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happygirl18

@happygirl18

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Posted: 14 years ago

#811

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

splendid work i must say!!!

this post completly makes up for the 3 days absence!

i loved the way maan talkd out his feelings

u r right, as a 29 yr old, d maturity is bound to reflect..

👏

dear plz take care of urself, hope u r perfectly fine!!

take care!!

😊😃

P.S. : ur today's update was litrally a bridge to bliss!!!!😆

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569360

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#812

hiii hasini.....

thank god u r safe...

sorry for ur car.......

take care of urself dear.............

ur updates have always been a visual treat to my imagination .........

the update was beyond description....

maan confessing his love..........was such a brilliant moment to be treasured.loved it

the best thing about ur FF...is strong characters......who are mature, practical and sensible.....

the love they feel for each other is not just attraction.............they have taken their own time to be absolutely sure of what they feel for each other something stronger than attraction..........

this shows that they are heading towards a mature relationship...rather companionship.....

thats what i call love........a fantastic portrayal of love thats realistic and alluring......

geet's hesitance and reluctance is understandable..........considering her disturbing past........

That moment, we were defining what we were to each other. It felt like I was waiting for this one instant in my life's entirety. It was the very reason of my existence.

i loved the above line.

Maan:"Main tumse kuch nahin chahta hoon Geet….Aur tumhare liye kuch bhi sawaal nahin hain mere paas…Aur zindagi ki is mode main, mein tumse kuch nahin mangoonga…Bas main sirf tumhare paas rehna chahta hoon….and I wanted you to know my true intentions."

I felt for him very deep. Mujse kuch nahin chahte hain? Bas mere saat chahte hain?.... I wondered how lonely he must have felt. How far away was he from any human bond that he had such simple requests?.....

these lines made my eyes go moist........they wer heartwrenching........

the concluding part was icing on the cake........as they truly captured the essence of a beautiful bond shared by the lead...........

there is something else i wanted to add in the previous update.but completely slipped out of my mind.....each and every character of ur ff.......has some beautiful message to give...

i particularly loved the dance teacher and pinky.....whose convo always wud make geet ponder over ..................

u have take care to sketch each character with utmost detail without any loose ends........which is laudable...

i think i m falling in love with the term hot chocolate.............which has become a rage by now amongst ur readers........

hats off to u dear...........

keep writing........

melody

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-pixie-

@-pixie-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#813

Nice...He just came out with it!

I liked it 👍🏼

But why is Geet hesitating now? I wasn't very clear on that...coz from the last couple of parts- I felt she was sitting in the driving seat of their relationship....and Maan's confession is sort of in reaction to her actions in the last part...don't you think?

He means the world to her, that is pretty obvious- she is not ready to commit or she is scared?

Please help!

as always great update!

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nisharoyce

@nisharoyce

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#814

oh my GOD haasini
that was too good
wish ur FF was playing on the channels
loved it, each & every word
first u said u were not well & was worried for u
but u have met with an accident omg haasini
please dont sit down writing the next part
i am in no hurry after all itne achea FF ke liye koye bhi wait karega
& that too this was a very long 1
definitely u should b in strain thinking & redoing before posting it
i m happy for maan & geet
luv u
nisha

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Shamima

@-shamima-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#815

First of all hope you get better soon 😊
Back to the ff I dint think I need to analyse this as I exiled normay do because there are no words to analyse this just a simple word 'beautiful' if I knew a better word than this than I would state but this is one of my fav chapters the way maan confessed his feelings was truely special and makes me long for someone to love me like him I've got no words to explain so I hope you understand just continue to write as you do, you are my fav writer because I haven't see anyone write like you if you published books I would buy them all and the poem was just the icing on the cake ( did you quote it or was it your own cause I want to know who was the writer to such a blissful poem) 😊

Edited by -shamima- - 14 years ago

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amara7374

@amara7374

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#816

awesome! GREAT PART, & such a long one.............THANKS 😃
hmnmmmmmmmmmmmmmm confession ho gaya 😳
& how r u now? r u ok?and sad 4 ur car,it broken down 😕
but hope that u r safe and sound...........
keep updating.............waiting 4 d next,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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shivangi783

@shivangi783

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#817

Hi Hasini

Sorry to hear about your accident but glad to know that you're fine😊

Car toh theek ho jaayegi.

As for the update, i really don't have words to justify this part.

I am just speechless. Its so beautifully written. Some parts in the update made my eyes go moist!

Maan's confession has been described so nicely. Geet's reluctance, her confusion is understandable. Love the strong portrayal of characters in this story.

I am still under the spell of this update. Really loved reading this.

Shivangi

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Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#818

really loved all ur parts especially 41 as geet accepted tht she loved maan not fully but hinted it so very happy bcoz this is one reason and other is yesterday;s episode
plz try and update next part soon