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Manpreet

@Maneetkraze

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Posted: 14 years ago

#861

OMG!! THIS PART WAS FREAKIN AWESOME!! I was laughing out loud during Dadimaa's parts.

Loved that Dadimaa was trying to be a detective and figure out what's going on between them. Truly amazing!!!!

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sana

@sana111

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Posted: 14 years ago

#862

Absolutely wonderful story....please keep it up

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568124

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Posted: 14 years ago

#863

Originally posted by: Maneetkraze
OMG!! THIS PART WAS FREAKIN AWESOME!! I was laughing out loud during Dadimaa's parts.
Loved that Dadimaa was trying to be a detective and figure out what's going on between them. Truly amazing!!!!

I'm telling you, I was laughing too. The problem is when I imagine all the scenes, with the music and the setting, it comes out good. But i'm not sure if its the same way when you read it from your end.

That is also the reason why I reuse many of the dialogues, so that the same mental images are created for you and that is what I did for Daadi. The way she was playing cupid in the soap.

I wish there was a way to embed music into the post so that the same setting can be created when you are all reading.

I couldn't control my laughter when daadima was fainting. I was rolling that my roommate had to come check on me to see if I was alright.

Yes daadima is going to be a key role as well for Maneet.

Thanks for posting.

Hasini

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maaneet2010

@maaneet2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

#864

Heya, once again you have given us two amazing parts. 👏I love the way you have framed the sentences and brought in humor to lighten the situation. It is a very good idea about Geet's decision to move to "Frisco". Such ideas does bring in reality and that's what I love abt ur story. I hve quoted below some of my fav lines from ur last two updates:

"Aah…kab utrega yeh San Francisco ka boot." 😆

"Unka bas chale toh…mujhe bhi utakar le chal te…."😆😆😆

"I guess it pours when it rains."

"Kya…Geet shaadi shuda nahin hain….lekin…vusne tho hame khud batayi thi….achha mujhe tho detective ka role lena hi padega."😲😆

Me @ office ..it's a Monday morning and I am smiling from ear to ear. 😃😛

Ya wish we could embed music into the parts, it would be so wonderful .. more dreamy .......😍

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#865

Daadi was so funny...!!!lol.... Still laughing...... I hope her family not tricking her......... U know like in d serial......

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569360

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Posted: 14 years ago

#866

hiii hasini

once again a gr8 update from u........

dadi playing a detective is hilarious and interesting......

All my anger vanished and only my love for him was left. If I missed this opportunity to connect with him, there was a possibility that I would never be able to do so again. I didn't want any regrets in my life, I had enough already.

i loved the above lines.....they are very much true....there are times when we are supposed to keep our ego, anger aside ,especially in case of ur near and dear ones...........otherwise it will be too late for us to regret........

i guess its goin to be difficult for geet to move to SF......as maan has become an indispensable part of her life......who is always there to be of some aid to her..........n showers her the love, care and affection and at the same time giving her space .............

so overall an impressive update from u.....

loving the pace and the track of ur ff

keep writing

love u and ur ff........kudos to u

melody

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-pixie-

@-pixie-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#867

Oh that was totally unexpected....I just hope its not a trap..with her family refusing to let her leave for the US or emotionally blackmailing her into staying! You had hinted about it when she broke the news about Dev to her family... There is potential for lots of drama here...

Hasini one input: I wish Maan was a bit more pushy in making Geet realise/accept her feelings for him- I feel he is bit too secure and relaxed in his assumption about how Geet feels about him- With the kind of personality, ego and power he has- he should be more insistent.

I don't know maybe I am making assumptions based on the son-creen Maan but I still find it sttrange that he would be willing to give her so much space- especially given the place where they are in their relationship. Especially since Maan has always made Geet face hard facts and given her the courage to face her inner demons.

Maybe you already have it coming and I should just wait 😊

I know I am being very greedy- but please update soon...

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roopali

@rsroopali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#868

d update was realllyyyyyyy gud i hope she tells all her family members tht she is divored &i want 2 see maaneet getting married in this
waiting for ur next update

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nisha

@nisha_bh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#869

hey Hasini....

m still in a trance....really dont know,how to express wat m feeling now....feeling short of words...as i always do....wat beautiful updates....

firstly,i hv 2 tell u tat i've never told u tat how much i love ur chapters' titles....but this time,if i dont tell u this,then it will b a gr8 mistake....

Bridges To Bliss......so perfect....bridging in their relationship....n tat relationship is bringing bliss....eternal one....this bridge has taken a long time to build up...n this time,it will not break tat easily....maan's emotions tat was coming out....was awesome....he was explaining wat he feels....not tat ki he was bursting out of emotions....he handled it so maturedly....u were rite,this is wat is expected 4m a29yr old man....he is not a boy anymore,tat he cudn't figure out his emotions,n put it clearly to his lady love....

n ur words do magic.....as he touched her,she felt like,it was snowing....i was so so so moved by this line.....how tender,how delicate,how soft his touch wud be.....n u just put it in this simple words.....making me mesmerized....n d way he epressed his love...."Tumhari…basha main…hot chocolate And if you want to hear it my way….tumhe bahuth pyaar karta hoon, aur tumhari saath mera zindagi bithana chahta hoon"......

here,too he put her first...first,wat she wud feel,n then wat he is feeling.....waaaoooo...i mean how did u do tat????so much passion in these words....".Aur zindagi ki is mode main, mein tumse kuch nahin mangoonga…Bas main sirf tumhare paas rehna chahta hoon".....

well,i hv to say tat i was a li'l disappointed wid geet's decision about going away 4m him....but still its understandable,tat its important 4 her,to do something on her own....here,wat meera has said,m very moved by this....tat others make our lives worthwhile....so true naa....even geet is going to understand it very soon i hope....tats y maan used to be liked tat...n its geet's presence,which hv made him to open up....

n babaji has his own planning too....

now,they both r in India....

i just hope,babji's n dadi's planning became fruitful soon.....

really lovely updates hasini.....

love ya....