaqeen sa hone laga hai k hum phir se MaYur ko alag karna chahte hai. uss waqt Laiba ne jab humain dilasa diya k fiker na kare koi to reader hoga jo aapko himmat dega. aur uss waqt hamare dimagh me jo naam aaya to woh aapka tha. per aap ne to apni zubaan per taala laga diye. koi nahi...aage chal ke dekhte hai..

-Neela

Originally posted by: achoose

am very shocked...this shud not be happening neela...cant even imagine nupur's pain...nut still everything is mysterious...

pls update soon dear...orelse i will die with curiosity...

Aswathy...don't worry sweety..kahani khatam nahi hua 😊 I am glad to see that you are still curious to read ahead. Watch out for the next update.

-Neela

Originally posted by: vampire_girl

OMG..!! what was that neela..!!😲
well i guess not that much shocking...cause concept to mujhe abhi bhi yaad hai..mayank and harted..yup i remember..but the question is if mayank is gettimg mariied with that simran or whatever she is! then why did he proposed nupur?? i mean if he doesnt love her then why??..is he cheating on her?? this is so shocking lus confusing...uff..!! now i am suspecting mayank

and tanmay??...ab use kya hogaya??...usse sachme nupur se pyar hogaya tha?😲ki uo gayab hi hogaya??😕...now i dont think so ki mayank aur tanmay ki koi connection ho sakta hai

i feel so sad for nupur...she trusted him so much and mayank??...he broke his trust..but mayank really knows ki uski shadi kisi aur se horahi hai?😕..mujhe to yakeen hi nahi horaha ki uo usse dhoka de raha hai😭

but neela i must say amazing concept once again👏
loved it so much..i dont know what will be the ending but i am sure it will be good for nupur😊
loved the the last lines...amazing and suited perfectly for nupur's situation
please continue soon

love
tasfia

So you don't like Simran that much 😕 hmm I think I will write one whole chapter on her only and dedicate that to you 😆 And you decided to choose the path where Mayank is guilty...idea bura nahi hai. aage chalke taqleef kam hogi. aur haan yeh barbar concept ki dhamki kyun dete ho? well...good in a sense kyunki tumhe story itni shocking nahi lag rahi. Guess you were always expecting this..in fact you were waiting for it. to lo...here kicks in the concept. Lets see if you can handle it 😊 Best of luck 😉

-Neela

Originally posted by: sharneel

Yeah..you and all the 30 other readers 😆 shocked! and I am sort of Bengali...😉

Keep reading..

-Neela

sort of?

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

part 7-

i know i forced to write this ff

i know i promised i'll be there for you

i know i am late

but better late than never na

i'll pakka cover up

sorry neelu

this part was fabulous

i'll catch up with the other parts soon

You know everything...phir bhi saath nahi diya 😊 But I understand you must have been busy. And you are right...better late than never. And there is never any need to say sorry khaas karke iss topic ko lekar..I am so glad to see your comments. waise mujhe chipakne ki aadat to nahi per phir bhi...thats for you 🤗 Welcome back!

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

part 8-

letter vs e-mail

so cuteee

but e-mail is faster

diya was such a sweet friend

You're right! Email is faster than letters per yaar letters me jo jazbat hote hai woh email me kahan 😉 Diya is a sweet friend and I am glad you said that coz you will love the next few parts. Diya plays a vital role there.

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

part 9-

tanmay sengupta...

i hope kucch gadbad na hooo

oh gosh

LOL...3rd character kya dekha k gadbadi ka sochne lagi. aage to parho baccha...aur yeh kya? thak gayi kya? aage nahi parha abhi tak? hmm..take your time 😊

-Neela