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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Muskan...
Long time baad thread par bhi comment kar rhi hoon... else FB is always there... :) :)
Geet is just soooo crazy... loved how innocently she acted... :P
and y do they think they r nt good for each other...infact they r just perfect for each other... Please Muski yahan par Maaneet separation nhi... :(
I want them to fight.. waise on screen bhi fight hi kar rahe hain... They need to realise the extent of their love nw... :P :P
Update soon... I just sooo wait for the updates...
Love You sooooo much
Sakshi
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 47

geet went to her house & slept wondering why she started loving him
yeh dil aapko itni shiddat se chahne kyun laga
har saans ke sath aapki hi naam aane kyun laga
aap kitna bhi mujhse talkh e talluk rakhle
zikr phir bhi aapka meri zaban pe aane kyun laga
yuh to hai kayi fasle aapke mere bich
lagta phir bhi aap mujhko meri jaan sa kyun hain
aapki furkat main tadapne ki ho chuki hai adat mujhe mano
aapse dur hone ka phir bhi ehsaas mujko rulata kyun hain
ye jaanti hun ke aapko nahi mohabbat mujhse
magar phir bhi lab pe mere aapka hi naam aata kyun hain
ho challa hain yaqeen mujhko ke aapko paana na hoga mumqeen mere liye
yeh dil phir bhi roz umeed ki shama jalata kyun hain
mehsus ki hai berukhi aapke baato mian kayi baar maine
lehjo wo phir bhi aapka mujhko itna bhata kyun hain
gar bichad na hi hai to khuda humko milata kyun hain
kamsin ko akhir wo itna satata kyun hain
kyun nahi rah pati aapke bina,
kyun iskadar se mujhe jod liya khudse
chaha tha aapki bheegi palkon se aansoon chura lenge hum,
chaha tha apni yaad se aapki har pal ko saja denge hum,
pass rahne se hi pyar sacha nahin kahlata,
door rah ke bhi pyar nibhana jante hai hum
lekin aapse door kaise rahen hum!!!
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wDrolSZfYks[/YOUTUBE]

brij rush to her room - geet geet
geet worried - ji veerji
brij - papaji is not keeping well I am leaving with darji
geet - mujhe bhi papaji se milena hain
baby~mujhe bhi nanaji se milna hain
brij hugs her - it will be really difficult try to understand
I will definitly take u to see him. please take care of youself for now
geet - umm
cries & breaks down missing her family

