FF: IRREVOCABLY YOURS #3 The End Chapter P. 17 M&G - Page 17

Chapter 20

Aww again. Maan is a cutiepie. Sorry for totally admiring your husband. It's a little bit out of anyone's control. 😆 😛

I never thought I'd say this, but I think I find Dev to be worse in your FanFic than I do in the show. His character is absolutely disgusting and I really really really don't like him. At all. He has no sense of shame whatsoever, and I do not and cannot understand how the flip you're supposed to fall in "love" with someone without having actually met them. Or even having had a decent conversation with them. Disgusting.

And again, Maan is so cute! Hahah at him 'coming into contact with her silky undergarments' and 'unclasping whatever needs unclasping'. That got a smile to my face. 😃

'Good night beautiful'. AWWWWW!!! That is flipping ADORABLE!! Love it!

Again, Dev is a despicable character. Period.

LOOL. She fell on him! Something Geet would totally do. She's such a flop in your FanFic, but I love her! Hehe.

LMFAOOO! Maan is a classic, but not as much as Geet! Loving it to the core! And trust her to drool at the perfect time! This is what you call a character! 🤣

Geet's diary entry was a true insight into what almost every 18 year old wishes for. She is a beautiful character, and I think you have to be thanked for that.

Chapter 21

In response to your introduction, I agree. I practically live on the existence of BroadBand. LMFAO! That has to be dangerous. 😛

That is so typical! (Not being negative about your FanFic of course; wouldn't dream of it!) That she's wearing a body-hugging 'short' silky nightie. But it's cute. I can kinda imagine it tbh. And after all, I do have a little crush on DD anyways, so yeah. DON'T JUDGE! I am normal! 😆

How the hell is that possible? 🤔But it's cute. (That's a bit vague, so I should say that I'm talking about the way the children in his imagination decided to morph into Geet)

You've made Maan much more sensible and lovable than he is in the show. And that is a feat. The way you say that his respect for her grew after he read her diary, I have to say that he is a noble man, for better want of words.

That should so have been the I Love You. Too soon though, I know. I'm greedy 😛

I can so feel Geet's embarrassment. But I still find it cute. And so does Maan. Awwiiee <3

This next bit for some reason reminds me of that scene from DDLJ where she thinks they slept together, and then he assures her that they didn't. That was one absolutely adorable scene with Raj and Simran, and so with Maan and Geet. Naturally. They are Maan and Geet after all. 😆 I talk so much crap.

Dirty Dirty. 😉

He got her a dress. A bit random, and probably unimportant, but any particular reason it was yellow?

LOVED THE ENDING! Haha.

Chapter 22

Geet has some rather strong expectations I see. 😆 Love it!

'Mr King Shit' has to be the best nickname I have heard from anyone for anyone anwhere, whether real or fake! LMFAO. No, I do not live an unimaginative life. It's just not as imaginative as yours. 😆

I love how he put it as his ringtone. It's like an unconscious confession. I dunno if that even makes sense (methinks it doesn't actually) but as far as I'm concerned, it's like deep inside he knows he loves her, but it hasn't come to the fore for him yet.

She seems angry, but she loves it really. 😉 LOL.

Tickling is by far THE worst thing anybody could do. To me at least. And by the looks of it, Geet too. I have to be the most ticklish person on earth. But Maan? Tickling? That's a weird thought. 😕

That kiss was a million and one times more intense than any other I've read. I don't know why, but I could quite literally feel Geet's love. And the end, where she realises her love? Well, my eyes were this close to welling up. For no particular reason. I am an emotional fool, as many people will tell you. 😳

Why exactly did Maan call it a mistake? I don't get it. I know, I'm dumb, but I don't. And I feel so bad for Geet right now. 💔 It's really sad, especially the way you've put it.

Chapter 23

I'm not gonna lie. I thought Maan had his realisation, but you just hadn't written anything about it, like you did for Geet. I dunno, but I really did think Maan knew that Geet was his love. Guess not. 😕

Such formal conversations. Such heart-breaking conversations.

He would purposely try to pick a fight? That is actually maha-sweet. Especially for Maan. (I was gonna say here especially for a guy like Maan but there isn't another one is there? 😆)

That is so a Maanish thing to do - slam the glass on the table and decide to get what you want. 😛

Your writing makes me feel so much more worse for Geet than I already do cos you manage to describe her feelings so well, and it's so sad! Poor thing [:'(]

Fall out of love? Does such thing exist? Well, in Geet world it does. 😆

That experiment had me in fits! 🤣 Quite literally. But might I ask, if these are the guys that you yourself find 'appealing' then I am ashamed in you Samira. I can completely understand your feelings for the quite amazing John Abraham 😍 but Arjun Rampal? 🤢 What the hell are you thinking?? LOL. Sorry, but I disagree, as you can tell.

