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Posted: 14 years ago
so nice....after read ur each update...it feels like....finish with a very nice movie with good ending... a smile appears on face...a deep breath.....

thanks for the 3 update today...

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Posted: 14 years ago
gr8 updates....i really like ur ff...
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Posted: 14 years ago
I love how mature and sweet your story is :-) This is such a sweet innocent FF that I cant have enough of reading it. :-)
I hope you can update atleast one part or more everyday. Can you please please please PM me whenever you update?
-Pushpi-
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh nice.. u update really fast... 😊 there's something really sweet and endearing about ur story... 😳 and i really like ur writing style... 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey,

I really loved this update. 😳😳😳

House trouble – Geet is going through this phase in her life, it is almost like she is shedding the layers of her life that are not needed one after the other. Just like a Tornado twirls things around you, same with Geet, she is twirling round and round and is getting rid of things not needed and gaining things that are now needed in her life.

Maan in this FF is really a gentle, compassionate, caring and generous person. I love his personality in this FF and you have done a beautiful job in portraying his character. He knows how to help someone and at the same time not let them feel obligated.

Geet's journey – from Hosiyarpur – Toronto-New York – 10th floor – 24th floor amazing….her life is taking her where she is meant to be. 😉😉😉

Love Rachana
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 20: Awesome update.....
Hasini another wonderful update…I like this one a lot...'Flea Market'

I loved how Maan kept the blue crystal that Geet had won at the game….Cap ou pas cap….he was so anxious thinking he had lost the crystal…he thought he lost a part of Geet…that is she remained close to his heart…..

Geet's blue transparent crystal was just like her – transparent…you can read Geet through her eyes…

Maan's semi transparent crystal – just like Maan it was hard to look within it, you can see through it but it will take time to understand…

And later on that night on gym sit-out he gave Geet a tumbled rock 'A Quartz' – semi transparent…..I loved how Maan portrayed himself here with the rock symbolism. That semi transparent rock was Maan, it was just the way he was. It is hard to read Maan….this is how he has become due to his past experiences. He has masked himself through layers of emotions and now even he does not know where he stands….in terms of emotions. He has hidden himself behind multiple masks..whether it is fear, guilt, insecurities…etc..

Maan explains to Geet that his rock can be made transparent as Geet but right now it is just the way it….I believe Maan wanted Geet to accept him just the way he is in the present moment. I know Geet wants Maan to feel, enjoy, live life, talk more, smile more but Maan also knows that it will come with time, but at the same time there is fear within him that what if he is not able to meet up to her expectations meaning what if he can never be transparent.

In order for him to be transparent he will have to process his shadow self and then evolve into a transparent rock. And he would require a right person by his side to bring out that happiness, smile, life from within him. He will need a support system with him while he is going through this process.

Geet just hopes that Maan tries for himself for herself for the good of him.😳😳😳

Love

Rachana

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aarmanshilpa

Part 20: Awesome update.....
Hasini another wonderful update'I like this one a lot...'Flea Market'

I loved how Maan kept the blue crystal that Geet had won at the game'.Cap ou pas cap'.he was so anxious thinking he had lost the crystal'he thought he lost a part of Geet'that is she remained close to his heart'..

Geet's blue transparent crystal was just like her ' transparent'you can read Geet through her eyes'

Maan's semi transparent crystal ' just like Maan it was hard to look within it, you can see through it but it will take time to understand'

And later on that night on gym sit-out he gave Geet a tumbled rock 'A Quartz' ' semi transparent'..I loved how Maan portrayed himself here with the rock symbolism. That semi transparent rock was Maan, it was just the way he was. It is hard to read Maan'.this is how he has become due to his past experiences. He has masked himself through layers of emotions and now even he does not know where he stands'.in terms of emotions. He has hidden himself behind multiple masks..whether it is fear, guilt, insecurities'etc..

Maan explains to Geet that his rock can be made transparent as Geet but right now it is just the way it'.I believe Maan wanted Geet to accept him just the way he is in the present moment. I know Geet wants Maan to feel, enjoy, live life, talk more, smile more but Maan also knows that it will come with time, but at the same time there is fear within him that what if he is not able to meet up to her expectations meaning what if he can never be transparent.

In order for him to be transparent he will have to process his shadow self and then evolve into a transparent rock. And he would require a right person by his side to bring out that happiness, smile, life from within him. He will need a support system with him while he is going through this process.

Geet just hopes that Maan tries for himself for herself for the good of him.😳😳😳

Love

Rachana



This is just out of the world analysis...are you sure you don't work with Maan in Analytics?😉
The fact you have taken time to write such a long analysis is a true compliment in every sense...

