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Posted: 14 years ago
plz plz update moreee its sooooo goood i wannna read moreee!!
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in order.....

GEET try 2 ESCAPE?

BRIJ TORTURE GEET? 1st then....

ARMAAN TORTURE GEET badly....
MAAN SAVE GEET in same tym....kill Armaan....Brij 2 go mad...
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update kab miley ga muje..........😔😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow nice update
OMG MAAN MISSING I HOPE HE IS FINE !!!!!
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hey dear...update soon...!!! 😊

waiting...waiting...waiting...!!! 😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
am writing the update nw.. will be up in 30 mins x
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PART 14
3 days later

GEET

It had been 3 days since Geet had been kidnapped by Armaan. She was kept locked in a room. Food and water and clothing were given to her. But Geet didn't touch it at all. She kept looking out the window to a barren land. She was looking for one person, only one her Maan.

Armaan walked in seeing Geet looking out the window he smirked. He saw the food untouched and the water hardly drank. He went up to her and grabbed her by the hair.

'Geet sweety stop dreaming. Sapne sach nahi hotey. Tumhara Maan nahi ayega.. auska intazam maine kardiya hai'

'MAAN AYEGA AUR MUJHE YAHA SE LEKAR JAYEGA.' Geet replied angrily. Armaan laughed at her. He called in his accomplice

'Ridzi Darling, please get her ready and make her eat, we have to present her to dad today, he will be so happy seeing his revenge complete'.

Ridzi smiled and nodded at Armaan. She kissed him. Riddima brought in 2 other girls. They held Geet whlist Riddima force fed her. They took her to the shower and bathed her. Geet tried resisting, but Riddima showed her the gun. Geet wanted her life to end but her heart knew that Maan was alive and would take her away from here.

After 2 hours, Geet was changed dressed and fed. She was taken in front of Brij. Brij smirked at her and smiled.

'hmmm kitni khoobsurat ladki ha hamare Karan aur sunaina ki.. agar wo log aaj zinda hotey to kitna aacha hota'

Brij, Armaan and the rest of his men laughed. Geet stood there silently scared and angered. Brij walked up to her and held her by the cheeks

'Tumhare maa baap ne mere dil bohot dukaya, maine kitna vishwass kiya aur aune mere saat gadari ki, auski keemat tumhe chukane paregi'. He trailed his fingers down her cheeks and neck. Geet closed her eyes in disgust.

'hmmm, Armaan, tumhari baari pehle actually issi tum hi raklo tume bohot pasand hai na'. Riddima smiled and she didn't have any problems with Armaan as she knew Armaan loved her but Armaan still had a male weakness.

'Armaan, I have no problems.. It will give me some peace and rest for a few nights'. Riddima Armaan and Brij giggled. Geet looked at Riddima in disgust. How could a woman think this cheap.

'Tum ak aurat hoke bi kitna gandi soch hai tumhari' Geet spoke. Riddima smiled and said

'Love, mere soch tik hai tumhari to bohot sati savitri jaise hai'.

Brij clapped his hands to end the discussion

'Right, Armaan tum jao aur apna waqt iske saat zaroor lena, Riddima betey, yaha aajao mujhe tumse kuch kam hai aur the rest of you, apne apne kaam pe lag jao'.

Armaan dragged Geet to a room of the house. He left her there for a few minutes. Returning 10 minutes later. Geet tried to look for a way out or a weapon to use, but there was nothing. She was really upset scared and uncertain of her future. Maan where are you she thought!

Armaan came into the room, smirked evily at Geet. Geet moved back as Armaan moved forward.

'Geet, will you marry me'. He mocked at her reminding her of his proposal. Geet stared at him in anger.

'Mere pass mat anaa'. She exclaimed pointing her finger at him. Geet saw Armaan lock the door. The door had a combination lock hence Geet couldn't even steal the key off him. Armaan went up to Geet as Geet moved further back. He grabbed her from the hair and pulled her neck down. Geet closed her eyes in pain. She struggled to get out of his grip. He smiled. He removed her dupatta from her neck and let Geet go. He threw her on the bed and removed his shirt. He lay on top of her. He pinned her hands down on the pillow and removed her top half way down. Geet struggled and to move but it was no use. He started to kiss her cheeks collar bone, and neck. He moved down and kissed her in between her breasts. He moved to her shoulders, he bit her hard and started to kiss her aggresivouly over her neck and collarbone. Geet started to cry helplessly. She screamed

'MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN'. Armaan smirked and said

'NO MAAAAN is going to come and save you from me'. He moved towards her lips Geet closed her eyes in fright when she felt the weight being lifted off her. She heard a bang and opened her eyes to see Armaan in a bloody form on the floor and Maan standing in front of her. Geet got up and quickly adjusted her dress. Maan threw her dupata to her. Geet started crying out of happiness. It was like Maan had heard her in pain and came to her. Maan looked at Geet in pain and at Armaan in anger.

