Mere Khwabon Mein Jo Aaye- AR last part-page50 - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
Heyy Thanxx!!
1stly for choosing the name I gave!!
I am just lovingg youur FF!
Completelyy!! Loved Armaan's Entrance.!!
as usual youu rockk!!
Your A Very Good Writer!
Loved It!
Thanx 4 The PM
--Manjari
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
Nice part frnd.
Loved it.

Thanx for the pm.

Ammy
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
ridz: hm okay well meri naam hai riddhima, lekin tum log mujhe kabhie kabhie ridzi yea ridz bulati ho. aur secret. okay so keerti bhabhi ke alawa yeh kisiko pata nahin hain, so please guys don't tease me okay? har roz mein ek sapna dekh thi hoon, aur i dream of this guy, lekin i never see his face (then looking straight at mr tattoo wala's eyes) i only see his eyes. uska naam, kuch nahin pata, lekin i know ki wohi hai mera prince charming...
girls: all that's so sweet ridz!
tattoo wala: i guess ab meri turn hai, last but not least, mein Armaan hoon, aur mera secret yeh hai ki sab log soch the hai ki mein ek bohat baara flirt hoon aur shayad playboy type, lekin i've never had a gf or anything => and no im not that type or anything, but i'm waiting for my soulmate - like riddhima i also dream about her, lekin i have this feeling that she is closer than we realize (looking at ridz)



PART 2

suddenly armaan and ridz (who are sitting across from each other) have an eye lock, both thinking along the same lines, kya yeh wohi sapno wala hai? they are looking into each others eyes as if asking each other, wondering and hoping....they are completely unaware of their surroundings when suddenly the train jerks to a stop and riddhima who was standing (she got up right before eyelock to get something out of her bag) across from armaan loses her balance and falls in armaan's lap.

Ridz fell in such a way that she is now sitting with her legs swung over one side of armaan and her hands on his chest/shoulder
Armaan caught her - so his hands around protectively around her waist.

Riddhima's bangs are blocking her eyes so armaan releases one of his hands from her waist and tucks her bangs behind her ear and lets his hand linger there while he stares at her face, riddhima is looking downish/she is half turned so she is facing him, but her eyes are lowered - she is looking at his (sexy) chest

armaan: hey shona u okay na?

riddhima: ha-haan

armaan: to phir aise neeche kya dekh re ho? he lifts her chin up so he can see her eyes
pata hai your eyes are beautiful, lekin there is something so familiar about them,
he then mumbles softly: aise lagta hai jaise tum...

riddhima: jaise mein...?

then Kabir - who was making sure everyone else is okay, comes over to ridz and taps ridz shoulder

ridz jumps up

kabir: hey darling tum theek ho na?

ridz: haan kabir, mein theek hoon, thanks to armaan

kabir: armaan yaar tum theek ho na?

armaan: haan, lekin kya hua? train achanak aise roukna? something is not right yaar

kabir: haan i'll go check it out

just as Kabir opened their cabin door open he saw a train conductor person (ppl who work on the train - idk what they are called - lol) walking by so kabir stopped him

kabir: excuse me saab kya hua? train aise achanak?

train person: haan actually woh sab samne tracks mein koi problem hai - koi accident ya kuch hua hai samne. toh hume stop karna para. train yahan rukna hoga ek din ki liye

kabir: oh i hope ki kuch serious nahin ho. so hum kahan hai ab?

train person: well ab hum ek chote sheher mein hai, ap chahe toh ek bohot ache hotel hai paas mein aur ap wahan ruk sakti hai ya train mein hi. train kaal 2pm mein jayegi

kabir: okay cool.

Kabir goes back to the group and tells him what the guy said tells them. the group decided on going to the hotel for the night, as the train beds are not as comfortable.

they had to take 2 cars as they didn't fit in one.

first car - rahul-muskaan, misha, kabir, piya, abhay
second car- armaan, atul, riddhima, anjali, sapna

second car:
atul: toh anji ridz kya tum dono behen ho?

ridz: nahin, lekin behen jaise hoon. hum ek saat baara hua, lekin after we joined college anji's parents moved to london. after we graduated she stayed back here with us, lekin after this trip anji is leaving us and joining her parents in london. actually my parents live there half the year too, but they keep switching.

anji: aw ridz, i'm going to miss you so much! i'm so nervous! i don't know anyone there!

