New FF: New York times with Maan and Geet

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blueopal

@blueopal

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#551

hey great update yaar.............nice cold war b/w maaneet....................

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#552

I think its time geet should offical take divorce.......plz plz

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nisharoyce

@nisharoyce

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Posted: 14 years ago

#553

Originally posted by: tanya_vi
I'm totally speechless at this moment..do you know what ???you always make me read your updates again & again..Not fair,huh..😉 Just kidding..loved the moments between Maan & Geet..

too good yaar really
your definitely going great keep writing long updates
accha lagtha hai
when i am reading you FF it is not just like i m reading it
i can actually hear them speak , hear those monologues
awesome
truly hatke
luve u
Nisha

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ursrithika

@ursrithika

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#554

it was really a good one...

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Gollums Precious

@OfTheHeart

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#555

awesome......i m speech less

i just loved it!!!!!!!!!!!

pls yaar... update ASAP

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Maria

@JRia

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#556

nice part

could u pls pm me when u update

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punjabi.princes

@punjabi.princes

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#557

great update! loved it.

con't soon!

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Shamima

@-shamima-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#558

Haha so now both are pushing the boundaries or probaly just tempted to see how far they can go subconsciously as towards the end of the meeting geet was feeling awkward so maybe she realized that she went to far as she doesn't know maans feelings towards her? And when maan took her to his house she considered it her home as she is comfortable in that enviroment and maybe closer to maan and when they fell asleep wound up in each other just proves that they can't avoid their destiny together an how they both rely on each other or find comfort in each other and it's uncontrollable like she loves his touch and smell and so does he but they try to avoid it and when she said she wished that she was awake when he picked her up and put her in bed she wanted to smell and him and enjoy the closeness so basically at the moment things are better of unsaid as she needs the realization and understanding of her feelings and ways great update as usual and continue soon 😊

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Navpreet

@dimpzz

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#559

hey hasini!
beautiful update!
luved d scene when they were giving d presentation...
LOL they seriously did cross d limit!
if geet thinks she is smart then maan is extra smart 😆
hehehehehe
n awwwwwww how sweet they slept off on one another
how sweeeeeeeeeet!
n he slept on d couch n made her sleep on d bed
hez such a sweety pie! :P
hehehehehe
luved d update!
hope d fight between them is overs oon!
can't wait to see them together!
update soon!

luv
Navpreet

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shivangi783

@shivangi783

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#560

Just read your reply to my post for comments on parts 28 and 29.

Hmmm, okays.

And for the comments, well, I think I can say on everyone's behalf that the story is really captivating. I personally like it because it doesn't seem a fiction, instead it appears to me as if I am reading some real story. The situations, the apprehensions shown, the behaviour-its all so real. One can easily relate to the characters here. One does go through circumstances like these and experience the same feelings as you describe in each of your update!

I must say you really go into the character while writing-the monologues are simply the best! Not just Maan and geet, but each character is so well defined!

Really appreciate you👏👏

And now I'l be reading Part 31 in some time.

Will be back again with the comments😛

Edited by shivangi783 - 14 years ago