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Posted: 14 years ago
Sounds interesting😊
But please give atleast 2-3 parts to the present storyline and then introduce the new one😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
love the new twist.
do continue plz.
update soon.thx
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 15
'Geet Geet jaldi se saaman pack karo'. Said Maan walking into the bedroom where Geet was lying and reading twilight.

'kyun app kahi ja rahe hai' asked Geet getting up. Maan walked to Geet and put his arms around her neck and said

'main nahi hum,'.

'hum kaha ja ra he hai' asked Geet in a babyish voice.

'tum bolti bohot ho.. jaldi se tumhara aur mera saaman pack kardo'. Geet quickly packed her clothes and Maan and before she knew it they were packed, and had boarded a flight. Geet kept pestering him all the way but Maan didn't speak at all. After a while they reached there destination. They had arrived in Shimla.

'Maan hum Shimla kyun ayi hai' asked Geet walking into the hotel room.

'Geet humare honeymoon ke liye'. Geet shied and blushed. Maan went up to her and pulled her into a hug.

'kyun tumne yaad nahi ke sari married couples honeymoon pe jatey hai'. Geet looked down and blushed.

Geet pulled out of Maan's hugged

'I LOVE YOU MAAN. Main hamesha yehi dua karti hu ke har janam main app mere ho aur ham hamesha saat jiye aur marey'. Maan quickly covered her mouth and said

'marney ki baat kabi mat karna Geet hum hamesha saat rehege'.

Geet and Maan went to the temple the next morning when a pandit told them

'beti beta, aaj bohot shub din hai.. agar har janam main ek dosre ke saat rehna hai to aaj tum dono phir se shaadi karlo'. Maan and Geet looked at eachother and knew exactly what the other person was thinking.

They went remarried eachother but not just for this lifetime but for many lifetimes in the future.

'aaj aap dono har janam main ek dosrey se bandey hue ho jeetey raho' said the pandit.

That night, Maan came in the hotel room after Geet. He went to buy Geet a gift. He saw Geet looking out the window. Geet sensed Maan behind her

'Maan yeh chand hai na bohot khoobsurat hai hamara rishta keh tara'.

'haa Geet, liken Chand main bi daag hota hai liken hamere rishta main kabi nahi'.

He lifted Geet up and put her on the bed.

'aaj sahi mahino main hamare suhagraat hai'. Geet blushed. Maan took her clothes off piece by piece feeling her body sensuously. He was arising the hormones and feelings in Geet. Geet pulled Maan closer to her. Maan starting kissing her on her neck and collar bones. Geet pulled him closer taking off his top and kissing his bare chest. He kissed Geet passionately on the lips playing with there tongues and in no time they were connected with eachother as both bodies moulded as one. They spent the whole night making love to each other not wanting to let go.

The following morning Geet awoke in Maan's arm. She smiled and went to get changed. After breakfast Maan and Geet went out for shopping.

Maan kept looking at Geet whlist he was driving. Geet smiled and held his hand which was over the steering wheel. Maan then turned to the front to see a lorry heading towards him. Maan and Geet were shocked in fear. Maan turned the car to the right but it was too late. The lorry hit them and Maan and Geet's car fell into a ravine and blew up. Maan and Geet souls rose from there bodies.

Maan soul went into a body of a new born baby in Delhi. After 3 years Geet's soul entered a new born baby girl in Amritsar. Both new borns were unaware that fate had already written there destiny. Maan and Geet had been reborn with same love and same essence. Now all they had to do was to find out what the meaning of love was.

PRECAP: 20 years into the future'

Introduction of a New GEET: aged 19

Introduction of a New MAAN: aged 23

Edited by sweetysumaiya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
res!!

wow
i need to recover.................
that was all in a blink of an eye!!!
concept is different!!!
cant wait!
Edited by cutiepie9512345 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
please dooo comment xx bdw just to reiitarate.. (sorry cnt spell and im studying LAW lol )
if u want pms.. u gta send me a buddy request for this and love fear and obsession x im kinda thinking about love fear and obsession on how to word the next update. cos in my head and images in my brain is hard to put down to words x
Edited by sweetysumaiya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey...wow new luv story again... nice update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
yeh well i cudnt think of any issues that cud arrive.. so decided to make a new one and hav lots of ideas.. i.ee first meeting and then the temple that they gt married in will play a great role and im gna keep that pandit alive.. lool he will be like really old LOL!!! and off course more danger and saving for Geet.. when dnt she need it LOL! and lots of fights.. love and romance.. this new love story will be HECTIC if i say so myself LOL!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
loved it
superb work
was so upset that they died
then read the precap and was so happy
cant wait till they see eachother
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it sweety.............waiting for their meeting.........story is different......plzzzzz continue want to read more
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG OMG OMG Thats Amazing....👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏..............
Loved it soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much.......❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️........
wow what a Twist Yaar.......😃.......
Im left Speechless...............
Eagaerly Eagerly Eagerly waiting for the next Part............
Pls Pls Pls Update Soooooooooooooooooon..............

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