I agree with you word by word...when you go through life as it happens....it just becomes difficult to identify yourselves and others...we go through such complex web of emotions...we dont know where one starts and ends...
According to my psych class, many people don't even know to name their emotions...and so I'm not surprised when people dont know to identify them and process them...
Maan is going though the same...He doesn't know what he is going through with Geet and the past will always be holding him back...casting a shadow of doubt in every step he takes towards her...
There are so many questions in his mind but no answers...lets wait and watch how the dialogue shapes between the two....

Anyways...that was some deep stuff...thanks again for your time...
Hope you can write many more...
-Hasini
Edited by Hasini67 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey thanx for pm...i love maan and geet frndship...
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Posted: 14 years ago
I completely agree with Rachna's analysis. Very well done. You got the nerve of the character and the update in one go! :-D That's fantastic and says a lot about you.
Hasini, are you a psych major? I'm a psych major too but I already graduated from undergrad in psych degree as well. The reason I ask is because the story and the depth of the character can only be given existence to if the writer has depth in their personality as well. As for identifying and following emotions, I've always felt this is easier when you're younger and have less responsibilities. For example, I strongly believe I understood myself and others better when I was in undergrad than now when I'm in graduate school. I'm pretty sure it has to do with the fact that I was studying psychology, was less stressed out, and the circumstances were different.
I hope Geet realizes what that quartz signifies for Maan....he's an anchor in her life (solid and stable) and she understands that Maan needs his own time and space to be as open to life, emotions, and the complexities that come along those two.
Cant wait to read more updates :-)

Originally posted by: Hasini67



This is just out of the world analysis...are you sure you don't work with Maan in Analytics?😉
The fact you have taken time to write such a long analysis is a true compliment in every sense...

I agree with you word by word...when you go through life as it happens....it just becomes difficult to identify yourselves and others...we go through such complex web of emotions...we dont know where one starts and ends...
According to my psych class, many people don't even know to name their emotions...and so I'm not surprised when people dont know to identify them and process them...
Maan is going though the same...He doesn't know what he is going through with Geet and the past will always be holding him back...casting a shadow of doubt in every step he takes towards her...
There are so many questions in his mind but no answers...lets wait and watch how the dialogue shapes between the two....

Anyways...that was some deep stuff...thanks again for your time...
Hope you can write many more...
-Hasini

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pushpi

Hasini,
No I do not work with Maan in Analytics. But can you imagine if I did work with him. WOW😳😳😳😳, a hot dude and I......aur kya chaiye life meih...LOLZ.....
I am studying social work rite now and studying human being's emotions is just a part of me, its almost as if I can read through their emotions. So in my spare time, I spend endless hours doing research on mind-body connections and how emotions affect us, cause symptoms, etc.etc....
I loved your FF....and loved the way it described Maan with rock symbolism...and since I am into tumbled gemstones/crystals as well, I cound not stop myself from writing about it.
Pushpi...in regards to understanding, identifying and following emotions....I beleive that for me atleast it comes with age and it comes when you are ready for the healing process to began. Its almost like, one day something happens, you go through something whether it is a small incident or a major trauma in life...and now you think differently, your awareness increases and you start to peel off your layers.
I also hope Geet realizes that she cannot force a change in Maan, in love you accept the person as who they are. Maan here has a mature character den Geet. I believe that Geet has just started her journey to become independent. She has to go through the process and learn to see the world with a much broader prespective. Life is not always what it looks like from the outside...you have to go through the depth to truly understand what it mean.
LOlz...too much of my writing .....shall rest now...
Love
Rachana
I completely agree with Rachna's analysis. Very well done. You got the nerve of the character and the update in one go! :-D That's fantastic and says a lot about you.
Hasini, are you a psych major? I'm a psych major too but I already graduated from undergrad in psych degree as well. The reason I ask is because the story and the depth of the character can only be given existence to if the writer has depth in their personality as well. As for identifying and following emotions, I've always felt this is easier when you're younger and have less responsibilities. For example, I strongly believe I understood myself and others better when I was in undergrad than now when I'm in graduate school. I'm pretty sure it has to do with the fact that I was studying psychology, was less stressed out, and the circumstances were different.
I hope Geet realizes what that quartz signifies for Maan....he's an anchor in her life (solid and stable) and she understands that Maan needs his own time and space to be as open to life, emotions, and the complexities that come along those two.
Cant wait to read more updates :-)

Edited by aarmanshilpa - 14 years ago

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