FF: IRREVOCABLY YOURS #3 The End Chapter P. 17 M&G - Page 19

OMG..this was like a saga dear......loved it irrevocably.....jst amazing..i m nt dat good at writing...bt ur ff is jst tooooo fantabuoloysssssssssssisssysysy......eheh lolz........omg when geet collasped n maan wrothe those words a tear sliippd dwn thinking geet died.......bt amazing twist loved d emotions.....loved everything.......
Luv,
SUPS

samira the like button does'nt work but i say a LOVE button shud be put up!!!! fab ending begining shed tears n later a sweet journey of two ppl accomplished.

an emotional ending.. thanks for a nice FF..

Okey this is like out of the blue, but yesterday, while walking to my uncles, I was thinking about this FF, and thought that what if this was made in to a show on star one, like a short story, lasting for a few months only, with our dear Maaneet.

I'm so dumb 😳 How can I go and post this in the second thread by accident? 🤣

Chapter 26

I so agree! Russell Peters is THE dude! 😎 LOL.

The first time I read this chapter, I actually did play that sad BG music and read the first bit. Then the second time I read it, I read it in silence. I come to the conclusion that I emote better in silence. 😆 LMFAO!

This has to be one of the most beautiful sentences I have ever read. And I mean that. "As his eyes closed, a single tear slipped down his cheek in absolute surrender" That got butterflies go haywire in my stomach. That one sentence showed his realisation. I agree, I had a bit of a phase where I was a little bit annoyed that he was taking so long to realise, but it was so worth it! You are such a good writer!

They are both in so much pain that I'm in pain. That makes no sense. I know. 🤣

Dev. DIE. DIE. DIE. DIE. DIE. DIE. DIE. DIE. x6478456312687431

"Taking pleasure in her pain" And you love her? FOOL. 😳

Oh, and I thought he was married or something. There. Now that's DIE. x568798435498787 more.

I think Dev's stupid. 😕 😆 Anyhow, he's clearly not. Just a bas***d, for want of better words. Or should I say worse words?

I'll pretend I didn't read the next paragraph.

I hate fights. I don't like watching them, and when I read them, no matter how good the writer may be, I simply cannot visualize them. I think it's a disease. 🤔

Beautifulest? Not a word. I don't think I need to tell you that, and as far as Maan is concerned, I'll just forgive him thinking he's a little bit blinded in love. 🤣

What are his intentions? Taking her into his room? Mind clarifying Samira?

CONFESSION! 🥳 ilovejyousamiraji 🤗

Chapter 27

My mummy says that kitchen knives are the most dangerous knives. Ever. 😆

I love them fighting again. Smile smile smile. LOL.

LMFAOOOOOOO!!! "EL OH EL" I swear I was not expecting that! JOKES!!

Hahh. He doesn't know what LOL or MSN is. What do I say? I think that is f-u-n-n-y.

Really? Cute means ugly but interesting? I did not know that. Well, as they say, you do learn something new every day. I must give the credit to you Samira.

I can so see Geet stuffing the ice cream in his mouth. And Maan choking too. And again. 😛

AWWIIEEEEE <33333 He licked it all off! But then eww! He really does have a dirty mind: "Where else do you want me to lick?" LOOL.

King Kong? Tarzan? W*F?? I am a little amused to say the least. ROFL.

Your profile picture? On what, Facebook? Or I-F? Can I see? Too many questions! 😆

I love this! Maan and FB? That would be a sight! LOL.

After such a hilariously funny scene, you put in a MaanDev scene. 😳 But I'll forgive you, cos you are such a brilliantly amazingly fantastic writer!

Chapter 28

Maan should not be allowed to get annoyed at Geet anymore. I'm lying. There's nothing like Maaneet fights. Especially when it comes to Samira's FanFic. LOL.

LOOOOOL. Maan is such a perv! I agree with Geet. 😛

"Ruining my image" What 'Image' Maan Sign Phurana? FOOL. LOL. Sorry, I know you love him and all Samira, but seriously, what image? 😆

LOVE the e-mail address!

And the password! ❤️ LMFAO!

Is she just asking for kisses or is this to take his mind of killing her? I think the latter.

I love their sarky answers to each other. It makes it all that much more 'spicy'. 😆

LMFAOO! How did you manage to come up with all these hilarious flirty wall posts? Is this what you would post if he was real and what he got FB? I bet it is! Hehe.

Loving Geet's WP better though. 😉

Maan's reply is a million times better. 🤣

Sorry for the very late reply. I actually read the post the day it was posted but since I was logged on my BB and was on the bus cudnt actually reply. First and foremost I can't believe this FF is ending. You are a really talented writer. I loved all parts of the FF - the humor, the passion, the romance, etc. The twists and turns of the story were really unpredictable.

In retrospect when I read part 1 I would not have guessed this story line. I was thinking of a totally different plot.

Finally, the part before the epilogue was extremely sad. I was crying on the bus when I got to the end of that part. I could really connect with both the characters at the part. It only makes me wonder about and appreciate all the people who had or know a person who had cancer.

Even though most peoples lives in reality would have ended with the last part. I lyked how you gave us a happy ending.

I think I am going to come back and read some parts of your FF when my life lacks humour lol Esp the FB part :p

Looking forward to your other FF when you decide to write them. Make sure to PM me if you ever choose to write one :D Will be eagerly waiting.

Till then shall keep in contact with PM

Luv,

Nanthini

❤️Sam,❤️

Commenting on Chapter 35.

I loved the description of her wedding dress and her tiara. ⭐️😍

Wow, she got ready in the hospital room and the driver and her assistant helped her to the limousine.

At the venue, Geet's question to Pinky….about Maan are you sure he is there?

Adi asking her Do you trust him?❤️

Geet replying, With everything I have. ❤️

Adi asking again, Then is it worth to question his presence?❤️

Wow , that was deep and emotional.

I loved the following lines….

'It's his wish that you walk towards him, with no one but the support of his love' Pinky replied apologetically.

One day my love will become your strength, and from then onwards – you will acquire the inner strength to wholeheartedly walk towards me, with a beautiful and confident smile playing upon your lips.

While Geet's legs were buckling……and she was almost about to stop she saw Maan and his eyes……The hope reflected in his eyes, motivated her to continue on, putting aside the agonizing feeling……wow…just the hope that her love was standing there waiting for her to take her steps and walk forward to him….gave her all the courage and strength to bear the pain….and she held her head high with confidence and walked towards him. 👏👏

Wow, Maan carried her and did the saath pheres with her….beautifulll…..have no words to describe it Sam. You write amazingly. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

The last line…was great……'I read your diary' he confessed, 'and from that day on – I had desired to make all of your wishes come true.'……..

Originally posted by: _SiinnceMaan_

MINI! 🤗😆

Thank you SO much for your comment. There's no need to edit this comment, I loved it just the way it is. You can write me an essay for the last update which is coming soon 😉.

Lol! I have to end it. Exams are coming my way and I'll be going overseas soon. But I shall miss you! 😛