'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103) - Page 43

unexpected n confusing update

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Originally posted by: princez_94

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ab kya kahein... It was definitely shocking, but more than shocking I'm confused. Ek taraf bare bare vaade kiye aur dusri taraf kisi aur say shaadi ka plan. Kuch khaas samjh nahi aya.

Bohat bura laga Nupur ke hawaley say, kitne khawb sajaye the sab tooth kar bikhr gaye. Aur sabse ziads duhk iss baat ka hai ke hum naye un khawb ko bante hue dekha hai aur jab woh humare samne tooth rahe hai toh bohat dukh hua.

Mayank say koi shikayat bhi nahi kar sakte, kyunke humein abhi Mayank ke baare main kuch pata nahin. Kya pata Mayank ko iss baarein main kuch pata na ho, woh toh Europe main tha na aur wahi say Nupur ko propose kiya. Bohat confuse kiya iss update ne, par humein yakee hai Mayank aisa nahi kar sakta, iss ke peeche koi na koi wajah zarur hai.

Aur rahi baat Tanmay ki woh toh jaise Nupur ne kaha itne saloon main uss ke kareeb tha he kaun. Aur yeh Tanmay toh Mayank ki yaad ki ek tasveer he. Ek he larke ko janti hai toh kaise yaad rahe gha Mayank.

Update ka kya kahein, haan dukh toh boihat hua lekin humara mana hai ke joh writer reader ke emotions ko control kar sakta hai us main kuch na kuch toh hoga. Aap say koi shikayat nahi iss upodate ke liye bas ke choti si guzarish ke please jaldi update karein.

-Laiba

- I'm extremely sorry for editing so late...

You don't need to be sorry for being late in editing this unreserved comment...in fact I should be thankful to you that at least you reserved the 1st place to comment on this part. This gives me an opportunity to start my responses with a reader like you. At least I have the courage to do so...

I don't have much to say as my next few updates will answer all your questions and concerns. But one thing that made your comments stand out of all the rest of the 20 comments on this part is you did not doubt Mayank and neither did you complain about his act. That shows how hopeful you are that there is something beyond what we can see. I wish Nupur was strong enough to think like that.

Last of all, I have no words for the comment @blue. I have heard many words praising my work, few very encouraging and inspiring and few left me speechless. But this one is the most unusual and perhaps the best few words that I have seen on my writing. I will never ever forget that someone actually thought and perhaps believed that I had this power over my readers. Thank you Laiba..Thank you 😊

-Neela

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

awsom.

but eta ki holo!!!!!!!!
mayank na nupur k bier jonno propose korlo!!!!!!

accha story nad dilam but writer note er kisui bujlam na bhai!!!!!

tumi ki abr sad ending planing korcho naki!!!!!!!😔

r kake kake jeno pm korbena bole humki diso ami tar moddhe asi naki!!!!!!!😕

amke bhai pm koro.plzzz

Kheya..tumi mone hoy tomar comment e amar response gulo porona..ami kintu tomakeo warning list e rekhechilam FF na porar jonno 😉. But seems like you are still interested to amar humki tomar khettre projojjo na. r hain..ami kono kichui planning korchina bapu...ending tomader haatei to na! ontoto amake amar moto kore kahini ta likhte dao. ektu kharap lagte pare..chaile pora bondho kore dite paro..I wouldn't mind 😊

Take care..and I hope you can cope with the next few updates without jumping into any conclusion.

-Neela

Originally posted by: aancchal

so aap apne purane form me aa hi gai .


koi baat nahi .i don't know ab mein aap se kya kaho but i must say you are a very good writer but i am not strong tto read more .


but agar aap in future mayur story likhne to hame bhul mat jayiega .

aaah...one of my old readers who was not happy with the update for sure 😊 ermm purane form me aana is not the right words I guess..its more like I am playing my strengths now.

Ragini..I am so sorry that you will no longer be able to read any further. Thats ok..I will take you out of my PMList.

Take care and hopefully our paths will cross again inshaAllah 😊

-Neela

Originally posted by: SamiraARTiMAYUR

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plzzz plzzz plzzz Neela not sad again

Mayur n again sad story realy will kill us 😭

this update was fantastic n painful lthe last part 😭

i really love to read what u write u do fantstic job

but mayu hurting nup is so painful

i don't know what is the reason he did for that

but my wish hope is for you to chang ur mind about this if u can

i realy would love to read happy story of MAYUR that written from you

thanks for the pm hun 🤗

Samira..I know how you are feeling. You are one of my old readers and I can only imagine what you may be thinking. All I can say is please don't jump into conclusion just yet..its only a story that too in the middle of the stage. If you can cope with its downhill then there is light at the end of the tunnel 😊 All in the readers hands.

Let me know though, if you too want to be out of the PMList.

-Neela

Originally posted by: DhanakZ

O MY God

My head is spinning

It is so unexpected

Hope Mayank Nupur Ko dhoka na da

Plz plz Mayur ko seperate mat hona dena Really its an request

Plz not again a sad ending😭

Thanks For pm

Cont soon

awww...Gul I know it was shocking and I don't blame you if your head is spinning. Imagine bechari Nupur per kya guzar rahi hogi 😕 But your comments have really scared me a little..because it seems like whatever you are not expecting is about to happen

Bear with me..you must be there to choose the ending 😊 Take care..

-Neela