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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ambbiha

beautifull update

i loved the change in geet but still she s innocent, i want her to open with maan 😳
continue soon



it will take some time for Geet to open up with Maan...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

hi sarah........

lovely update............
loved the nose kiss part.shooo cute......
and geet smiled........wow.......
plz plz give us a preview.i wont complain next time..😭😭😭



I am glad you enjoyed the update... the nose kiss was a last hour addition in fact the most of the romance scene was added later... and i will be posting a preview soon but it won't be of maneet though...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shining_moon

hey angel

dill khush kar diya yaar
such beautiful maaneet scene...........loved it
loved the way maan patiently waited for a kiss.......that was so adorable
their sweet romance was amazingly written
so finally geet felt some emotion............though safety but that was wat she needed at the initial phase so that her trust on her new family n spl maan increases
keep writing



Glad to know that i have made you so happy with my maneet scene.... that was just a trailer of how things are going to be with maneet in the future parts (meaning after part 20....)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -shamima-

This is one unique love story and I hope that maan and his family find out why geet behaves like this and how her family treated her and awe just love geets innocent just like a child who is unknown to the niceness in the world and haha meera and naintara part are really amusing their relationship is really sweet and awe the light romance between maaneet was executed brilliantly maans desire and love for his beautiful wife whose innocent wins him over and geets warmth to his action as she's unknown to recripocate these feelings but she is taking baby steps anyways great update and can't wait to see how the mudekhai goes 😊



I haven't yet sketched out the revelation scene of Geet's past which means that won't happen till a very long time.... they won't know the extent of the abuse Geet suffered for very long.... for now the next few parts will focus on Geet's past life, which will have explicit description of the abuse Geet suffered..... then I will move to focusing on Geet's relationship with her new family, how she will bloom under NT tutelage, Maan's care, Abhi's childishness and Myra's experiments....

Muh-dikhai is going to be very dramatic.... well.... it will have a very dramatic painful end... I wonder how you all will take the next few parts, which are filled with revelations, mysteries and new entries....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: hindu4lyf


@bold: I noticed that too! I think it's been done purposely and isn't a mistake but I'm not sure.
Doesn't anyone at KC find it weird that they haven't heard their badi bahu speak yet? I promise this question will be answered just be patient with me...

Lovely update! I was looking forward to what Maan had in mind but then the bit you added at the end of your last update makes me think that maybe what I want won't happen so soon. :( Sorry, but you are right things won't exactly go the way Maan had planned... he and NT are in for big shock....

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Starry_night

That was just WOW!!! The way NT cares for Geet.....it's heart-warming.....she appears strict and stern at times....even blunt.....but is really good at heart. Maan-Geet moments......superb!!! Geet is getting comfortable now.....she even smiled....and that tie and pecking bit.....it was so innocent and cute.....it was plain awesome! How she thanked him silently and Maan was totally stunned seeing her like that....lolz....could not even tie his tie properly.....it was great! All in all a wonderful update! Do continue soon.



Thank you for the wonderful comments... I am glad you enjoying NT's character in this ff, it is very close to my heart....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: divareena

lovely update👏.

I love naintara she is so lovely by the way she looks after geet. She reminded geet of her mum, so touching.👏👏👏
I don't like Myra, i have a feeling she is going to cause trouble.😡
Love the way you descirbed the scene between maan and geet and her calling him pati and it was so sweet when he said my beautiful wife. 😍



Myra won't be causing any trouble... she is basically going to be the cupid for maneet's love story..... 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: angelmm

nice update

atlease she feels safe with thim 😊



It's a start...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sakadafi

"Maybe he just doesn't know how to treat women'. that would explain his strange behavior'. " aww...I feel so sad about how little Geet knows about the world...the poor girl expecting being reprimanded at each step... Though am really happy she's starting to feel 'safe' in Maan's company 😊


It's funny how the two of them are at My Wife and Pati...very cute...

That was a great update!!! Waiting for more 😊



Yes, Geet knows little to nothing about the world....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Viji79

A very different but enjoyable FF. Wonder Maan's reactionw hen he will know about how Geet had been treated in her Maayka



I think he will go into a murder mood.... I am yet to sketch that part of the story....

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