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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
very nice
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82

hiiiii

awesome update
loved it
hate manav
poor gunjan
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83

Sorry to be a party pooper here guys.

To be honest I'm not quite sure what the rules on actors in FFs are, especially considering the Geet team visit the forum regularly and our No discussing personal lives policy.
I am locking this thread until I can get a final answer from other members of the DT.😊
Regards,
Geet Dev Team
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
i feel sad for Gunjan poor lady but i think Manav will fall for her soon inshallah nice part
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
Manav runs to Gunjan:Gunjan,pack your luggages.We are going to Shimla now.
G:Shimla..?Now?
M:Yes.Soniya and Swayam are going to Shimla for two days.A business trip.We need to stay in the hotel they stay.Let Soniya see that i'm not alone.
Gunjan thinks:Even a tour is planned to make Soniya jealous.manav is always thinking of Soniya.

Manav and Gunjan stay in the hotel Soniya and Swayam stay.
Morning...
Gunjan is sleeping.Manav goes out.Soniya is also on her walk on their hotel compound.
Manav and Soniya bump into each other.Soniya is surprised.
Soniya is surprised:Manav!
M:Hi Soniya.
S:You are alone?
M:No,i came with my wife here.
Soniya's face becomes dull.
M:To have our honeymoon.
S:Honeymoon?So late?
M:Actually because of my busy schedule i did'nt get time to go for honeymoon.
S:Why did'nt you go abroad for honeymoon?
M:I wanted to go abroad.But Gunjan loves Shimla.She wants to spend time here.
S:Oh!Good.
Manav observes her cute face.Soniya understands that.
S:What happened Manav?
M:Are you coming with me for a walk?
Suddenly she sees Swayam watching them.
Soniya smiles:Have a nice time.Enjoy.Bye.
Soniya goes to Swayam.Manav becomes dull when she rushes to Swayam avoiding him.
Sw:How come Manav here?What were you discussing with Manav?
S:Manav and his wife have come here for honeymoon.He was just telling me that.
Sw:Honeymoon?So funny.His business is going well.A successful business man like Manav having honeymoon in Shimla?He is rich enough to go abroad.

Manav and Gunjan walk on the snow.Gunjan shivers.Manav removes his coat and gives it to her.
G:No thanks.You will feel cold.
M:Don't think about me.I'm used to this climate.I keep coming here for meetings and all.So it will not affect me.But you need it now.
Gunjan hesitates to take it.Manav makes her wear it with his hand.Gunjan's eyes roll at him.
Soniya sees it and gets jealous.Swayam comes to her:Honey..let's do skating.
S:Sure.
Swayam and Soniya skat on the snow.
When Soniya gets tired she sits on the snow.Swayam continues skating with full energy.Soniya watches many couples passing by with a smile.Manav sees Soniya sitting on the snow.He smiles.
He thinks:Soniya looks so cute.
He puts his arms around Gunjan's shoulders.Gunjan looks at him with surprise.
M:Soniya..
Gunjan sees Soniya.
Manav and Gunjan walk like a romantic couple.
Soniya sees them and becomes jealous.
Soniya thinks:Manav is my past.Swayam is my present.Then why i feel bad when i see him with Gunjan?
Manav whispers to Gunjan's ears:Soniya is jealous of you now.Look at her face.
Gunjan looks at Soniya.Soniya bends her face.
M:Seeing me whispering to your ears,she must have thought that i'm trying to be naughty with you.
He grins.

Gunjan in her room..
She thinks:Yes,Soniya is feeling bad when she sees me with Manav.She seems to be very upset.I have to tell her that there is no relation between me and Manav.
Gunjan knocks at Soniya's room.She opens the door.
S:Gunjan?Come inside.
Gunjan goes inside.
S:What's the matter Gunjan?
G:I came here to discuss an important matter with you.
Soniya looks at her curiously.
G:Are you happy with Swayam?
Soniya is shocked.
S:What are you asking?
G:I feel that you are not happy with him.
S:Nothing like that.I'm very happy with him.
G:Don't you feel bad when you see me with Manav?
Soniya is shocked.
She thinks:How did Gunjan understand it?
S:So this is your problem?You suspect whether i'm seeing Manav now also.You feel insecure.Right?
G:Soniya...what i want to tell you is...
Soniya becomes rough in her tone:Then please Mrs.Gunjan Manav Garewal..let me tell you that i'm very happy with Swayam and i don't regret breaking up with Manav.I'm not interested in your husband.So you please leave the room.
G:Soniya..
S:Please..
Gunjan leaves the room disappointed.
Gunjan thinks:soniya overeacted.She misunderstood me.The way she reacted proves that she is missing Manav very badly.She got angry as i found out her feelings for Manav.
Soniya thinks:I think i overreacted.I should not have talked like that to Gunjan.

Night..
Somebody knocks Soniya's door.She opens the door.That is Swayam.
S:Swayam!Why are you here now?It's almost midnight.
Sw:I missed you.
Swayam goes inside and locks the door.
Soniya is shocked.
S:Why did you lock the door?
He smiles in a naughty way and puts his arm on her shoulder.She is shocked.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
nice update... am really hating manav now... poor gunjan.. whts between swayam and soniya?? do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
God why he is doing this thing to her am realy heat him now no love for him for breaking her heart and thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
feel so bad for gunajn...manav is so 😔
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
hiiiiii
awesome update
loved it
really hate that manav
cant wait 2 read more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
hey nice update dear............

really feel bad for gunjan n manav 😔 is he really have any sense...............

n soniya get shocked with his husband why ???????????????

whether she married or not really i'm confused.................

looking fwd..............update sooooooooooon,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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