It's cute. Very cute. (I'm referring to the little conversation they have before he drops her off)

Of course, Maan does find it irritating to be centre of every girls attention. He only wants to be the centre of Geet's attention right? 😉 Hehe.

Maan still doesn't realise what he feels for her? What is he? Dumb? Sorry to abuse your beloved like that, but seriously, even after feeling such intense jealousy, he doesn't realise? W*F?

Dev. Kill him now. 🤢

Chapter 24

I know it's a bit late, but 4shared.com is a good site. For Hindi and English songs. 😊

Ok, this is getting worse. He knows he's prepared to lay his life down for her, and he doesn't know he loves her? How on earth does that make sense? Actually, let me answer that myself; it doesn't. 😳

Maan is a coward. 😛 I just had to say that. 😆

That was such a sad conversation. They're both in so much pain, and frankly, it's painful for me to read it. And especially what he says at the end. Just one question though. Why were they speaking on the phone if they're in the same place? Or is he still at the office? 😕

Please tell me he knows now? 🤔

MATHS IS SIMPLY 😎 HOW CAN YOU SAY ANYTHING IS ANTI-NUMERALS? Hahah. Sorry for the outburst. I simply love Maths. A bit of an obsession you see. 😛

To answer Geet's question, I'll say, If men weren't allowed to look like that then what about us girls?

LOOOOOOL. 🤣 That is quite funny indeed! Maan witnessing this! LMFAO.

I also love how he got a little self-conscious and had to check himself out.

Geet is such a daredevil. No she's not. I don't know why I wrote that. I'm dumb. Don't mind me.

I did not expect this from Geet. Looking at Maan? Shameless girl! 😆 Who wouldn't? 😛

Samira, you are so dramatic! Whenever Maan's sad, we have to imagine that music?? 🤣 JOKES!

Chapter 25

You imitated Deepika's wave? Embarrassed? Or was it successful? LOL.

Geet came up with some pretty imaginative responses in case he caught her. Which one would she have used? I like to think that the last one is the best. 😆

Have I mentioned I love Geet's imagination? And yours too?

Maan is a little bit smart I must say. But I still think it's cute how they're almost having their hilarious fights like before. Obviously there's a difference, but it's nice to see that they're speaking in more than monosyllabic words. That was slightly sad to read.

She loved him WAYY too much. It's unhealthy.

Open flirting? That is not what I expected of Maan! But I must say that I am grinning like a bit of a fool right now. LOOL.

How much fun did you have describing his body? 😆

Oooohhh.. HAWT!

And heart-breaking.

Dev. DIE. DIE. DIE.

Who is this stranger Samira? We need a proper introduction!! Him and Geet are very close I see. Oh, and the image of Geet I'm imagining in my head makes her seem so sexy! She looks beautiful!

Maan is completely out of control. As cute as it is that he loves her so much, it's unhealthy isn't it?

They are both in so much pain, I feel like I can't read it anymore.

Fantastic FF hun...

Dear Samira,

I am floods of tears here, honestly! 😲

Never, have I wept so much over a piece of writing (well, other than the final Harry Potter and New Moon, that is) and yet you seem to draw out all my emotions from mere words, which are crafted together so beautifully, it's quite unbelievable. 👏👏👏

And I can't even pass the excessive crying off as PMS...😉

My mum actually came in the middle of my outburst, and thought something really grave had happened, seeing as I had mascara smeared all over my eyes giving me the classic "panda eyes"! 😛

And then I told her, (whilst choking) and the insensitive woman that she is, she laughed her heart out at my plight! 😲

The part where Geet reveals her diary entry to Maan, especially struck a cord with me.

It was like I was having a mental flashback of all the moments, from the very first one, when he saved her life and how, even in that situation, she acknowledged how HOT he was all the way to the beautiful moment of her walking down the aisle. 😃😃😃

On to more happy and normal thoughts, I then went from my all time low to being scarily hyper! 😆

My favourite part was during the birth but the most EPIC line had to be: '1 child, now 5 more to go'.

Maan's reaction to the vacuum made me literally fall off my chair 🤣(ROFL)

I laughed so hard that now, as well as my eyes looking all red and puffy, and my nose becoming all sniffly, my stomach is now aching too and has been for the last 15 minutes

I can't fathom how I'll deal with not reading any more of this FF... it was one of my top 3 favourite ones! It was truly a very lovely read...

I would also like to apologise for slacking with the comments, as college and the ridiculous amount of work that comes with it, took precedence at the time!

I'm feeling really guilty now, knowing that I can no longer comment from today onwards, hence the SUPER long one now!

I'm aiming on giving you at least 250 words. (aha 432 words according to Word!) 😊

Hopefully, it's good enough!

Thank you, thank you, thank you for all the PMs you've sent to me till date and for writing such amazingly beautiful and wonderful chapters, every single time! ⭐️

Please do PM me in the future if you EVER decide to write anything, whether it's a few lines or a whopper of an update, like your 12 page one! 😃

Love

Ayesha