next day maan reaches office & resumes his daily routine
bechain nighahen mano kisi ka rashta dehkrahi thi
kuch baat thi jo aaj woh chup thi, uski khamoshi main jo dard
tha mano woh samjh gaya,
she came in & stood quite for few mins
she gives her resignation letter, he does'nt even look at it
tears it & bins it. she turns to leave... he comes infront & lifts her chin
maan - kya baat hain
geet - mujhe aap ke saat kaam nahi karna
maan - phir kya karna hain
geet - mujhe ghar jaana hain
tears rolls down her eyes... he drags her & make her sit in the car
geet - yeh kya kar rahe ho
maan - seat belt
geet - mujhe kanhi nahi jaana
maan pulls the seat belt of hers & starts the car
geet - yeh kanha ja rahen hain hum
maan keeps quite & keeps driving. after driving for a few mins reading the sign
board geet realizes maan was heading towards HP
geet - nahi please stop the car. main wonha nahi ja sakti
mainne kaha na main 8 months keliya ghar nahi ja sakti
aap ghadi rokiyee...please aap samjh nahi rahen hain.. please stop the car
she randomly opens her side of the door ...maan stops the car at once in a jerk almost skidding
both of them almost falling on the dashboard
maan - tum teehk ho... geet looks scared holding her stomach mumering baby baby!!
maan - geet tum teehk ho
she snaps back opening the seat belt - kya zaroor thi seat belt ki
agar use kuch huwa to..deehko baat bhi nahi kar raha
she keeps mumering..baby ...baby uttna ..baby !!!
she takes a cab & rushes
maan could'nt believe what he just heard
all her mumering just flashed making sense now...
-what her eyes meant when he he saved her from drowning
-jab rook na tha tab tu nahi rooka aab rooku na rooka kya farak padtha hain
-zaroor coffee ke liya tang kar raha hain..ur not allowed coffee samjhe tum..
-ek coffee ke liya uff...dono ne mera zindhaghi bhwal kar dhi...
-her fainting after the fight on the first day of office
-nahi main 8 months ke liya unse nahi mil sakthi...
-ek dil.. do jaan..bechain rehtha hain aap ke khayal main.
-what do u want me to do? I can't go to college, I can't stay with my parents
mujhe yanha aacha nahi laaghta.
-job is only for 2months na...tab tak to kisi ko kuch nahi pata
-mera saath pata nahi kya kya ho raha hain
aaj kal..mera taste buds bhi mera hisasab se nahi chaltha...can u believe..I started liking bland sea food..yucks!!!..who on the earth likes bland sea food and sushi..
-her morning sickness
-aapke aur mera beech yeh samjh khanse aagayee
-ise to aap ka he taste pasand hain to main kya karoon
-main kya kar sakthi hoon..aap ka bab...
-love u papa
-brij - nahi ..she trusts people blindly & i am scared koi uske bole panka fayada na utta le.. waise hi aapne bechkani harkatoo ke wajh se bhut problem mein hain ..
-seat belt...???woo..agar koi pregnant ho to stomach ..I mean baby kya hoga???
-dehkoo na mujhe chilly flakes nahi add karne de ra, aap kyun nahi raklethe isko aapne pas
-nahi after 2 months it will start to show ..
-aap yeh mat sochna ki main aapke paise main intrested hoon yah aap ko
black mail karna chathi hoon, or i expect anything from u...
(she gives the anklet back) woo veer ji ne sab kuch teehk kar diya hain
aap ko in sab main nahi padna padega..main main..woo actually I am
-how she removed the seat belt in sleep
-8 months tak aapne mujhe band jo rahka hain aapne saath
-lekin aapka yeh aks mujhe aap ke pas kheench tha hain iska main kya karo.
- doctor said groW*H is fine
-aab manzil ki kisi cha hain!!!
-maine pehle hi unhe kuch kam duhk diya hain jo aap ne yeh sab
-when pinky wispered - is halat main fasting, veerji naraz ho jayenge
-kuch nahi...kuch nahi chati aap se samjhe aap... kuch nahi chati aap se...
naa aap ka paisa, na aap ka naam
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x-1RW64yRwE[/YOUTUBE]
precap
the truth!!!

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Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
What happened? Kya se kya hoga....
He needs to snap out & have real conversation with Geet.
She is not doing it for him...she is doing it for them! He better start thinking in plural - as in you, me & baby, soon!
And Geet shouldn't be listening to people's half convo...u really don't hear anything good abt yourselves.
Waiting for next part...
-Sona
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Posted: 14 years ago
muski di...yeh aapneh kya kar di!!!!!..geet will resign????maan at last told his feelings to dadi iam happy abt tht...dadi will surely do sumthing!!!u cleared ma point wht i said before....the reason y maan and geet were away thnk u iam very happy after the bad epi of geet on friday..sorry culdn't comment on ur FF becoz was busy a lil bit..
❤️ rohini
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg - yh kya kardiya??? hai bhagwan!!!!!!!!
omg i didnt expect him to be angry after alll the realisation - haiiiiii ramm
but then he cud be angry in the sense she didnt tell him the "good " news
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Posted: 14 years ago
OH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I HOPE U WILL SHOW SUMTHING GUD MUSKI HAV FAITH IN U
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Posted: 14 years ago
😲 oh no i just hope baby is fine i'm so worried for baby ........it was too shocking 😲

i dnt knw how to react whether to be happy that maan knws the truth or feel bad ......no he will surely want to marry her but geet will definitely wont even thogh she loves him 😔 i'm so confused 😍

but da way truth cam out was brilliant
oh the flabck of maan i knew da day he cums to knw da truth he will rememberer each nd evry word of geet will

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 this was so fantastic so finally maan knws da truth

bt i'm dyng to see maan's reaction 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
Omg..di..I am so loving it!!
This is so cool!
Am I supposed to be sad or something?
Coz I love it how he realises everything!
I really loved the compilation of all her signs of her pregnancy!
It was like a trip down memory street..felt so good!
Please update soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
i want the next update sooooooon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
you are scaring me Muskan. But i loved it that he really understood what is happening with her and within her. he will be angry but on himself and will soon chase her to understand the truth from her own words.

Love you
Jaya

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