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Posted: 14 years ago

superBB upDate...............

loveDDD ittt............

fiNaLLy the truth is out.............

waiting for thE nExT pArT......!!!!!!!

Edited by sweetcherry96 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
di plsssssssssssssssssssssssss update

Edited by Kool_Naina - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 48

geet rushes to the hospital...cluctching her dupatta
tryng to talk to baby
baby~fainted!!!
geet~baby mama is baat karo na please & starts crying
she reaches the hospital... at the reception
geet - mujhe doctor se milna hain
nurse - do u have an appointment
geet - emergency hain..mera baby
nurse - please aap yeh form fill kijiya i will inform the doctor
geet fills the and gives it back
nurse - u have not filled the form properly..baby's fathers name
geet - mujhe woh sab nahi pata..kya fill karthe hain..veerji karthe hain humesha
nurse - u will have to fill in fathers name
geet cluctching her duppatta - I have to meet the doctor now..mera bacha
nurse - you don't know ur childs fathers name creating a scene & embarrassing her
another nurse comes in seeing the mess
nurse2 - what happened?
nurse1 - she has not filled the form..pata nahi kaise kaise log hain
aapne bache ke baap ka naam nahi mallom isse
nurse2 - she looked tensed, let me talk to her, what happened
geet weeping mera baby baat nahi kar rahain
nurse2 - call the doctor now..turns to geet
wait I will help u fill the form...baby ke papa ka naam kya hain
maan - Maan singh Khurana... shooting a stare to every one around
geet was too worried to react to his presence
consoles geet putting his hand around her, she looked really tensed and panicked
she started crying more, he held closer wipping her tears

nurse2 disperses the crowd ...maan looks at the nurse with in real anger
nurse1 fumbles with his fuming eyes - woh I was ..
maan snaps the form & fills it up
nurse - room number 2
geet & maan walk to the doc's chamber
maan - don't worry, kuch nahi huwa hoga
geet still weeping
doc - what happened?
geet - car seat belt, accident & starts crying again
doc looks at maan not understanding a word
maan - we just had a small accident
doc - geet tum kya karti rahti ho is halat main
pehle 3 din tak bina kayae piyae rahti ho, phir abhi, itni laparvahi teehk nahi
let me check ..please lie down there
maan waits restlessly,
after the examination & scanning doc - sab kuch teehk hain
geet & maan sighed in relief
doc - nothing to worry about car seat belt... just make sure u don't
put it over ur stoamch, keep it low

geet - ji
maan takes the reports & they were about to leave
doc - geet I had spoken about adoption, woh parents se baat hogayee hain
tumhari veerji kanha hain, I am not able to get him on phone
maan looks at her & doc
geet - ji main veerji ko kah doonghi
maan - adoption ki koi zaroorat nahi, thanxs doctor
geet - lekin
maan holds her hand hinting to be quite & takes her out
geet snaps her hand - aap ko insab main padne ki zaroorat nahi
maan kept quite
geet - veerji ne sab arrangement kiya huwa hain aap please kuch gadbad mat karna
maan keep looking at her
geet mumers kanhi doc ne adoption ke liya mana kar diya to..she goes back
looking for the doc he was not there in the cabin... maan holds her in anger
maan -maine kaha na adoption ki zaroorat nahi
geet snaps back - kyun aap adopt karenge
maan - mujhe aapne bache ko adopt karne kya zaroorat hain
geet - why are you saying like this
she looks at him nothing about his expression changed. His mouth stayed in a straight line.
His eyes continued to hold hers. Not by a twitch of a muscle did he
give away what he was thinking. She waited, clasping her hands in front
of her waist, nibbling on her bottom lip. The silence stretched between
them until the room vibrated from the tension.
khamsohi si chagayee kuch der tak maan yun hi use deehk tha rahe tha
yeh kuch darthi, kuch sambalthi, phir soch main padgayee
Would he blame her? Did he understand that she hadnot done this on purpose?
Would he get angry at her? She knew he wouldn't hurt her,
phir bhi kuch ajeeb sa darr tha uski man main. She tried to think of something
intelligent to say. Nothing came to mind. Just when she became
convinced he was never going to say anything at all, he spoke.
She had spent the morning planning her way out of all this, moving away from him.
She thought she had planned for every contingency but she never expected this
Geet he said, his voice low but clearly audible, mujhse shaadi karoghi?

geet ki ankee mano uske dil ka aayeena thi, uski har baat maan se kah dethi
na jaane yeh baat woh pehle kyun nahi pad paya...
geet was like a kid when it came to hiding her feelings. Maan watched her
carefully, monitoring what she was thinking. Shock widened her eyes and
drew the color from her skin. Her lips parted, but she could'nt speak.
Her fingers twisted together holding onto the dupatta and knoting them
kya kah pati ..kuch ulaaj se gayee thi uski sari uljane
kuch khamosh aankho se baat karti
aise hi aksar khoi rahti
usi ki hi khayalo mein khoye rehti
pata nahi kab din kab raat hoti

Honth keh nahi sakte jo fasana dil ka,
shayad nazaron se woh baat ho jaye!!!
on a lighter side the VM suggested by gitz
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IUOBWoX269Q[/YOUTUBE]

precap
geets reply!!!
AVIS credits to meyis, VM CREDIT
memze
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan

Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ME first after sooooo many days loved the way maan acknowledged that he fathered the baby .Plz unite both of them .

luv u musks truely magical👏👏👏👏👏

Edited by simzzzzcool - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
HI Di🤗

awesome update 👏👏👏👏👏
loved it sooooooooooooooooooo much ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Thank God Baby is fine😊😊😊😊
Thank God No Misunderstanding between Maaneet😊😊😊😊😊
OMGGGGGG Maan propose her😍😍😍.....................i just hope she says YES😍😍😍
can't w8 for next part
plsssssssssssssssss cont soon

Luv
Naina🤗

Edited by Kool_Naina - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow...........😍,,,maan finally asked her.......... so cute and nice ... geet should accept this ofcourse.......
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Posted: 14 years ago
wat a part muskaan n m loving this love story!!!:)plz continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ur ff is great. Just wanted to say that pregnant women are advised to wear seat belts as it is safer for both mother and baby
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Posted: 14 years ago
pheew .. doesnt look like a seperation .. atleast u make us happy though i like the twist in the show .. arrey yaar such a short update :( :( ??
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey Muskan

gr8 update .........👏👏👏.......Maan is taking it very cooly !! i guess i should not expect him to freak out. but socha tha Geet ka side effect bhi hosakta tha.
the avi's were brilliant.
thanx for updating.

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