New FF: New York times with Maan and Geet - Page 84

Originally posted by: sharmake11

why is Geet leaving now specially when Maan confess is love to her poor Maan i fell sorry for him great update pls cont soonnnnnnnnn thanks pm

Its been just 3 months since her break up and she also faced a big trauma in life a month ago.
She doesn't want to jump immediately into another relationship for now.
She already has a failed relationship. Her relationship with her parents is also strained.
Life is not going to be same for her, now that she already knows Maan's feelings and will be unable to do justice to the same.
She needs to understand her complete potential before she can look forward to sharing her life with someone is my take.
But trust me its all for the good.
Thanks for your comments
Hasini.

Hey Hasini,

First of all I would like to apologize to you that being one of your regular readers for this Fan fiction, I have not been commenting or giving any encouragement to you lately. I am soo sorry. I was so occupied with work, but never did I miss a day when I didn't read your amazing piece of work. I read it every day, but couldn't write a response back to you. But nevertheless your work has continued to only get better and better with each passing day, regardless of any encouragement you may or may not have received from your readers. I am in love with the way your story has progressed over time and there isn't one thing I want to complain about.. you have done a fabulous job and this story seems so real because this is something that would happen in reality (Geet taking time to accept her feelings for Maan after all that she has been through, except the only thing which is kind of hard to find is a guy like Maan who would wait as much as him and do as much as Maan does for Geet). Guys like Maan in your story are not impossible to find but are rarely out there.. Which is why this Maan makes us all feel so good and gives a happy feeling within.

Geet getting mobbed – really really sad, and heartbreaking but it brought the two of them together. I was in awe how Maan stood by her; sometimes close to her and sometimes at distance. It must have been hard on him as well but he handled the situation really well. All these characteristics make him so unique and lovable. New Years eve, Maan's confession and Geet deciphering the poem said by Maan was off the hook. The Poem had such a good hidden message to it and it was such a unique way of expressing love by using those exact lines for Geet. It was truly commendable Hasini. Truly amazing… Excellent Work!!!

Never did I think that Geet would decide to move away to Frisco… that was totally unexpected! I mean I don't want to imagine their story go on without them being close to each other but I guess I will accept it as a part of Geet's journey to find herself. We all want happy gushy mushy things but we always forget that life doesn't always give you gushy mushy romantic moments all the time… This is why your story is so realistic. It brings in reality to show us that life can take any sort of twist n turn at any point in time.

Next, Maan off to India – because he couldn't see her leave! Aww! I love this Maan. Can I have him.. 😉 LoL.. He is beyond adorable and too good to exist I tell ya. Geet's family calling her to India, I accepted that but Geet's brother being violent with her – Not cool !! The best part – Geet answering back and not willing to take Sh*t from him is what I love.. Geet – you go girl… Life has taught her so much and I am so glad that she has turned out this way. I am loving it.

Now I can't wait to read up more on how this story will turn out with her going to Delhi and see Maan as well. Totally looking forward to that.. Please write a super long part because when I begin to read I always start to get sad when I see the end of the update coming up.. I just want to continue reading, that's how amazing your story is. Never have I written so much about a fictional story. Its become a drug now.. So keep going Hasini.! I am loving every bit of it!!

PS – now coming to everything else! I am soo sorry to hear about your car and the accident. I hope all is well with you. Please take care and although I am not there in person but let me know if I can be of any help to ya. And Congrats on ur new Mac! You must be loving it. Well enjoy ur new laptop and keep giving us amazing updates..

I apologize for not being so regular @ writing back recently but I will definitely try to be from now on.

Good luck with everything and keep up the great work. 👏 👍🏼

-Nikky

Hey I also though this chapter was a crucial point for the story as I think geet is wanting this to find out all her answers because right now where she is standing she is finding it difficult to give a name to the relationship she shares with maan whereas he already confessed she just needs this to find her answers and maybe her identity I'm not sure if I'm correct but I also agree that this is an important stage, when I look at maans side he confessed and all he needs now is reassurance that she feels the same but he understands where geet is at the moment so he isn't getting angry and impatient he knows geet an to him she is predictable so he knows that he should wait but this was more on geet and her confusions and question marks that she needs to clear up anyways great update as usual and great to know your getting better and can't wait for the next update 😊

Whoa! That was fabulously penned! This is actually a turning point in Geet's life and their relationship as well.....sort of......she wants to go away from all of them and know where she stands and what she wants out of life......I actually like her drive to figure out her life on her own and know herself more profoundly......it's really important.....only then will she be able to acknowledge her feelings for Maan....without any inhibitions.....that will also make her stronger......I actually loved this part! Maan too, was frustrated.....but did not protest much.....kinda understanding.....but he cares for her and is very protective of her. Oh, I found that emergency stairs part hilarious......lolz.....overall an amazing update! Do continue soon.

a little difficult to understand...why is she so confused about her feelings...esp after that water adn realising that he was her need...and also running away to san Fransisco?? its wierd to leave the people who genuinely love you only because you want to see what life has in store...she joined new york for the same reason...and now she wants to go away from here too!!!!

really nice part but i think geet is just trying to avoid getting into a relationship with maan plzzzzzzzzz dont do that
plz update next part soon

Beautifully written once again! Ps I have been a silent reader but have decided to join IF x
Paloma x

hey great update!

Originally posted by: pisces_pisces

a little difficult to understand...why is she so confused about her feelings...esp after that water adn realising that he was her need...and also running away to san Fransisco?? its wierd to leave the people who genuinely love you only because you want to see what life has in store...she joined new york for the same reason...and now she wants to go away from here too!!!!

please explain??? a little confused :)

btw i love ur ff !!!:)

Sorry dont get your "esp after that water adn realising that he was her need". What is the water you are referring to?
She feels overshadowed by Maan in everyway. He is there always around her and she is lost. She needs time to process everything. She came to NewYork to make something of herself. This is in part 1. But New york has given her a support system, where she is unable to see where she ends and where the others begin.
She is not running away, she is walking towards reality. New York is a rosy picture because of Maan and meera.
She doesnt have roommate trouble,not worried what will happen if she makes a mistake at her workplace and hoards of people to keep her company. every need and want is fulfilled by Maan directly or indirectly.
If someone is around all the time, when they are in trouble, that person in trouble should definitely question the affections for that person helping them. In a world where you receive very little attention, it is very easy to get carried away only to repent later.
Geet cannot make another mistake in deciding a life partner and she has to know who she is before she fully accepts another person in her life.
Let me know if this explains it.

Thanks for asking. I love it when people question me
Hasini

oh my god...kya twist hai....anyway I am sure u will have a lot of interesting things in store for us....I really like the way you are taking the story ahead....it is not that they see each other, fall for each other and then end up confessing to each other and that is all....you have a lot of creativity....if not we all used to wonder when Geet and Maan in the actual serial confessed to each other and then when Dev's truth came out, if this was the end to the serial and we all used to wonder how cvs would be taking the story ahead.....but you seem to have a clear vision of how to take your story ahead.....that is great 👏....we would all love to see if your FF was picturised....it is amazing...

I kept checking all through the day if you updated and now suddenly when I received your PM I was sweetly surprised....thanks for the pm