FLASHBACK'MAAN

After Armaan had taken Geet, Maan had threw a navigator in the car. It managed to fit on perfectly. Armaan men then surrounded Maan and started to shoot him from all angles, but luckily for Maan, his army and the police had killed them all except one who called Armaan and lied that Maan was dead along with a few of his men. He followed Armaan swiftly, through his laptop finding out where he had taken her. He and a few of his men to Armaan and Brij's lair. They intercepted everything and Maan tried looking for Geet but couldn't see her. Two of Brij's guards were replaced with Maan's guards. They told MAan everything up to date with what was happening.

On the second day, Maan father, and the entire police force and Maan were ready to attack Brij and his lair. They were going through the plan. The guards had told Maan that Geet was okay and no one had touched her yet and she was being locked in a room. Everything was organised.

On the third day, Maan was told that Brij and his whole clan was arriving to the lair today and Geet was being presented to him. Maan got angry. He was worried about Geet. That day the whole team immobalised. They stood around Brij lair making sure there was no way out from each area. They had killed every guard surrounding the lair and taken there place. Brij and his men didn't suspect a thing when they came. Maan saw Geet from the windw looking out. She looked pale and weak. He heard Armaan come in and stood next to the window on the left out of sight. He heard Geet say

'MAAN AYEGA AUR MUJHE YAHA SE LEKAR JAYEGA'. Maan smiled seeing her trust and love for him. He then heard the rest of the conversation.

When Armaan took Geet into the room. Maan and his team attacked the whole building killing arresting everyone. Brij was arrested and tied in shackles. Riddima had managed to run and hide. Once everyone was out of the way Maan went to look for Geet, when he heard her scream his name. he ran towards the direction of the voice and opened the door from the outside and saw Armaan on top of Geet. His blood boiled seeing Geet struggle and cry. Without thinking, he grabbed Armaan and threw him to the ground punching him hard in the abdomen. He saw his Geet's face with fright. He saw Geet open her eyes and saw happiness relif and love for himself in there. He saw her adjust her suit and Maan threw her duppata at her.

Maan turned to punch Armaan, Geet hid behind Maan. Maan was punching kicking Armaan like non stop. Anger clearly over took him. Armaan was loosing blood and the fight. Maan was about to give the final blow when he heard a womans voice

'Let Armaan go warna main isi abhi mardongi'. Riddima stood there holding Geet really tight with a gun to her head. Geet pleaded with Maan to help her. But she knew she couldn't trust Armaan or Riddima, what if they kill her anyway. Maan looked helpless. Armaan laughed seeing Maan state and love for Geet. He walked towards Geet and Riddima when Geet stamped on Riddima foot making her drop the gun. Geet kicked the gun towards Maan. Maan smiled seeing Geet quick thinking actions. She ran behind Maan. Maan held the gun towards Riddima and Armaan, until the police came and arrested them.

After they had left Geet turned to Maan. She felt really guilty and upset for not trusting Maan

'Maan wo main, I'm sorry maine aap par barosa nahi kiya aur main wo..'. Maan stopped Geet from speaking further by putting a finger on her lips.

'Geet tumhe aus waqt jo sahi laga tumne wo kiya.. aur galti mere hai maine tumhe sachai nahi batayi ke main tumhe protect karne aya ta kyun ke mere dad Vikrant Khurana ne kaha ta'

'Vikrant Khurana.. Vikrant Uncle''

'Haa.. '. Maan explained to Geet the whole story of her life up to date. Geet understood everything.

At Home one month later

'Geeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet' Maan yelled.

'Kya hai' Geet said annoyed.

'yaha aajao NOW'. Geet walked into the living room and saw Maan telling her the good news she had been waiting for.

'Geet orphanage had been re done. Aur sare bache tik hai deko' He said showing her the pictures and photos of kids being happy. New carers had joined the orphanage. Maan had become a police commissioner as his father had resigned. Geet worked in the nursery with kids just one mile away from the home. Life had changed a lot.

PRECAP: --URM' nt sure nw' hmm how about the delayed honeymoon x

Edited by sweetysumaiya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
YAY go Maan and Geet. Such a hero he is :-D
Your precap sounds good to me dear go ahead an continue soon :-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
happy maan came and saved geet
can't wait for da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it yay
omg i could never imagine ridzi and ammy doin that lolz
omg it was awesomeeeeeeeeee
loved every bit
ya jaan go with ur idea of the precap!!!

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