atul: hey don't say that anji! main hoon! i'll take care of you! main bhi london main rehta hoon! you know b/c of work and all

anji: aw really! that's terrific! london jaane se pehle hi muhje ek acha dost mil gaya!

ridz: hey sapna, so tell us about amit

sapna: woh what do i say? i come from a gujrati family so my parents don't approve of love and all, but amit is gujrati also, and well we met at a coffee shop and well from there our love story gradually continued. he is goa for a conference. he works in london now. he was going to come see me in mumbai, but i decided to go to goa instead.
i really love him and can't dream of being with anyone else.

ridz: wow that's so cute sapna! i hope ki muhje bhi tumhari tarha pyaar karne wala mile!

armaan: guys i'm hungry! can we grab something to eat?

anji: sure let me call the others and tell them to stop

They stop at a roadside dhaba.
As they are waiting for their food, Armaan's phone rings

armaan: hello
....
armaan: oh haan, hey don't worry about it! I had fun!
....
armaan: how is he feeling now?
....
armaan: haha no i can't believe people tolerated me! haha
...
armaan: haha no i'd do it again in a blink of an eye, but i hope ksg doesnt get sick like that again.
.....
armaan: haha okay i'll talk to you later, and please do send me a copy of the dvd. i cant wait to show Bi. she'll have a laughing fit! haha okay mein rakhti hoon
....

--

Sapna: hey was that Arjun?

armaan: haan he wanted to thank me haha gosh you'd think he'd want to be disappointed rather

atul: haha stop being modest yaar, you know you were great!

ridz: kya hua?

sapna: woah actually humare ek friend hai arjun, aur woh ek private concert arrange kiya that for cancer patients. Karan Singh Grover was supposed to perform but he got sick at the last minute. and our ammy here has a knack for singing and dancing

atul: and don't forget his body is ten times better than ksg

sapna: not just body! overall he is better! anyways so armaan filled in for ksg at the concert. bas use ki baat kare the hum

atul: he was so good!

flashback:


(only imagine armaan instead of salman)

end flashback

ridz: wow armaan sounds amazing! kash hum pehle milte toh hum bhi tumhare performance dekh sakte the!

armaan: haha lekin muhje baar baar aisa kyun lagta jaise main tumhe pehle mil chuki hoon?thinks: jaise tumhari saat mere koi purane rishta ho

ridz: hmm pata nahin lekin mujhe bhi kuch familar lagta hai thinks: tumhare ankhen itna familiar hai, bilkul mere kwhabon main jo aiye uske tarha


Edited by ammy_ka_ashu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
nice part
aww u used 1 of my fav songs
luv it
n htx forpm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
hiii
awesome update
loved it
loved AR
loved the eyelock
so cute
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
OMGGG ! i absolutelyy amazingg part ! i started slapping myselff again ! haha i am soo crazy....but im just lovin this FF...and i hope everythings alrightt ! but anyways....awww....AR were cuteee ! loved there scene ! gott lil butterfliess in myy stomach hahaha....awwwiee lovedd the partt though ! and awww anjie and atul haha....soo cutee ! atul will always be there for her <3 andd aww sapna....luckily both are gujju....varna like wonder wat woulda happened haha...but anywayss....loved the part andd cant wait till the next aprt...soo update soon! thanks for the PM and update soon <3 =]
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awwww cute part thnx fr d pm n cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: rasikdhara101

OMGGG ! i absolutelyy amazingg part ! i started slapping myselff again ! haha i am soo crazy....but im just lovin this FF...and i hope everythings alrightt ! but anyways....awww....AR were cuteee ! loved there scene ! gott lil butterfliess in myy stomach hahaha....awwwiee lovedd the partt though ! and awww anjie and atul haha....soo cutee ! atul will always be there for her <3 andd aww sapna....luckily both are gujju....varna like wonder wat woulda happened haha...but anywayss....loved the part andd cant wait till the next aprt...soo update soon! thanks for the PM and update soon <3 =]


aw thankss
and as for home situation - well we've been better...
im beginning to wonder if my dadi has Alzheimer's disease on top of the stroke aftermath....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome part...waiting to read more....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
hey loved your update!
Do continue soooooonn!!
Sorry wont be able to giv a long comment
im not well now!
But Im loving this FF
Thnx 4 the PM!
Manjari

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