New FF: New York times with Maan and Geet

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Manpreet

@Maneetkraze

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Posted: 14 years ago

#561

This was amazing! I really loved the part where they are presenting and unknowingly crossing their boundaries. Hopefully Geet and Maan will both realize their need for each other and will talk to sort out the things between them. Maybe Maan or Geet will cook breakfast for the other in the next update:)

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Shaheda

@Newdime

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Posted: 14 years ago

#562

It was a refresher of a breeze.👏 I think I'm enjoying your FF then the current track on the show. Looking forward to yours update everyday then the show. Sorry...but this is what i feel.🤔

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pushpi

@pushpi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#563

Its a good day: Good exam today and great update :-D More coming up later just for ya

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Antares

@Antares

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Posted: 14 years ago

#564

Brilliant! That was just soooooo good! Lolz.....both were trying to make each other lose.....ahaha.....war of egos.....me loved it! Oh, so MK was being Maan for sometime.....when he pulled her to him.....nice! Lolz. The apartment part was so cute......they know what they feel....but their ego is not letting them accept defeat.....am so eager to read the next update.....do continue soon.

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known

@mitzi11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#565

what say i'm speechless i hope they confess their to each other pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnn

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shivangi783

@shivangi783

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Posted: 14 years ago

#566

Comments for Part 31😊

Got late again while coming online, Diwali tomorrow,( actually today, since its 12.20am here, in India), Maasi came😊 And with her came my little angel sisters😊 I love them so much, younger one is soo cute!!

Gonna have lotta fun tomorrow( or today, to be precise )😛😆

Enough of my blabbering now😛

Anyhow, A Very Very Happy Diwali to you😊

Just read the update! Misunderstandings sorted out! Yay!!! 😊

Liked the conflicts between her thoughts as to make out what is Maan for her! That night playback was really required because what she said that night to him was said in total impulsiveness and later ego was taking prominence. So this was a crucial part. The way you depicted the entire thing was really nice, her thoughts reached out to me very clearly. And then jumping into the ice cold water. I really appreciate you for the amount of effort you take while thinking and writing! The analogy you used here to compare the significance/importance of Maan in Geet's life was too good!!!👏

Actually this not only helped her to understand her feelings better but also made Maan to speak to her😛

Loved the dialogues here! Awesome!!!

Liked this line a lot- 'I wasn't going to die before I find out what I had for him'or at the very least what he had for me'

Maan got the answer he was looking for, he knows that she's not interested in her past now but is now confused if he's her future!

I guess you referred Toronto as Dev, right? Liked this part too. And then Maan referring to himself as New York

I think Maan needs to give Geet a little time since it isn't easy for a girl who's has spent 5 long years of her life for a man who was least bothered about her. How can she trust any other man so easily? Yes, Maan has done a lot for her but then she needs to understand him better, needs to be secure and every individual has its own pace for realization of feelings even though they may seem obvious to others!

Edited by shivangi783 - 14 years ago

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maaneetfan123

@maaneetfan123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#567

Great update........will be waiting 4 ur next update continue soon😉

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Hetal

@ibelieveinpink

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Posted: 14 years ago

#568

Part 33: OMG!!! She compares his presence to sunshine on a cold winter day!! I love metaphors like that!! Thank you for that!!! Ok I can't believe you updated so quickly!!! If you were in front of me I would give you the biggest HUG ever!!! Well done Babe!!! A huge standing O for you!!!!

I love the back and forth between them, I mean it's in their heads, but the chemistry just clicks! I love how Geet calls him sadoo and Maan says he puts her above everything else...he's so romantic and full of passion!! Speaking of passion, can I get a glimpse of even a little passionate scene...and I mean full-fledge passion!! Ok...not now, but in the future...PLEASE!!! Just think about it!! Well, the wrist holding was a teensy bit passionate...but more on the aggressive side, but when she talked about his time at the gym....even i started picturing that...I was in a 15 minute trance...sexy MSK....and then he grabs her waist...her "narrow" waist....totally gone...only you can kill me like that!!😆

Her calling him MK...def pushed his buttons..just know it! But he wants to be there for her even though she doesn't want his help! I get her and I get she has trust issues, but still can't help myself for feeling for Maan!!

The on-going inner conflicts when both sit next to each other...I seriously get so annoyed with these 2...but it's still cute! One hand, geet misses him and then gets mad at him, and on the other hand, Maan...cutie pie...it scared to make a mistake!! I'm evil...I want him to make a "mistake"😉!!! BTW: Like the "vile thoughts" line...brilliant!!

The elevator scene...made my day!! And then all the physical tension between them was executed perfectly!! Geet thought he got Maan....but he's in a league of his own...totally 2 steps ahead of her!! Clutching her hand like that...so perfect!! And then Geet stroking his knee!!!😆 And then the master stroke..Maan feeling Geet's lower thigh....I need an ambulance!!

Ending was like a piece of heaven...both in each others arms...beautiful!! I love how she tries to catch a whiff of him from his blanket....every girl's dream come true!! Awwww!!! He didn't want to leave her and her heart was aching b/c she still wanted to be close too him!!! The start of their LS is nice though!!!

Boundaries: A very debatable topic!!! Obviously, there should be some, but having a office romance would be awkward...plus knowing you and your realistic style of writing and approach..it's still not the right time yet...and timing is key! I really liked the blurry lines aspect of their relationship...please play on more in the future!! I hope your FF goes on for a zillion parts b/c Love each and every words, line, and section!!! You should be a writer for real...you rock at it...if only i was gifted with a talent like yours!!!

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Hetal

@ibelieveinpink

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Posted: 14 years ago

#569

Also Hasini...HAPPY DIWALI babe!!! Have a fun, joyous, and prosperous Diwali!!! God bless!!!

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Nikky

@itsallabtGURTI

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Posted: 14 years ago

#570

Hasiniiiiii...

I dont know what more to write about your writing skills anymore.. I have run out of words for your talent now.. you keep surprising me with each and every update of yours.. Although i wasnt expecting all this to happen in this update.. but i was pleasantly surprised with both of their actions.. the way they kept teasing each other, saying things to each other.. it was very goooood... I am in loveeeeeeeeeee with your fiction... and i cant sleep until i read an update from you every day.. so dont ever delay.. because this is my daily dose of entertainment ... and the unique titles u give to each and every update raises our curiosity even more.. makes us wonder what is this gonna be about... love every bit of it..

I am loving your characterization of Maan and Geet in this fictional story and the more you write about them, the closer I feel to them... Last update - Hazy Boundaries was full of surprises for me.. I loved it to the maxxx... them getting a bit physical with each other was unexpected for me at this time but really really cute within that context.. i mean during the meeting - really... lol ... loved it fully.. i wish they showed something like this in the real show.. it would be awesomeeee...

the real show in my opinion is going through a weird phase right now and I am not liking it so much.. i feel its taking up a track which is not necessary at the moment and they can go about another track which is more significant to Geet's anger and Maan's ego... but hey i am not complaining as I am getting to read and be part of a story which is as excellent as the real show.. and its this lovely fan fiction..

Keep up the great work hun.. I am waiting for the next update.. so update soon..

PS - HAPPY DIWALI!

-Nikky

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