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valliyah

@valliyah

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#611

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its beautiful Fizu...mayur's complete track in just 1 OS...hate, friends, love, to soulmate u portrayed all so flawlessly yet effortlessly...hats off to dear...Sayank were great 😆...sam indeed played decorator n patch-up soul to mayur 😆...bechara can't help but to help his sadu friend everytime he is in mess...n the romance i mean the K- series of Fari ☺️😳...Fizu u naughty girl 😳...aaj kal yeh inspiration kaha se aarahe hai madam😆...!

@ Fari control oye yeh ho kya raha hai...khullam khulla sabko aise KKK derahi ho 😳...aur Maha ki to nikal padhi...mehnat Fiza se karwayi aur KK Maha legayi 🤣...bohat na-insaafi hai 😳 🤣...!

Edited by valliyah - 13 years ago

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Gul

@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#612

wao dear it was really so hilarious amazing and cute

mayank and fizza conversation is so funny

i love it and thoroughly enjoyed

thanks for pm

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#613

That ws a sweetest os fiza ji...
I cudnt help but smiling throughout the whole part...it ws sooo cute nd love filled...
Most of all i loved the realization of mayank...the way u portray mayank's feelings for nupur ws beyond beautiful...how his jhaasi ki rani entirely changed his life in one go...and he surely loves being changed...
The whole ruthna-manana process ws cuteee...
Loved this...

ps: sorry sorry for making u wait for my cmnt...aisa dobara nahi karongi oki...now smile...😃

Edited by Auroni.92 - 13 years ago

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daniella

@daniella05

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#614

lovely os!

really sweet and romantic❤️

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drmaha

@drmaha

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#615

Originally posted by: -Faria-
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maha thank u so much..lol lol
fiza dont give me angry look . i know u wrote dis OS. but maha requested u to write thisos na. so 80% credit goes to maha...lol lol
love u maha...

hehehehehehelove u too fiza..series of kk foe u...

accha now coming to ur OS...

mayank sharma the heart throb of college and too much attitude person fall in love with a bubbly and filmy girl nupur bhushan...hayeee ye haim mere nups ka jalwa -jis par mayu hain diwana.. awww i loved mayu when he said she comleted his whole world-sooo sweet...

hehehehe sam- maynk convo was hilarious...

awww their convo reminded me mayurs weeding, their weeding night at college-ahh i missmy mayur jaanu..

so sayank had decorated mayur's house just to impress jahnsi ki rani nus kumari- wah wah wah
bcoz itwas their 1oth anniversary and mayu forgt dis special day...so as usual she was angry on maynk...mayu was chereshing their golden days like their fight, challenge,academic meet, talent parade and so on.
i loved ur flashback part...haye christina, angelina- hehehehehe nups was so jealous na. and mayu the great sadu technically made her jealous by creating this fictional story...lol lol lol

haye nups was pregnant - and that why mayank has to jhelofy her mood swing
ahem hem they kissed so deeply...haye- maha tu yehi chati thi na..lol lol- tumhe kiss mil gayi- i hope u r happy now..

btw i loved their cute moment and sweet talk
wo baat alag hai ki pregnancy ki news de kar fiza romance thoda kam kar liya... but still it was mind blowing and fabulous

fizuuu i really loved this os
tahnk u again for writing such a cute and nice os for us...
muahhh..lol lol- dont worry it was F.K...lol

dont worry faria i can understand ur condition...🤣🤣

pls control faria...😆😆😆😆

fiza made this os really special... it was awsome... 👏👏🤗

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nerdndproud

@nerdndproud

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#616

sorry for being late...actually my computer was not working...
ECSTASY, THE MOMENT
so romantic...😳😳😳😳...aisa eidi agar mile toh main har roj eid mana neko tayar hoon...😆
being in love
finally got a fizaish Os...iske bare main kya kahu.i enjoyed every part...actually every word of this ff...loved it...aur aise hi likhte rehna...haye...

Edited by ridi_onasis - 13 years ago

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#617

OMG Fiza dii...such a cute OS...every line was making me do awww..😳...it brought back a lot of memories of MJHT...god i really miss it 😔..anyways, coming back to the OS, i so damnly loved it to the core..❤️..totally rocking haan..👍🏼..the dialogues were just too good...pure hilarious😆...plus the little conversation of u n mayank...hehe i was like 'yeh kaha se aa gayi' :P...then mayank threatened that he'll quit ur FFs if u show the flashback...OMG i was rofling..🤣...ok so the flashback...umm it was just mayurish❤️...loved it loved it loved it.to the core..❤️..the best parts were the sayank convo at the beginning and mayur moment at the end..⭐️...samrat's dialogue abt him being a decorator was soo funny...i cudn't stop laughing..😆..n the mayur moment...aww mayank cares for nupur sooo much...they celebrated 10 years of togetherness..❤️❤️..hayyee dreamy..😍..all in all, everything's just perfect and flawless...u r a superb writer dii...every time u make ur readers laugh with the dialogues...n the way u write is tooo adorable...everything is just awesome...keep it up...👏👏

love
bidushy❤️

P.S.- A masti n romance full OS for me next time and that too soon...plz😳..

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 13 years ago

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_ArTi4ever_

@_ArTi4ever_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#618

u just made my day with the os dear...all the memories related to mayur got refreshed n revised all over again...heavenly os...beautifully narrated...sooo romantic n intense at the same time...loved the mayur parts to bits...😳 do come up with such os even in future ok?

Edited by palz_ArTi4ever - 13 years ago

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#619

hello fiza jee- ur dead line yaad haina??
i want my OS on SUNDAY- any how and at any cost
waiting for it...
pher i will read ur mail and will give my valuable opinion..- tan ta na..lol lol