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chubzy

@chubzy

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#891

omg dev is out!!!!!!!!!!!!😲 nw wat will happen to maan?????

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#892

OMG!!!!!!!! Now Maan .......😲

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mchopra

@mchopra

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#893

AHHHHHHHHH dev again...kill him now..

thanks for the update..looks like sec one too ending and only one left now..hehe

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SaJan-SaJan

@SaJan-SaJan

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#894

hi simi...

read d last 3 parts...

awesome yaar...

maan found d place n saved d girls...

geet is out of coma...

but how did dev came out of jail?????

now m beginning 2 suspect adi...

do cont soon...

thnx a lot 4 d pm..

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Shamima

@-shamima-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#895

Hmm for sure there are 3 guys and one was trying to kill geet while vicky is with his wife and now dev in this hidden house awe poor maan he found it tried to get the girls to escape but at the last minute the jerk comes and hits him snd for sure maybe it's adi the 3rd guy or someone close to the police department as how did dev get released and know about maans every move and Woop geet out of coma because of the guys fault for mentioning that his going to kill maan I winder if she saw his face but she can recognise his voice right anyways great suspense filled update and can't wait to read more 😊

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Sara

@charmed ones

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#896

OMG Simi... 😲

yeh kya kiya..???...hayeAllah...😲😲😲😲

Dev is out....😡

Maan is hurt n fainted.....😭😭😭😭

Main tou shuru se kha rahe the...Adi..is main ghada...if he (Vicky) 😡 can Give Dev cores 2 statisfed his hunger n get most valuable assests then he can buy Adi🤢..instantly...

so that means whenever Maan..let new info or anything like going 2 meet Dev 2 Adi...i meant 2 say...Dev is freely roaming around...when Dev is out of sight of Maan....

Ahhhh...Gurls caught up again....

that was Dev...keeping eye on Maan in jungal in all....😕

Thank God😃...he finds Gurls..means more Twist....yippeeeeeee....😆😆😆😆

well who ever that Guy was in Hosp room...did advantage 2 Maneet😳😳😳😳😳 cuz ....Geet wont let anything happen 2 Maan...in her wildest dream....😉

Ohh God...so suspenseful😛...u left it...😆

Now i want more bigger n longer update....😆😆😆😆

Make it double😉...like customers say 2 Barattender...hehehehehe...😆😆😆😆🤣

Oppsss...Bora mat man na....😳

waise im from UK...US....Wow...i wanna visit Chicago ....😃

Desperately waiting 4 update Simi dear.....🤗

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Noor Fatima

@NoorFatima

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#897

i am really feeling an urge to kill you

WHY DID YOU STOP AT SUCH AN EXCITING POINT???

now plzzzzzzzz update soon.. i beg u

Noor

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#898

awesome update

loved it

glad geet is opening her eyes

maan found the place

yay the girls have escaped

that stupid dev

uggghhhhh how dare he hit maan

i got a feeling Adi is with vicky

cant wait 4 da next part

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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Nanthini

@Nanthini9

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#899

Wow read the last 5 chapters in one go...so my guesses

1. Adi is part of the scheme OR
2. Dev has a twin OR OR
3. Vicky has a twin

Your so good at keeping us on the edge!!!

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#900

THANK YOU GUYS!!!!!!

I don't have time to reply back to everyone 😆😆😆 I worte a quick update for everyone for waiting for me to update 😆😆 So I hope you guys enjoy!!!

IMPORTANT NOTE: Ok remember how in last part I said that I have a question to ask you guys regarding this fan fic since its ending...well here is the questions...

Do you want me to conitnue on with another suspence story???? Basically conitnue on after this case is solved... OR you just want me to end it if I had tortured you guys enough with this case and think you guys can't handle another suspence 😆😆😆😆

PLZ LET ME KNOW YOU OPINION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Chapter 25

He was completely surrounded by darkness...wherever he turned to look all he saw was darkness...at the end of the darkness he saw Geet standing there with her arms open...he slowly started walking towards her...he smiled and opened his arms as he felt himself going closer and closer to her...suddenly he felt water from under his feet...he looked down the water was rising to his knees..he looked at Geet who was still standing there.. he called out "No Geet...am coming.." he held out his hands...but she was gone...the water rose to his head now... "Geet!!" He heard someone calling him.."wake up Maan" he opened his eyes...he looked at the person to see and realized he was dreaming...Maan grew angry when he saw Dev standing in front of him with bucket filled with water....

Dev: What happened Maan?

Maan: Open my hands..and face me ...you coward

Dev (laughed): Well hi to you too buddy

Maan: How did you get out?

"I helped him" A voice came from behind Dev...Maan looked at the person..he started struggling with his hands which were tied by rope...he comes closes to Maan and smiles..

Vicky: I bailed out Dev...how can you do that to your friend?

