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Muskan

@muskanp

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+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#441

enjoyed it totally..thanxs a lot

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-pixie-

@-pixie-

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#442

Ha ha ha🤣

Loved the update👏!

Comedy of errors ho gaya😆....Will Yash and Geet phodo Maan and Meera's bhanda?

Can't wait for the next part

Just one input- I think you should bring more passion (we definitely saw that in this update with Geet getting jealous big time,.....I just loved it!)....not necessarily physical intimacy but passion coz thats a big part of who they are (on the show)...in that respect i find this Maan and Geet a bit different from the show...dunno if that was intentional....

But I love the story in any which way you may chose to dish it out...so feel free to ignore my random advice😊...

Edited by shradhav - 14 years ago

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aarthi

@Aarthi_01

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+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#443

project J is really working tho it was ment for Yash... Maan is also geeting his go on geet love it... i was literally laughing wile Geet was talking to babaji...

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#444

Awesome, hasini...

and i really think u should report that case of plagiarism. It is the worst form of stealing there is. Click "report" on that particular member's post or just pm the ff forum moderators.

Cheer up, sweety!

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Najmah

@Fallen-Angel

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#445

Rocking updates...am loving this ff, it's kool and different!!
Plz cont soon :))

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569360

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#446

i always love the J tracks.......

they simply make me happy ......

brilliant

keep writing

melody

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pushpi

@pushpi

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#447

Beautiful Hasini! I have a lot more to say and ask not will do so after I'm done with classes :-)

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docs

@docs

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Posted: 14 years ago

#448

enjoyed it a lot :) thanks for making them a lil diff from the show...

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Shamima

@-shamima-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#449

Woah those 3 updates just change everything I just love how you made them argue over a situation that both expected something different like geet wanted consolation but maan wanted her to overcome it and was hurt that sh still used debs name and then the smooth transition where they both played hard to get but geet was slowly cracking so she took care of him expecting basically they both have these expectations from each other that they think they don't need to state but just expect and now this chapter Woop you jut used one stone to target to 2 birds one meera is trying to get yash jealous but unknowingly getting out geets feeling and you done it so wonderfully that you know it just makes the whole story interesting and im eagerly waiting to read all 4's emotion at the situation infront of them and loving maan and meeras bonding or should I say "2 girlfriends chit chatin with each other" lool anyways I'm in love with this story and do continue soon 😃