FF: IRREVOCABLY YOURS #3 The End Chapter P. 17 M&G - Page 21

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Posted: 14 years ago
luved ur ff sooooooooo muchhhhh
made me cry whn needed &enjoyed every emotion in this ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was beautiful....i was almost cryn in office whn she collapsed.....oh god..io thought it had a bad ending....God bless ur dear....!
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Posted: 14 years ago
I never thought i whould cry smday on fiction... I m a stone hearted.... U made me cry i hate u 4r dis...lol... I know its a fiction still cried not moist eye, tear i litterly cried loudly...... Thank god nobdy is home ryt now......
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Posted: 14 years ago
a really nice story... but people please don't scare me like that... i wet almost 3 turkey towels with tears....
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi! thnx fr updatng nd frm !st thread to this last thread, i read thts was awsum nd lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyy,
i would really agree with geet's word tht if this realy exist in thus world (i mean this type of true love, affection.............. and so on ) btt thts lovely to read ur FF, bcoz in this world thr is no such sign of love nd trust will exist, except frm FF or story books.
thnx u fr mkng this such a nice FF
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Posted: 14 years ago
LMAO! Thank you everyone for the SUPER awesome and SUPER long comments! 😆 I'll reply to them as soon as I can find the TIME! 😆🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome fic............
very hilarious and emotional too...............................
liked it very much.......................
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Posted: 14 years ago

Firstly you are one amazing writer... the way u sketch every scene is commendable..👏

to begin with all I can say is your geet was a bit too fast actually not a bit her thoughts literally sky rocketed😆... whenever she would fantasize abt maan all I could think of was ali from the movie dhoom...😆

any normal girl would be scared after some goons attack her but here she was thinking abt her Greek god😆... she was ogling at his hands...🤣

😲omg she did not tell him he was absolutely eatable🤣 ... god I wanted to get into the story n hit her on the head... get a grip on your thoughts girl was all I had in my mind for her😆... OMG 😲she did not slap maan's ass as if he was some horse🤣... I was Rolfing... I could not stop laughing and my stomach was paining like anything... to top it all my sis was looking at me with an expression *you defo lost it di* n she did voice her thoughts much to my embarrassment...😆

she smelled like a pig...I was in splits reading it... infact I was in splits reading each n every fight of theirs...

his ringtone...her list of how to fall out of love with him...john's point cracked me... god u have one hell of an imaginative mind girl...

😲she did not kiss the TV screen😆, 😲she did not say she could lick his abs😆🤣 I could not stop laughing🤣... god she is insane... which sane human would kiss a TV screen just coz she liked some actor let alone talk with it...more than her I was all red reading it😆...

instead of rushing out of the room she rolled under the bed🤣... this girl really has a twisted brain😆... she has no shame I must say... she did not try looking away from him... ummm not her fault though... n u know why I guess I don't need to give my reason at this...😆

geet n her imagination... out of all people she imagined him as Tarzan...😆🤣

her confession was 'WOW is all I can say...😃

I loved how maan did not mind framing dev to have him rot in jail...

your geet is obsessed with movies🤣... btw all those thoughts abt maan n her fantasies were they hers or it was yours...😉

when I read she has cancer... I won't lie I jumped to the last chapter first... read the last line n she was alive then I resumed reading the story... after the update she declared she had cancer I had been crying like anything...put I loved the epilogue... thank god she lived... I had already read it that she would live yet I cried just as much reading the chapters... you write extremely well... *standing ovation*👏

his proposal, her conditions &their marriage had me in awe... whatever he said to her made me cry even more, that house, her dairy everything was great... just in case u don't know my eyes are swollen from crying right now...

BUT I love the ending😃... btw when she said 1 down 5 more to come I actually thought she was going to have 6 children😆... but then I realised later the context she said that in😆... btw why would she want 6 children😲... who wants six children but that is just typical geet...😆

More than anything else I loved the positivity with which u wrote the FF... u really went into depth with every single scene n that made the story all the more likable😊...how u explained her will to live n the way maan pleaded to god... it was beautiful...n ultimately god did listen to him... 😊

I loved your FF... Simply loved it...😊😳😛

I guess I have bored you enough with my bak bak... plz pm me if u decide to write another FF...😃

Btw did I tell u your song selection is great...😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
Just read you FF in one go..all 36 chapters were mind-blowing..It won't be wrong if I say that this is one of the bestest FF's that I have ever read!..it had a complete different storyline and you carried the story magnificently well!..you made me laugh like hell and made me cry terribly too!..This story truly touched me in all ways!..the charcaters of Maan and Geet were extremely well written and especially Maan's1..I mean I have the same question as Geet"was he for REAL?"..wow..a girl can only dream about a person like your Maan SIngh Phurana⭐️!..I am running out of words..really speechless with the end part and epilogue..I would have cried even more terribly(if that was possible) if Geet had not survived!..you took my breath away when I read the end but thanks to the epilogue for making me feel alive again!..calling you a BRILLIANT writer would be an understatement,..you are much more than brilliant ,awesome and fantastic!..your writing and especially your humorous timing is impeccable!..I enjoyed Maan-Geet's fights,their bickering,their love,their jealousy,their possesiveness,their togetherness and in short each and every aspect of this FF!..It happens very rarely that you read something and you are so touched by it that it leaves a lasting feeling of happiness and satisfaction and hope inside you-your FF truly made me feel like this!..thanks for the wonderful FF!..a great applause to you👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
wooooowwwwww!!!! now i wish i'd followed ur ff frm the start...it was amazing!!!!! i read it all in one go.....best ff ive read so far by far!!!!!!!!👏
im sooooo happy it had a happy ending...i was crying through the last 4 chapters frm when he came to visit her in the hospital...had to lock myself in my room so my parents wouldnt thing iv gone raving mad.....😆
but seriously u have a way with words...u could turn this story into a novel...u really could...its muuucbettr than some of the trash that gets printed these days!!!!hope that u keep writing...and congratulations on completting such a wonderful story!!!!!!👏

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