Maan: He is not my friend..as for Dev he couldn't go out on bail

Vicky (laughed): Maan..ooppss I mean Detective Maan Singh Khurana...you will be surprised what money can do...(Just than he recieves a call) Excuse me Detective Khurana (he goes to the corner of the room and takes the call...while Maan looks around the place...after a while Vicky comes back)

Dev (goes up to Vicky) What happend

Vicky: Well Detective Khurana there is a good news for you it seems like Geet woke up from coma...too bad she will sleep forever (laughed)

Maan (he is happy to hear that Geet is alright but hearing the last sentences gets him mad): open my hands you coward and face me like a man...if you are one...

Vicky (gets mad hearing him): Dev open Maan's hands

Dev: but

Vicky: Do what I say..I got you out to listen to me not to argue with me

Dev: Yes Sir (he goes over to Maan and opens his hands)

Vicky: Alright Maan lets see..if you manage to beat me than you can go and if you can't than this will be your last time

Maan (stands up): Its funny I should be saying that to you

Vicky gets mad he runs toward Maan and punches him on the face...Maan stumbles back and wipes the blood from the corner of his face..he looks at Vicky and smirks "I gave you the first chance...Now my turn" Maan goes near Vicky and punches him on his face...Vicky tries to punch Maan on the stomach but Maan blocked his move (thanx to his martial arts) He drops Vicky on the floor...Maan goes to punch Vicky on the face...Vicky manges to push Maan from him..he runs Maan towards the wall...he punches Maan on his stomach and face..Maan manages to kick Vicky on his legs..Vicky walks back a little..Maan finds a weapon near by...he grabs the weapon and was about to hit Vicky when Dev comes from behind Maan and holds him...Maan tries to release himself from him..Vicky walks back up to Maan.."I think we had enough fun for today"...he takes out his gun and points it towards Maan..

Maan: If you think I am going to beg for my life than you are wrong..kill me am not afraid to die

Vicky: The pleasure will be all mine...Good bye Detective Khurana

Dev: Drop your weapons Vicky (he holds a gun towards Vicky..Maan looks at him shocked)

Vicky: What is this Dev..you are betraying me? You will pay for this Dev

Dev: Do whatever you want..I don't care anymore...(he looks at Maan) I know what I did was wrong but I was crazy for money...I am not asking for your forgiveness but if I have to die than I want to die with some dignity that I have left...(he looks at Vicky) I won't let you harm Maan...drop your gun right now Vicky...

Vicky: What makes you think I would follow what you say?

Maan: Because you are out numbered...(Dev hands Maan his gun..while Dev goes to Vicky and takes the gun from his hands..Maan goes to Vicky and starts beating him with his gun) This is for what you did to all the girls and Geet

Dev (comes to Maan and pulls him back): Maan listen you have to leave and take care of Geet...she still might be in danger...

Maan: by who??

Dev: He is.....(Dev stopped and looked down to his stomach..he touched his stomach with his hands and looked at his hands...he saw blood..he drops on the floor)

Maan(goes up to Dev): Dev who is involved?

Dev: he works in.....police....station....(with that he dies on the spot...he looks at Vicky who was smiling..Maan goes up to Vicky and beats him again and again until he is unconscious..he leaves the place and heads out...outside he saw police officers...Dev's last words rang in his head...

P.O.(police officer): Sir are you ok..

Maan: Yeah I am...in the house you will see Vicky's lying unconsciously and Dev's dead body..what happend with the girls?

P.O.: sir they are safe and are taken to the hospital

Maan "hospital": I have to go to the hospital "I have to save Geet" (he starts walking away...Maan was in great deal of pain...he could barley walk..he reached the hospital..there he was greeted by photographers and parents of the girls...

Reporter1: Sir how did you find the house?

Reporter2: What happened to the Master that was behind this? Is he caught?

Reporter2: How does it feel to be a hero?

Maan: Excuse me..no comments...I have to go (he walked past everyone...he started walking towards Geet's room when someone held his shoulder..Maan turned around)

Anjali's Dad: beta thank you so much for helping my daughter..you have no idea how much of a relief you gave us..(he hugged Maan and cried on his shoulder...Maan held him and waits)

Maan: I was only doing my duty as a police officer..

Anjali's dad: thank you...

Maan: Excuse me I have to go...be safe (he walked towards Geet's room) Geet I am here...(he saw no one there..he walks outside) Nurse do you know where the patient Geet is?

Nurse: Yeah she was discharaged by one of your relative

Maan: Discharged??? (angry) HOW CAN YOU DO THAT!!! WHO DISCHARGED HER???

Nurse: Sir he said that he was your relative..and it was necessary to take her with him to you and it was an emergency

Maan: WHAT!!! if anyone will come to you and say that you will discharge everyone? You will pay for this if anything happens to the patient you will be charged for helping a criminal take a patient

Nurse (scared): Sir I am sorry..

Maan: Sorry won't cut it...just hope that nothing happens to her...(he walks away and calls Dadima..no one picks up the phone) Damn it!!! (he slams the phone down)