Love is a rainbow:SaJan ff Climax - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
its amazing dear
just love every scene
brilliantle written
sajan roxxxxxxxx
do continue sooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22

Love is a rainbow Part 3


Gunjan is reading in her room.
Roy comes:Gunjan!
G:Yes bro.
R:From London..
G;Gift from dad?
R:No.Letter.
G:He must be fed up of sending gifts.So he confined his love to a letter.
R:Nothing like that.
He gives the letter to her.She reads it.Her eyes have become wet.
G:There is a gift which a daughter expects from her father the most.
Maggie comes.Gunjan hugs her.
G:Aunty..my dad is returning from London.He is leaving London forever.I'm so excited.I have not felt happiness like this on my birthday before.His gift must be only a letter.But it contains a happy news..about my dad's arrival.
Maggie and Roy smile.

Roy closes Gunjan's eyes and brings her to the dining room.She opens her eyes only to see the decorated room with a cake with lit candles.She blows the candles while others sing the birthday song.Fernandus is drinking also.
F:What do you want as the birthday present?
G:You should not drink anymore.
F:What?
G:Now a days you are crossing your border.That makes Maggie aunty upset.
F:ok dear.I will try to stop drinking.
Everyone smiles.
Manu:Dad listens only to his dearest daughter.
Fernandus thinks:What will happen to us when Rishab takes her back?Can't think of living here without her.
Gunjan thinks:I longed for my dad's return.But i don't feel like going away from Uncle,aunty and my brothers.
Her eyes become wet.
Everyone feeds Gunjan cake.

Gunjan who is in the room thinks:I have never bothered to reply to my dad.I never showed any interest in talking to him on the phone.When he comes,how will i face him?

A car reaches Fernandus' compound.Rishab Bajaj gets out of the car.Bajaj and Fernandus hug each other.
B:My daughter...
Gunjan who was looking through the window comes out slowly.
Gunjan and Bajaj look at each other with tears.
B:Gunjan..
G:Dad...
B:Are you angry with your dad?I did a big mistake to you.But you were there in my mind always.I could'nt live there peacefully thinking about what i did to my daughter.God will not forgive me.Gunjan..your dad is back.Won't you forgive me?
Gunjan bursts into tears:Dad..please don't talk like this.
He embraces Gunjan.

Bajaj and Fernandus are in the room.
B:I can't express how peaceful am i when i am with my daughter.
F:I know.Gunjan is our daughter also.My sons' youngest sister.We can't think of parting her.So i request you..atleast for one more month please let her stay here.
B:But...
F:Please..
B:Ok.
Fernandus' eyes are wet.Gunjan who overhears it smiles with tears in her eyes.

Samrat and his friend Abhi see Gunjan coming out of the mall holding Bajaj's hands.
Gunjan stares at Samrat and goes away.
A:I think for money that anglo indian old man must have decided to get Gunjan married to that middle aged man.
Samrat is burning with anger:Stop it.
A:Why are you upset about Gunjan?

Gunjan is looking through the books in the library.
Samrat comes:Gunjan!
His tine is tough.That wonders Gunjan.
S:Is it true that your marriage is fixed?
G:Marriage?
Abhi comes:After seeing you with a middle aged man he has no peace of mind.
S:Abhi..you go.
A:Private talk?Ok.
Abhi goes away.
G:What is this Sam?I never expected you to stoop so low.
S:Gunjan..
G:Do you know who he is?He is my father.Dr.Rishab Bajaj.
S:Father?
G:He was in London.Now only he came back.
S:Then the people who were staying with you..?
G:Fernandus uncle is my dad's best friend.They only brought me up.But what did you say about my relationship with my dad?
She walks away with anger.
S:Hey..you did'nt take any book.
She looks back.
S:Why did you turn back?You crave to see me?
G:Craving to see you?You think you are that handsome?Nonsense!Tomorrow is my dad's birthday.
S:So you invited me home.
G:I did'nt say that you are invited.
She goes away.Samrat smiles.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
hey awsome update
loved it
but want more sajan sceens
even though the last sceen between them was awsome
Edited by hiiiiiiiiiii - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
awesome update
loved it
sajan r so cute
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
Wowww awesome update I totally loveee it lovee how sajan story is going enjoying der scenes u write so unique loved it do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
Wow awesome update part 3 so woww gunji's dad is back awesomeee bt gunji was happy n sad both coz she doesn't wanna leave her uncle bt yayy dey gonna be staying together for 1 month cool n den loveeee da sajan part bt plzzz make it more sajan do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
Wnderful updt yaar.jus too gud .lvly.
plz cnt wid nxt part soon n do pm me.
luv u
vritika
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
I just totally loved d whole thing esp Sammy getting agry!
he likes her so much already!!
cont soon!!:-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29

Aww!! Such a shona update!! I am in love with this FF now!

I loved the part when Samrat sang badly on purpose and then Gunjan discovered that he was a singer.

Eagerly waiting for Gunjan's birthday celebrations! =D

Regards,

Nidhi. =)

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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
wowwwwwwwww
awesome update..
love it
sajan r sooo cute
plz continue soon.....
thanks dear for the pm

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