FF: IRREVOCABLY YOURS #3 The End Chapter P. 17 M&G - Page 18

Samira 😊

I just finished reading all of the chapters after 26 !!! Loved all of them it was so emotional very well written dear !!! I am going to miss reading your lovely chapters please do PM me if you choose to write another story 😃 I loved the ending you have truly showed how love can overcome some of the worst conditions in an individuals life even something as serious and unrelenting as cancer !!!

*phew* Finally, i finished reading this FF...

I just started reading the first chapter just 4 and a half hours ago😲... Can u believe that? well, I have always prided myself to be a fast reader...😉

Coming to ur FF, i don't know what to say Samira... Ur FF made me laugh so much, then it had me in tears at so many places, sometimes I was smiling like an idiot...(I am so glad that I am sitting in my room, locked up with no one to disturb. Or else my gharwale would have surely booked me an appointment with a psychiatrist😆)

Okay, let me start from the beginning

After reading the first few chapters, i knew, this FF was going to have a lots of anguish and pain and emotions in it... I wasn't really in a mood for all these sentiments, but still I chose to continue reading just because of ur style and language..

Then as the story progressed, it became much lighter, and I found myself laughing out loud at Geet's filmy fantasies... and her various eccentricities..😆

I found myself being angry at Dev, I found myself falling in love just as Geet did..(well,there s a small difference, Geet fell in love with Maan, whereas I fell in love with the way she fell in love, and even more, the way Maan fell in love...and even more than that, I fell in love with Maan and Geet in ur story, and with ur writing as such. I don't know if all of this is making any sense to you now.😳😆)

And then u dropped the bomb...Geet had cancer..😲 that was shocking, really. Well, here I was getting a bit uncomfortable, the topic of cancer is an unconfortable one for me because I have seen the havoc it creates, twice, not only to the person suffering from it but also to everyone else connected with him/her.. I am really sorry to know about ur dad.. and it was really very nice of u to dedicate this piece of writing in his memory...In fact I myself have lost my mamaji and my bua to this awful disease...and in fact I have watched my aunt(who was kind of a role model to me) taking her last breaths, and that picture hasn't still vanished from my mind even after 3 yrs..so I can quite imagine what u must have been feeling...

Ah, well coming back to the story, I was almost in tears in all those parts where Maan was trying to make Geet happy... Her dream home and all that... was written so beautifully... I was so immersed in your writing, that I skipped my dinner so that I wouldn't hav to stop reading it...

And when Geet closed her eyes after showing her diary to Maan, I was crying, praying with Maan...

And in the epilogue, I was so tensed to know if Geet had survived, and when she made her entry with a big belly, i literally sighed in relief.(well yes, I could visualise everything u wrote right from the start,**ahem, well except for what Geet saw while hiding under the bed😳* seriously* tries to look innocent*☺️🤣**, i forgot to mention. It was like I was watching a movie or something😉)

And the delivery part had me laughing again, at Maan's plight...🤣🤣

And then came the perfect family moment, with the little boy Armaan, and at the end of it, I was smiling in satisfaction.😃

Samira, this is one of the best FFs i have read here on IF!! U r an awesome writer👏 Do write more.. I am looking forward to reading more from u....😛

Loved each and every part of this story!!

Keep it up!!👍🏼

*sighs**this is the longest comment i have ever written for an FF** am hungry nw, i'll better go and grab something to eat...😳

love

Harsha😊

That was brilliantly written Sammy!

First of all I want to apologize since my comments have never been longer than one line but what can i say I hardly have any words to comment it back with. Your updates are always amazing!

The story def took a new ending and I must say it was the best! :) I hope you are encouraged to write another story and if you do please do PM me.

OMG..Wow amazing ending!! loved the last part especially the delivery scenes lol...maan & geet's dialogues were just hilarious 😆😆😆...I am seriously gonna miss your ff, sad to see it finish cos it was brilliant, a mixture of all emotions.
Thank you soo much for writing this ff for us, putting in all that effort and time. Looking forward to your next ff -- Maan as evil ruler, kool concept...can't wait!
Thanks again for bringing Maan & Geet together.:) 👏 Take care till then and talk to you soon 😛

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!
this has got to be THE BEST ending to ANY ff ever! and in totality too, an ff where NO part has failed to please!

Sammmyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!
u know ur message before the chapter got me squealing inside, i was literally suppressing a grin cos u made me laugh, but i was too anxious bout what was heading my way at the same time. After reading - what a stupid feeling that was! You're super sweet for not giving it a (beautiful) tragic end, and instead the vibrant (Beautiful) end which truly reflects all the smiles you've given us throughout the ff!

Let's do this chronologically shall we.. (the only reason this is possible is because i rudely stopped my reading when i just NEEDED to say something to u! lol)
so firstly...

LOVED the imaginary scenario of Geet behaving as the man on their suhaag raat! 🤣 Like dude, that was *quality*! You wrote that So freakin well, it was as if Maan's interruption had knocked Me out of a daydream! and then the image of the sexy man with gorgeous hands Maan, as the blushing groom ??? !!!! omg, that image becomes funnier and funnier every time I imagine it!




aaaaaaaaa what are you? can u stop making me cry???????? i have NEVER in my what is it... 5 years at IF (dont laugh!) EVER cried THIS many times whilst reading ANY ff!! why u doing this to me?? You tore like even the minutest trace of happiness that exists in me, during that moment Geet seemed to have completely Gone. Her body limp next to Maan and then his heartbreaking outburst? Sam, that was horrible. Just plain horrible. What makes things worse is your beautiful way of storytelling. You have a thing with words Sam and believe me, you illustrated that moment So vividly, i can still visualize it and it breaks my heart. You are a Phenomenal writer - even 'phenomenal' seems like an understatement. Urgh, you make me feel like me being an English Lit student is pretty meaningless if i can't even express the extent to how wonderful you write! If your previous parts have urged the senti-me to come out, heck this part left me choked with so much emotion which just erupted as soon as Geet was Back in the epilogue!!!



I genuinely felt that Geet was no more, after that moment on the bench... so it was a cry of Joy when u brought her back to life. You are Incredibly lucky that I have tissues at my desk today.. or else yuck, u do not wanna imagine the state i'd be in right now.. or even u for that matter... lol damn... tears of happiness have recently been the 'thing' for me, methinks... its happened like 4 times (this being the fourth) in a span of what 1 month and a half?
first tears of happiness:
Maaneet 1st genuine hug (u know when she puts the taweez on him?)
Maaneet hug at hospital
KaJen AR union (last epi)
and now... GEETS comeback in the epilogue.. haila.. what the hell is wrong with me?!




L........M.......F........A........O!!
'Does MY BABY look like DIRT to you? For you to SUCK it out WITH a god DAMN VACCUUM?'
where the hell do u get this from? oh i love you i do sam! that's freakin hilarious! this scene was oozing with an insane level of humor! LOVED it!
and then Maan fainting?? AAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHA!!! I can totally imagine his face.. all the eye rolling, head spinning ahahahaha Mr Maan Singh Poor-ana awww bechara! That was tooo funny, along with Geet's constant wailing!

you had me crying, and doing plenty of laughing too, like... throughout! oh u really are a Super Star Sammy! The Brightest shining kind of course! Awwwwww man!

What an absolutely brilliantly-insanely-incredibly-outrageously

Outstanding,

Beeeeeeeee-you-teeful,

FANtastic,

Min-daaa-baa-lowing,

Hilllllllarious,

A-May-Sinnnnng,

f*****g FABULOUS part / end to this most lovable Maaneet ride!

It musta taken a lot outta u, to get this far 😆 u deserve the rest hun! u totally do! (just dont make it too long, wanna see your crazy self writing something brilliant once again in the future. Even if it is an evil King Phurana and helpless damsel Geet... just do it! lol)

I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVVVVVVVVVVVVE the entire ff SO much!!! You're a writer who words of praise will do little justice to; this ff has quite simply been Something Else!!!! Love every bit of it!!

Thanks SO much for writing this and putting it out here, u Rock!

lotttttts of love + all my booga-filled... I mean with TEAR-drenched tissues 😛 (my return gift *flutters lashes innocently* I had to give u Something back right? 😉)

Saz

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and goodnight! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

AYE AWESOME FF ! Yu ended it great 2 =D What I love is that it actually has Storyline & isn't just dumb =P WRITE ANOTHER ONE ON GEET & MAAN =D

that whole ending was so good u had me guessing wht was going on every part i loved the baby scene vacuum baby
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if u do write plz pm me its sound like a cool story

Dear Mrs. Maan Singh Phurana 😉