New FF: New York times with Maan and Geet

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

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Posted: 14 years ago

#261

super a usual... n very awesome n cute part....

want more of MG

update soon

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#262

Hi....... I just read yesterday's updations....... Awesome parts i love all of dem....... Specially 20th.......

Edited by aditiwalia56 - 14 years ago

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blueopal

@blueopal

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#263

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wat a breakfast n lunch for maan...............really the preparation of both guys made me laugh harder😆................ but loved the maaneet bit................so they came closer day by day...........i loved the way u moving the story..............it was simply superbbbbbbbbbbbbbb👏

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kiran naryani

@kirannaryani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#264

wow that was really nice update cont soon dear

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love_lavnya

@love_lavnya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#265

Hey Hasini ,

thanks for the pm

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! awosomeeeeeeeeeeee update

wat a breakfast n lunch for maan...............

loved the maaneet bit................

so they came closer day by day........... I m egarly waiting when the come together

I realy loved the way u moving the story..............it was simply superbbbbbbbbbbbbbb👏

Hasini when r u going to update next...............cant wait...... 😕

plssssssssssssssssss update soon dear

love u

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shivangi783

@shivangi783

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#266

Lovely update.

I wonder why were you so unsure about this part.

I just loved it, infact I read it twice😳

Liked the whole of it-the preparation of the brunch, the hesitation between Maan-geet. I really liked how she covered her hands with flour and called out to him to ensure that he doesn't feel guilty and doesn't leave. Both have started to understand each other. Loving this phase. Actually this is the phase which is most important since this will be the foundation of their relationship. It should be as slow as possible so that they understand each other well, for this understanding will help them face difficulties in future, if any!

Please don't rush with their love, just make it slow and gradual as you're doing it now.

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569360

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Posted: 14 years ago

#267

such a beautiful update..........

words may fall short to describe these beautiful moments..........

breathtakingly beautiful and refreshing

plzz continue soon

melody

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Navpreet

@dimpzz

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#268

WOW!
it wz BEAUTIFUL!
ur updates r getting more n more intersting n bttr day by day
everyday i feel tat this wz d best ever update n when i read d nxt update m like NO WAY! this has to b d bst 1!
ur juz toooo gud!
really luved it laodz!
update sooon!

luv
Navpreet

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pushpi

@pushpi

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#269

That was a beautiful update :-) You had nothing to worry about our reactions. I loved how you differentiated in words that while Maan wasn't different from Yash or Meera. Its not the same but not that different either....hmmm btw did you have that part in bold by mistake or on purpose? :-)

Either way things are moving very well in the storyline. Kudos to you and keep writing👍🏼

Pushpi